I Will Keep Working Hard Until I Become a Gentleman

Xiang Fei has always been purely cultivating and getting stronger. Since he has this character, he must maintain the readers who are attracted by this pure character. At first, the red thread could regulate Xiang Fei's unlimited cultivation, which was barely acceptable. Now even the life trials have become mandatory with the red thread. Is this going to break the character and use the emotional line? ? ? There is no need for the author to impose a woman, besides, it is still at a critical stage when the war is still going on and the woman continues to grow stronger.

When a person goes through a tribulation, he insists on forcing a woman in. He forces her in, takes her with her, and throws her into the street.

Author, why did you write so much and still make it so unsatisfying? Just go ahead and do it when you kill Fatty Dong and the three of them. Why do you keep listening to the old man beeping all the time? It's so verbose. And I really don't think the protagonist is very powerful. I have integrated the four attributes of physique, reaction, perception, and spirit in the early stage. The protagonist has attribute points. Do you know the barrel effect? ​​The physique is already 15 points, the reaction is only 6 points, and the perception is 9 points. The whole protagonist is as if he is invincible at the same level, so you can't directly repair your own leaky barrel. Also, your level settings are really hard to describe. Forget it from high to low, but your lowest level is 19. Isn't it too outrageous? Wouldn't it be more comfortable to just make it 1? Not to mention the red line. You have written the protagonist as a person who only knows how to practice. Why? What's wrong with the whole female supporting role, and the portrayal was a failure? You didn't write her well from the first appearance. The protagonist had just solved the vampire in the first appearance. When you wrote it, you could feel that she was obviously not the same type of person as Pig's Foot. You told me that they became conjoined twins later. Don't you feel weird?

But what did you do with the poop? If you are good at writing this and can write it well, or if you write this to increase the number of readers, then that's fine. After Chapter 90, this woman has been written in a poisonous way by you, and even ethical jokes have appeared? Is it interesting? Did you come up with this shit-feeding plot by just snapping your ass?

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Trial of Life. It's just like what we often see in the dung genre. Regardless of whether it's science fiction, fantasy, urban history, dung dramas are all surprisingly similar. No matter how good the writing is at the beginning, love will be added in the back, which has nothing to do with the main plot.

What do you mean by having to bring a woman with you? Why bring a woman with you for an advanced mission? Persist in? Hehe

Hay ➖, the battle would have been fun, but the native protagonist in front of you could tolerate it even though he was stupid, and your disgusting emotional drama could barely be tolerated. The trial that has been laid out for so long should be a small climax. You also have to bring a female character with a messed up portrayal into the trial, and you also have to call the protagonist who lost her mother since childhood. Do you think it is humorous? You two-time apes are really disgusting.

This red line is a bit annoying. He also messes around with the male protagonist's stuff. When I post the female lead, I don't see anything substantial posted, so she just keeps making trouble. She's like a word count tool. The author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, so she just skips them.

The writing is too long-winded. I originally wanted to add some invincible writing, but the progress is still so slow. The villain has a lot of verbal jokes, and the protagonist has no emotional intelligence. Too watery.

I don't understand, it's well written, why add a woman? The author also said that the test was a test. Why, the author wrote the novel as a joke. His own life was not a test enough 😅

As a bookworm for more than ten years, this book is not a simple white text. Although it is a cool novel, the writing style is very good, the emotional portrayal is also very reasonable, and the world view is grand and logical. It's an excellent novel.

What does it mean to have more or nothing? Do you want readers on both sides to take it all?

This red line is a bit disgusting, and it sticks up for no reason after just a few appearances. I really want to ask a question, you are the best in the world. In the end, he chose a good-for-nothing girl? Breaks when touched? At least for now, this woman has no fighting power, so she got one for no reason? Also increase the number of appearances?

Good books, faith and perseverance

The combat power system is not rigorous. Why didn't you give a classification of world combat power when the concept of life trial was proposed? Now we know that the smaller the number, the more powerful it is, so don't use level and just use level. It is obvious that level 19 is not as good as level 16. It is a bit awkward that level 19 is not as good as level 16. The sense of expectation of using numbers to directly improve the realm is gone. Even if you have a numerical level like Douluo, you will give a name to each major stage. You don't see this realm system.

If I hadn't read other reviews, I would have quit after reading the first 1-2 chapters.

Worth watching The protagonist is very perceptive and can see the big picture at a very young age Living in an environment where tomorrow or accidents don't know which one will come first

There is no heroine if I do it well. I don't want to see myself becoming the emperor and then having my cultivation level divided by half of it for someone like Sister Hong who is incompetent. Some will turn into another kind, working hard for a long time to cheat the protagonist, killing all kinds of enemies. Depending on the identity of the female protagonist, everyone can compare with the cultivation of the cheating male protagonist. All of the above are ugly

The first chapter has the flavor of AI, so watch with caution

At the end of the first chapter, it can be seen that the author wanted to create an epic feel, but there was no plot linkage at all. Overdraw readers' expectations in advance. It's better to delete it and start the first post to persuade it to be dismissed. How can new readers read it?

There are shadows of Ignite Steel Soul, neither good nor literate, the protagonist kills decisively, does not overwhelm combat power, adds a bit of invincibility, and has a clear main line. I don't know why so many people complain about Red Line, even though it doesn't have much of a role 😅

To write a character like the protagonist that makes you feel good, you have to be reckless to the end. You have to level up quickly, take revenge overnight, be unexpected, and have your enemies die without even thinking about it. Only then can you feel good. I think the protagonist is very passive. If the protagonist's halo had not died long ago, he would have been beaten up by a group or ambushed. This kind of character has to be imitated by Baili Qingfeng. There are always unscrupulous people who want to harm me and strike first.

The existence of the Judgment House is too outrageous. The elder families in a small place are of different races, and the local ruling office sets out collectively. The other elder families just huddled up to watch the show. Is the author serious? None of the other elder families did anything to clear themselves of suspicion! ! ! It's strange that other families didn't help the Meng family to cover up the elders in the same place. So how can other elder families prove their innocence?

What is the role of the heroine in the title?

The transition of the plot is stable. The protagonist's skills are multiplied to accelerate his cultivation. It is not the kind of getting something for nothing. The added attributes are like cannibalism. He obtains the life essence of the other party before death and then transforms it. What moved me the most is actually the author's chapter notice. It is very sincere.

The writing is great. Some readers think it is not good to add a red thread to the female protagonist in the trial, but I feel that this plot fleshes out the male protagonist and makes it more concrete and vivid. Come on, author, I look forward to the day when you become a great master.

I am slowly getting better. I see that the number of people is slowly increasing, and there are more comments in the comment area. Come on, author, keep persevering.

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Good book, firm belief, smooth writing👍👏

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