Fairy? That's My Doppelganger!

Appreciation of a 20-year-old bookworm The subject matter is novel, the writing is okay, and the plot Easter egg foreshadowing is average. The characterization needs more effort, and the battle description needs more effort. In fact, the author is an honest person 🤭. Why do many great and old authors have long and good-looking articles because of the water? But their brilliance lies in the detailed description, such as describing a book. A dragon, an honest person writes about a golden dragon, an old sailor or even a water god writes about a dragon that sees its head but disappears, swallows clouds, spits out mist, and has five claws, dragon balls, and a lot of vivid descriptions. This kind of water is suitable for both authors and readers. I remember there is a writing assistant software that generates words and paragraphs. The author can search, simply input the desired battle scene, and then a vivid battle paragraph will be produced, and the author can modify it and apply it. Creation is not easy. Come on, author, and persevere! I have subscribed and this book is very enjoyable. Good looking, recommended. Also, the Chen Yu realm of Tianlinggen is too slow. It is at least two realms away from Chen Yang to find it interesting.

Author's update, I've been waiting for a fucking year, but you haven't updated yet.

I've been waiting for the author to update for a year, but you haven't updated yet.

Why do I feel like I am a female cultivator? The realm of cultivation is all abbreviated. It seems empty, how to break through, no insights, experiences, or changes. I have established the foundation without knowing it. Emphasis on narrative, interpersonal relationships, emotions, and realm cultivation methods are all foils. Originally, wouldn't it be a great point to achieve a breakthrough in cultivating immortals? It feels weird to write it like this 😅

Young man, I see that your thinking is clear and your writing is concise. You are a unique book-writing wizard! I leave my dream of becoming a god in one book to you.

The beginning is quite interesting. I thought the author would describe Chen Rui as a selfish villain. I didn't expect that. Just this one twist is much better than the beginning of a bunch of third-rate novels.

Is there any male author who can write about this kind of subject matter? The subject matter is really good, but I can't see any scheming and thinking in this book written by a female author. It's too relaxed. It's like playing a game and you can guess what will be written later.

Take care of your husband, stop being a eunuch, men must rise up!

Are they Japanese? I want to see Japanese ones.

To be honest, it is difficult for female authors to scratch the itch of male readers. Many things that seem to be refreshing are actually poisonous. For example, I just saw the protagonist being despised by a group of people in class. My sister came to cheer up and said that she would give everything to the protagonist. The protagonist looked at the envious eyes of others and felt secretly happy... Not sisters.

Why do I feel like this book smells like female porn? Most of them are daily routines, which are getting more and more ugly. Is this about chapter 108?

The subject matter is very good, I like it very much, but the writing style is that of a female channel. It is not focused on falling in love, which is good, but the wordiness in the story is limited in every aspect, and it is not as domineering and smooth as the male channel Xiu Xian. Thinking too much makes the male lead's performance too immature, which makes me feel uncomfortable watching it.

The new book is a light-hearted novel about immortals and heroes. I don't have much knowledge and I can't write serious things. If you come to read my book, it's mainly for fun! If you have any suggestions, you can speak actively. I will reply after seeing them.

The protagonist is male and the doppelgänger is female, so wouldn't the protagonist be able to entertain himself?

I don't know anyone who has watched Extraordinary Twins

I went to school for a week and found Chapter 14 when I came back. It was so exciting! 😍😍

It's normal to have problems with the character creation of the protagonist. Everyone writes what they want but mistakes in handling the details make it difficult to express the character of the character. In this case, it's better to change the plot and the words without affecting your outline But if you're good, you've learned how to delete comments first, right? I don't understand, that It is a fact that local protagonists feel contrived. Even if you delete the comment, some people will still think it is contrived. Your problem has not been solved at all. Shouldn't you try to improve it and make your writing better so that more people like it (this is not a problem of character setting, it is just that the shaping is not in place and the conflict is not big). Isn't that bad? Just covering your mouth is fine. (Of course, if the writing style is improved and the portrayal is better, my comment will be deleted. I believe it will be better if the author does not directly write out what he thinks and pays more attention to the details in the future.) ps: Please read this comment. In short, it is a reminder that it is best to pay attention to details when creating characters, whether it is dark and cold, positive or uplifting, noisy and deliberately long and affectionate dialogues, there will be problems, and then delete it.

The introduction looks good and the writing is okay. However, in Chapter 5, he was defeated and even though he knew there was an enemy to destroy the clan, he was reluctant to change his name even after a year. A miser suddenly invites you to dinner and offers to introduce you to a few other people, and the protagonist still agrees?

You two are really model eunuchs.

The empress has entered the palace to serve the emperor.

Learned at your fingertips, start eunuch 😵

It's like finding out there's poop in the middle of a meal