Return to the Small Mountain Village in 1986

It's more to my liking, rebirth of daily writing, and it doesn't have a big golden finger. At present, it seems that he is just physically stronger than ordinary people. But we must pay attention to the rationality of the strength system. Sometimes one person fights a group, and sometimes two people fight for a long time. One against three is not enough in the mountains, but one against eight is here. I find that female authors have an advantage in writing emotional lines, which are subtle and not childish. And the writing style of female authors is generally guaranteed. The situation of the original family in this book is relatively complicated and there is less warmth. It may be difficult for today's only children to understand it.

The main character needs a camera so he can take photos as a souvenir. I really envy those who have taken photos since childhood. I only took a few mug shots when I was in junior high school. Most of the photos after that are of adults.

First of all, I want to apologize. I saw this book on another platform. I like the subject matter very much, but I really can't bear the quantification in the book, so I came here to tell the author about it. I'm sorry 🙏 There are many money-related scenes but there are no No matter how "exciting" you describe the plots of sales, profits, and giving money when there are any numbers, it is difficult for readers to have emotional fluctuations ~ let alone feel any "refreshment"... Give an example of a quantitative scene: [On New Year's Eve, Gao Mingcheng sent a red envelope to the younger sister] ① The younger sister was too embarrassed to accept it. She was studying and helping in her brother's and sister-in-law's shop. Her brother and sister-in-law would give her 50 yuan every month, although she was basically ignored. Her mother took it away, leaving only 10 yuan for her as pocket money, but she was too embarrassed to take the second brother's red envelope again... Gao Mingcheng looked at her and said with a smile: "Take it quickly, as long as you are a child, you can receive the red envelope. When you grow up and get married, the second brother will not give it to you." The little girl happily took the red envelope and felt the thickness of the red envelope. She was so excited that she wanted to put down her chopsticks and open it immediately to take a look. After a long time, the New Year's Eve dinner was almost done. She quickly ran to the kitchen. The pot was still boiling water. She quickly sat in front of the stove, and with the light of the firewood, she couldn't wait to open the food for her second brother. Her eyes gradually brightened. One red envelope inside was 50 yuan, three were 10 yuan, and four were two yuan, a total of 88 yuan. The largest red envelope she received during the Chinese New Year in the past was only 5 yuan... Beside the stove, she didn't know whether she was excited because she received such a big red envelope for the first time, or because it was roasted by the hot firewood. At this time, the girl's face was flushed. , Quickly took out the 50-dollar bill and hid it under her body, stood up and shouted: "Mom, the water is boiling"... ② The younger sister was too embarrassed to accept it. She helped her brother and sister-in-law in the shop, and her brother-in-law would also pay her monthly salary. Her mother would take most of it away every time she came home... Gao Mingcheng smiled and handed it to her and told her to collect it quickly. Next... After eating the New Year's Eve dinner, the younger sister opened the red envelope given by her second brother. She was pleasantly surprised when she saw the money in the red envelope. It was larger than the red envelope her father gave every year. The younger sister quickly collected the red envelope and her face turned red; ③ The younger sister happily accepted the red envelope and said happily: "Thank you, second brother." End~ It would be a pity if you really put more effort into quantifying the daily articles you write... Even if you don't know the price of the key items, you must at least reflect the "total number". For example, when you go to Yangcheng to sell goods, it doesn't matter if you don't know the unit price of an item, but you have to explain how much you bought and how much you earned this time! How much money do you have on you in total? Etc. It is a daily article in itself. Readers who like this type of writing will not say that you are stupid, but "quantification" corresponds to "coolness"! ! In the novel, making money is more fun, and spending money is also more fun! In historical texts, when spending money, you should reflect "this money is valuable", it will be very enjoyable! Ignoring quantification, although the difficulty in the writing process is reduced, the "refreshment and comfort" are missing. Price can be found by spending some time. To put it bluntly: it doesn't matter if you look at other works and refer to key prices. As long as the deviation is not outrageous, it is not considered a poisonous point. Moreover, quantitative work does not only refer to "prices". For example, the example of the red envelope scene I gave earlier does not involve prices, but involves "cooling points". Everyday writing is already very "bland". If you voluntarily give up this natural "refreshing point", it will be difficult to attract people and readers will not have a "sense of gain"~ Come on~

The protagonist is like a tamed hound. He licks too much, and his family doesn't want to see him, nor does he live there. Every time he catches prey and buys things, they are all delivered to his home. Give him a little attention and his tail will start wagging. The author probably has Stockholm Syndrome and unknowingly wrote about the protagonist.

Is it the protagonist or the one who is reborn? I won't mention it before rebirth. There are always such stupid or foolish people, but after rebirth, knowing everything, they still want to ask family members why they treat their wife badly. Does this thing need a reason? The protagonist is not taken seriously at home, and your wife will definitely follow suit, so if I were rich, I would move out and live separately. This kind of parents can just give money every month, and I don't care about anything else. I just live well on my own. After reading nine chapters, the protagonist actually has no plans to separate and live alone in the future. I feel that the protagonist is a bit stupid and a virgin.

No wonder there are so many orphans in Qidian. Your book is all about family members, which disgusts me. Wouldn't it be better to write about an orphan, leading his wife to a better life?

In that era of scarcity of supplies, most close relatives in the countryside got along with each other in a bumpy way. Not many could live in complete harmony. Those who could see each other without saying a word or turning a blind eye were extremely rare. Only a few strange families could get along with each other like enemies. My father also has many brothers and sisters, and several families live next to each other. When I was a child, my mother often quarreled with several aunts. One day it was a date tree in front of the door, the next day it was a few feet of vegetable soil, the day after tomorrow it was a wall, etc. There was never any quiet time, and my father and his brothers were not in harmony. However, no matter how the quarrel went, even if they swore not to have any contact with each other until they died, after a period of time they could borrow farm tools and grain from each other, and then they would go back and forth in the quarrel and reconciliation. As a younger generation, we have never been affected by friction between adults. We can go to whose house we want to go at any time and eat at whose house we want. Adults will not anger children because of quarrels. Of course, in today's increasingly urbanized and technologically advanced world, where there are more and more people with low heads, due to differences in space, time, and cognition, the bonds between relatives are becoming less and less, and the existing barriers are getting deeper and deeper, becoming more and more difficult to resolve. The younger generation is becoming more and more indifferent to each other, and young people are becoming more and more likely to go to extremes. From the increasing number of weird comments and online violence on the Internet, we can see that there is a lot of violence around us, so let's do it and cherish it.

He had conflicts with his family from the beginning. His parents didn't want to see him, and no one cared about him at home. The family had money to buy a house for his eldest brother, but the protagonist didn't pay a cent for his marriage. There were endless conflicts. He kept saying that he would separate and live alone, and there were more than 400 photos. The wife is pregnant, and she is still here. More than 400 photos have not been dealt with. It is disgusting and disgusting. Readers, don't you know how to write if you don't write like this?

It's unreasonable for you to use the excuse of needing to pee to escape. Do you think the police in the past are the same as the police now? The police today may be easier to talk to and talk about human rights to prisoners. The police in the past were retired from the battlefield. If there is any situation, they will shoot directly. Like what you wrote about Chief Gao Guobing, four people escorted seven or eight people, and one of your own was injured. Your prisoner said he needed to pee, but you still let your subordinates The policeman takes off the prisoner's pants. You are really insulting people's IQ. It is completely different from the wisdom and determination shown by Gao Guobing in the previous article. Even if you want the protagonist to turn the tide and pretend to be cool, you have to find a reasonable reason. This plot is really a big failure in my opinion. Of course, this is my personal opinion based on the characters in the book. There is nothing wrong with the rest. Overall, it is a good book and worth recommending.

Gao Mingli is already married, and the protagonist still supports his family. Why did a tomb robber and smuggler in his previous life become a virgin after his rebirth? I can't figure it out...

Let me start by saying that I don't know that the author is a woman But it's easy to tell the author's gender from the book How could the male protagonist be a person who is a gangster, hesitant, hesitant, and indecisive? If your parents don't want to see you, just separate the family. In the previous dozens of chapters, you have been constantly testing and testing, submissive and self-pitying. There are a few male readers who like this kind of thing. The honest words are offensive to the ears. The author, you are a girl, and I won't say anything unpleasant. If you want to write well in a male channel, you have to conform to the concepts of the vast majority of boys. Otherwise, you should go to a female channel.

To be honest, except for the three golden chapters, I felt more and more unhappy the more I read the rest of it. Although the author's writing is not great, it is on par; the story is okay, but the characters are really bad. The protagonist's various psychological processes go back and forth, and the same idea is firm, hesitant, firm, and hesitant... It keeps pulling back and forth, which makes it very uncomfortable to watch. The more I read, the more angry I feel, and I can't help but want to curse.

In the previous comment, I saw that the author had written about women's videos before, and I would like to write a few words about my feelings after reading the previous article. I am a male, and I remember a brother commented on a martial arts article I read before. The martial arts in men's hearts are affectionate, righteous, and lawless. Many brothers resonated with this. This is probably The protagonists in most of the books written by male channel authors are those who take revenge, repay favors, and are as happy as they want. On the other hand, female channel authors usually write the male protagonist in an emotionally weak position, wrapped in family affection and love. Just like the protagonist of this book, after reading a few Chapter 10: I keep trying to make money, but I always say more and do less, and I keep struggling with my parents' affection. Haha, a successful person who has spent most of his life will not struggle, because people themselves are complicated. Suddenly, one day, I feel that my son is sensible, here you go It's true to make new clothes, but it's also true to want to drown you in the water when you get angry. The more you struggle, the more it shows that they don't love you that much. You are like a person in the desert who is thirsty for the last drop of water in the kettle. You are very embarrassed, and most male video authors do not like wolves. As for the embarrassing protagonist, I will imitate the author's idea of ​​a male pornographic genre. As the protagonist, you will make up your mind to separate the family in the first picture of your rebirth. When the wife who owed money in the previous life was called to the door by her mother to insult her, you will defend your wife in front of everyone, instead of being a quarrel with the same person, and also follow her. Mother plays the emotional card. In the first few dozen chapters of your writing, the protagonist has been a coward, silent about the disrespect of his family, and always feels guilty about his wife in his previous life. But after knowing the truth, he still harbors illusions in front of his family, and is very unhappy. , And also forcibly set up the misery of the protagonist's previous life regardless of logic. The female protagonist in the previous life was very miserable because the male protagonist gave money to his mother but not to the female protagonist. Think about it for yourself, is the female protagonist's character the kind of person who endures silently? Oh, you mentioned something about the female protagonist and the male protagonist doesn't think so. Maybe, then you say nm is affectionate. I understand that you are busy and don't have time. You don't even believe what your wife says and you don't come home all the time. You say you love your wife. Do you think it is realistic? I won't go into details. I hope female channel authors will stop harming male channels. I'm tired of looking for books.

The male protagonist stopped talking about what he was saying. It was still acceptable. They were all minor flaws. But in Chapter 87, I couldn't bear it. The bag that Huang Dazhi picked up on the train contained tens of thousands and a gun. You hid thousands of it yourself. Then he handed it over to the policeman, but when he got home, he didn't give Huang Dazhi any compensation. If you really don't care about Gao Zhuang, that's fine. It's barely acceptable, but you gave Huang Dazhi a hundred yuan in wages. Oh my god, is there such a thing? And the author explained in this chapter that the protagonist solves the trouble, and when people look for trouble in the future, they will also look for the protagonist. This made me laugh. You have to know that the three of you went there together, and it was Huang Dazhi who picked up the bag in the toilet and caused trouble. It would be fine if you didn't take a cent, but you took it, and you took thousands. Although you were the main one and you solved the trouble, when people look for trouble in the future, they won't look for Gao Zhuang and Huang Dazhi? Have you never seen their faces? It's up to him whether you share the money or not, but it's very uncomfortable if you don't even mention it. I suggest the author go and see the whole mountain is my hunting ground and see how people get along with each other. Personally, I suggest you don't write about doing big business. Doing big business in ordinary writing seems very uncomfortable. At the beginning, it talks about living a normal life, and polishes some small details, such as how big is the soft-shell turtle caught by the protagonist?

I don't understand why the protagonist's family should be written like this. How will you write about it later? A happy ending of forgiveness and reconciliation like today's family ethics dramas? Or turn against each other. Regardless of the ending, it affects your reading mood.

How can I put it this way? They are all wealthy people. When I look at it, I feel like the protagonist is a person who is obsessed with money and can't get out! As for antiques, if you pick them up in the market, it's fine. That's knowledge. But if you go to the countryside to collect other people's real things, that's different. That's bullying others who don't understand value. Also, the protagonist himself didn't understand the prices at that time, and he didn't even know about it when he wrote this novel. After doing many things, he didn't even have an idea of ​​the price. They deliberately don't write numbers. Find a similar book to read. This book is no longer available.

The mentality has changed back and forth too many times. It is boring if there are too many holy mothers. I suggest before deleting it. Goodbye.

In your previous life, when you were rich, you didn't pick up your wife and left her at home? In this life, you know that you can make money outside and have the opportunity to get your first capital, don't you? Do you have to stay home and fight with your family? In the last life, I didn't know anything but I still went out. In this life, I know a lot of reasons to let the pig's feet go out, but I don't go out anymore? My brain is not working well

The writing is quite good. It can be seen that the author has a high emotional and IQ, and the writing style is good and organized. It seems that there are experienced writers around to check it. It is estimated that the score of this book will not be bad, and the sticker will prove it.

This book is a pure hodgepodge Repentance at the beginning + family discord + cultivation of immortality and martial arts + living in the past life + unhappy writing I really can't stand it after reading Chapter 9, 1300+ monthly tickets for this high-quality book, it's tough enough

What I hate about this book is that it has too few chapters. I have no choice but to vote for the author with the only two monthly votes I have. Come on and encourage him!

Reading this book is definitely the most worthwhile in my bookshelf. 😄 There are too many books just for fun and to vent my emotions. It is hard to find such a book that is more humane in life.

I want to know what happened to the gold foil at the end. Gold foil was not mentioned or explained later. Did I miss it?

It is well written and can reflect the social situation at that time in a more realistic way. Except for cheating, everything else is relatively real.

Personally, I think it's good. The lives of ordinary people are never smooth. Things in life are unsatisfactory, and there are no two or three people who can tell others. The author said that the protagonist has a prototype, which means that the character and original family of the protagonist in this book are documentary-oriented, and some of the stories that happened to the protagonist are real. Then the writing direction is about rural life and the way normal people make money: farming and breeding and doing some small business. The relationships between people are complicated, even though the protagonist's parents seem annoying. But it feels real to me, with more kids, this is the norm. There is no absolute fairness. What I am complaining about is that my parents are partial, not me. In that era, the problem of food and clothing was only initially solved. The protagonist's father raised five children and paid homage to the elderly, which was already very good. Don't be too demanding (I personally think that the era is different, and the problem should be viewed differently). Talking about the protagonist's mother, she basically gave all her love to her eldest son and his family (maybe a little to her younger daughter, not much). It can be said that the author has vividly described the partiality of many rural women (I personally feel that the description is too much, which may also be related to the mother's begging experience). It can only be said that the eldest brother is not the protagonist or the protagonist is not the eldest son. Personally, I still like family gossip, just like gossip. The ordinary countryside hides the most comfortable life and the down-to-earth happiness. The protagonist Baoshan is planting trees and breeding, and his wife and children are on the hot bed. This is probably the best interpretation of this sentence. 🐶🐶

Some people always say that if you don't raise children, you won't be grateful to your parents, but there are indeed many weird parents. Some people don't deserve your gratitude. Is the author still complaining about his parents? I am also from a poor family. My father was a prostitute from the age of 16 to 60. In addition to looking for women to eat, drink and have fun, he also asked for money from his family. When he was young, he asked his parents for money, when he was older, he asked for money from his wife, and finally from his children, and my mother was the same. He was not strong and self-reliant. He only wanted to rely on this husband who was not worth relying on at all. He had a life of hardship. He gave birth to 5 children and 2 survived. He basically relied on barbarism to grow up. My grandma told me that when I was two months old, my mother asked my father to bring the little money she had. I went to buy milk powder, went to town and forgot about it, and went to Shaoshan, Chairman Mao's hometown, with other women. When my sister and I were over 10 years old, we stopped going to school and went to work with my mother. All the wages were given to my mother. The family just saved a little more than 200,000, and my father directly built a car worth about 200,000. It is difficult to describe in one sentence, so I am determined that people can only rely on themselves. The sooner I understand this, the better. Others are the icing on the cake. Self-reliance and self-reliance are the most important thing.

This chapter is very well written

The audiobook is also of good quality. It's okay to listen to it occasionally

A good story about the age of rebirth must have a touch of martial arts. What boxing skills, breaking a tree, and knife skills... Speechless. And the 21st chapter. "My heart softened when I saw that aggrieved little look. I wish I could hug him and comfort him." I was really speechless. It looked so disgusting. I was really convinced.

I gave you the stuff, please update it quickly.