The Star Wars System Came a Century Early, and I Led Humanity to Ascension
星战系统提前百年，我带人类飞升
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 378k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Superpowers
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
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Yang Qin
There are obvious deviations in the football match part. The author even said that the relevant part originally contained 50,000 words of content, which was seriously stuffed for personal use. The football match is a forced one, and it is okay to use it as a node to develop the relationship between the characters, but if the game process is described in detail, I am not here to read a football novel. . . When it comes to football matches, you can't put aside your brain and dig your own grave as if you were a sage. You can only shrink your ability and play hard. This is a poor and unnecessary suppression of the viewing experience. So I didn't subscribe to the chapters of the competition at all. I think the competition process should have no impact on the main plot at all.
Isn't that part of the football team just like racing against ants? Low grades are a given. Readers who are very interested in football will not click on your book. Also, linking the system currency to the real currency is a failure. If nothing else, there will definitely be no shortage of gold bars in Tazhai. You can just move some and surround the system mall. As for the crime of unknown sources of large amounts of property, it is even more ridiculous. Just put the gold bars in a space backpack and go abroad. Since you are linked to real currency, there is no need to impose currency restrictions, just use special props and task restrictions.
Come on, author, your work is still valuable.
At first I thought it was using alien technology to help humans ascend, but it turned out that it was evolution after looking at it for a long time.
A bit interesting
The writing is not bad, at least the logic is stronger than some articles. It is worth reading, but the content is small. It depends on how the author uses it later. However, the coolness feels a bit bland. You can try to highlight the protagonist's strength from a third perspective or other ways to improve the coolness.
Space Marine?
So will the main character look like this?
Come on and update, don't be a eunuch and focus on persistence, I will give you a full order later😭
The author is too lazy
Can you stop being so lazy and write more?
The previous content is a bit fragmented, it is recommended to be more compact 👍👍