In the Frozen World, I Am the Only Mainline NPC

Didn't you get the inspiration from that Pocket Raiders commercial? 🤣Laughing to death

The first three chapters: I start a weird adventure in the frozen world Three chapters later: The frozen world online game

No, you, the author, wrote this. A newcomer is doubting this and that. The protagonist has not yet established the authority of the captain. If you let shit here, you will persuade the readers to leave at the beginning.

The first three chapters seem a bit disconnected from the rest. It's obviously a wasteland style, but the rest is written directly like an online game.

Before the player comes out, it feels better. After the player comes out, it is too funny, and the overall sense of scope changes.

1: Summarized the opinions put forward by the brothers on the first three chapters, and will make plot changes to the previous plots that will not affect the subsequent content, and strive to make readers who click on this book for the first time not feel like shit. 2: All previous chapters will be gradually annotated with memes, and the specific source of the memes will be written where the author said it. Even if you have not been exposed to related games, there is no need to worry about the origin and meaning of the memes, so that the brothers' brains can get enough rest when they are fishing. 3: While adding memes, some vocabulary will also be unified to avoid wasting brothers' brain cells. 4: Check for deficiencies and fix bugs.

Judging from the content, there is no way to make the temperature exceed 0℃ after pollution comes. So how do humans survive to this day without the body temperature exceeding 0℃? Is it a collective mutation of human beings?

I feel like the writing is okay, but the front and back are a bit disconnected I suddenly went from a script about picking up trash in the wasteland to being the mastermind behind the scenes of an online game.

Survivor bias, too many game terms, lack of sense of understanding, niche

Too much is not enough, author, there are too many jokes and I am tired of reading.

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I've seen 152, but I may not watch it later. The writing is too green. Many times, it feels like the dialogue is not to advance the plot, but to think of a gag that no one will recognize, and to write the dialogue just to make a gag. In this case, no matter what the gag is, I would call it a bad gag. The introduction of settings is also not very good. Whether it is the introduction of the basic world view in the early chapters, the middle stage or later, the form of setting introduction is very rigid and not very rigorous. It always feels like a deus ex machina. There are also detailed information on the skills of large blockbusters, and various inexplicable high-quality pollution crystal mechanical deities. Although there are many shortcomings, the basic main line can still be seen. But apart from the basic main line, there are no problems. There are many other small problems, which will not work if accumulated. To put it simply, you can read it when you are bored and don't want to use your brain.

I have only read chapter 40 or 50, and it seems a bit confusing. Almost every new thing that appears due to the world level is a new copy, and there are too many decryption elements. What I also want to complain about is that the protagonist starts a separate line. Several chapters progress a little, and the game cannot allow players to play freely after a long interval. Therefore, there is no clearly written content, and it is very confusing.

I don't know if it's because I wrote too many gags, or if the author's writing skills are a bit weak. Every time I see those marked numbers, it really affects my perception. I feel like you don't need to forcefully write in the game's plot in every chapter~

Now the author has stopped updating?