Brave-Sama, It's Time to Take Medicine

As a modern person, the protagonist actually believes in the Holy See in the medieval world. Am I a bit out of step with the times? 😰

The plot is too cliche, just mindless revenge.

It's exactly the same as a book. Just copy the author.

As a modern person, is it poisonous to hear that women get nosebleeds when wearing clothes (and there are no bad health factors)?

It's the same as the book, Honey, It's Time to Take Medicine, but the protagonist in this book is even more crazy.

Alas, the author should first study the excellent works of the big guys. The writing techniques and routines should be borrowed from the good works. There should not be a lot of words in the text that interrupt the reader's reading experience, such as "I went to listen to the teachings of the true God." "I don't want to watch Ciel learn magic." You can either put it at the end of the chapter and let readers discuss whether they want to read it (of course this requires a certain reader base), or you can make your own decision (after all, it is the author who writes the book). At most, you can say at the end of the chapter that he will not write about this aspect. I just read more than 30 chapters and found that the author cut it and opened a new book. This is my suggestion. If you don't like it, delete it (I personally feel that the protagonist's character, plot logic, and description of the character's thoughts still need more polishing)

It can only be said that the greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment I fell in love with this novel at a glance from dozens of novels. After reading the introduction, I thought it was 1v1 pure love A male-hating saint became a brave man and Bai Yueguang was found drugged Then he went crazy Criticizing the brave man and the weak, pitiful, quick-witted saint The story of falling in love and killing each other It turns out that it is a cliched revenge story about the brave man, not exciting I am going to write a sample to the author This is what I want to read It's really a good place to kill people, with vast landscape, changing weather, countless monsters, and this magical wind that interferes with the magnetic field If someone dies here, I'm afraid they won't even have to find an excuse Just like the two of us What do you think, Theresa Even if it is a joke, this is too much Saint Theresa frowned slightly Didn't break out on the spot, all thanks to the good education gained by teaching Yan for so many years But A mask was camouflaged on her face, but the mechanical fake smile could no longer be maintained She suppressed the twitching of her cheeks for a few times before she could maintain her expressionless face with a fake smile The saint's indifferenceJPG Forcing a cheerful smileJPG Yong Sir, are you joking? In fact, cold jokes are popular in the King's capital, and you are really too cold Even if you are a brave man, you can't spread it Leon did not answer this immediately It just appeared on his face The sunny smile Bright and... Cold, Teresa only felt that she saw a corpse in her narrow smiling eyes It was cold, it was hers This was the look of looking at the corpse This look, her little I saw it most often in the Jiaoyande Tribunal For a while, the air was so cold that my whole body felt as cold as falling into an ice cave My throat was as clear and sweet as a lark, and there was a trill in my throat Are you kidding? She was waiting for the answer she expected in her heart, the answer that would pronounce her fate Admit it quickly, admit that this is just a not-so-funny joke Just let it go to hell for any investigation mission If you can get out of the Coron Plains this time br>I must go to the king... No, go to the archbishop Anyone is fine, as long as I can replace him This saint, she doesn't want to be a saint anymore No, in fact, he has already answered The item in his hand answered for him The crisp sound of the bumper being buckled sounded in the air Trea recognized it To be precise, there are very few people in Corrington Continent who don't know what this thing is A big killer weapon from another world created by the second brave man - —Fire stick (modern rifle) But Treya would rather not know what it is She still has a lot of delicious food to eat, and she has not yet experienced the sweet love between the saint and the hero in the picture book Please... It seems to have exploded Like Please, help me (loudly) I can only find you Oh, why The brave man sitting on the desk seems to have heard the funniest joke in the world Can't help it, he can't help it at all Debauchery Laughter echoed in the room And Treya lowered her head lower and lower Why, what reason do you want to use to convince me, I just want to see the saint suffer. Let's not talk about this first Are you an idiot, I We are enemies now If I didn't take the initiative to find you, it would have been a gift from the gods Teresa seemed to hear nothing, just saying Help me Can't you understand people's words anymore? Leon is too lazy to see this What nonsense are you talking about Price, if you want me to help you, just give me a price that can convince me The girl hesitated as if she had thought of something, and finally her face turned red and she muttered in a low voice That, that, is that okay? What? The girl suddenly felt shy and her voice was as low as a mosquito However, as a pervert brave man who has stepped into the extraordinary and strong, a new human being in the true sense Leon still heard what she was saying clearly Her expression gradually became colder Her eyes were full of ridicule It was like hearing something incredible Fast forward to realize that this was a violation of herself Think about why life has ended up in this situation Hold the law The stick against the temple Do you think I'm ridiculous (but you are already the last hope I can imagine, and now... Hope is shattered) (The love born in silence is broken again) You will never know (how many times I struggled on the way here) (In the end, it is just my wishful thinking) (Every rescue is just a whim for the toy by the brave man, it is all fake) I will die here It's like verifying my statement The exquisite runes of the staff lit up, and the golden light illuminated half of the girl's cheek And the eyes that were a little red at some point The white exquisite light thorn appeared in front of the temple Light Prism Instant, extremely fast This is my best spell No one can stop it Even that person is a brave This is the content of the deal Don't you want to torture me all the time, do you want to see me in pain Promise me (otherwise I will die and make all your expectations come true) The girl is waiting Just like when they first met Waiting "Death must be pronounced" What I want to see is the ups and downs of you and me Summary in one sentence He (she) escapes from her (him) pursuit, unable to fly

Well, I've read a few chapters and it feels similar to a novel I've read before "My dear, it's time to take medicine"

The three views are not to my liking and I can't stand it anymore.

It's not good-looking. The author's writing skills are still poor, and the plot is not polished well. As a result, what is shown is that he made various mistakes in the past life and learned the lessons in this life. It is like turning on the invincibility trick. Everywhere you go, there are opportunities. When you meet someone, you will know whether he is an enemy. The characters are also too stereotyped, either good or bad, and quite boring. I suggest the author read some recent light novels with good results.

Wc, I have read this book... No, wc, copy the book

Come on, the character design can be slightly different, it's too bland mainly 🪖

The beginning is a bit like the plot of the comic "The Strongest Hero Who Desires Revenge, Invincible with the Power of Darkness"...

I suggest you read the works of Xiaoxiao Xiaoxiao Fei when writing later.