Start Cultivating Immortality with Full Talent

Let me briefly talk about this book. The first novel I read was "Online Games: Across the World". I read this book no less than four times. Because of this novel, online games will always have a place in my heart. But after killing the dragon, Ye Zi began to transform. Actually, I can understand that Ye Zi has always had a dream of cultivating immortality. It's good to have dreams. But that's not reality. You need to understand what you are best at writing. I said Ye Zi was too much affected by Jian Lai, so I don't have any objection. Whether it's "I Am the Sword Immortal" or this book. The sword immortals and warriors in the Fourteenth Realm are all set by swordsmen. It's not that you can't write, but you are not a beacon-fire drama prince. Those who learn from me will live, those who resemble me will die. However, starting with full talent to cultivate immortality, he is actually a useless Gou Daoliu. Such a reversal is not suitable for this era of cool writing. But now, the character of the protagonist has basically collapsed. This is the scariest thing. You can even learn from Li Changshou and let the paper man download the copy, and hide yourself in a place that the author does not know. This is the ultimate perfection. However, the protagonist calls Gou in his mouth and thinks of Gou in his heart, so the copy must be downloaded. Not going away will also affect the Taoist mind. How do you resonate with me... Then there is a homogeneous secret realm, making appointments, getting materials, backstabbing, and repeated backstabbing. Cultivation of Immortality is not an online game, and these people are not bringing resurrection armor. Doesn't cultivating immortality not require worldliness? Those high-level powerful people have no brains and insist on suppressing and killing people? Those who kill people will always be killed. Not to mention that the protagonist has a sect, although I don't think it is of any use. Aren't these cultivators afraid of being contaminated by karma? Can't everyone get what they need at once? If so, where did these people's good reputation come from? Every time someone follows me like crazy, or is this the same thing that happens to the protagonist every time? The same goes for lowering your cultivation level to the lowest among a group of people every time you go to a secret realm. You are asking for trouble. Every time I go to the secret realm, only the protagonist comes back. Who the hell would go into a secret realm with you if you are a little better informed? Who would have no brains to offend you? The vests have been changed batch after batch, but the plot has not changed at all. I didn't feel how careful Ye Zi was... There is also the character of Lao Lu, whose current role is purely cute... There is no harm without comparison, and the scapegoat next door is going crazy. I don't know where the future lies. But you should know better because you are the lost leaf. You are not anyone.

1. Chapter 1: Three Spoons Entwining the Holy Soul Village has a traditional start, with no mid-term goals, no clear short-term goals (the kind that has to be done, the kind that must be done), no sense of crisis, and relies solely on a weak sense of set expectations, which is not very attractive. 2. The character design is too novice, almost the same as ten years ago. It is old-fashioned and has no freshness, let alone a sense of substitution. Moreover, because of the previous point, the protagonist is a passive protagonist with weak motivation to do things. 3. The writing is too watery. It takes two pages to write a farewell, and there is almost no twist in the first three chapters, and there is no drama at all. In terms of advantages, the simulator element is quite trendy, but the logic of farming and cultivation time is a bit stiff and the result is very confusing. Overall, if it was written by a true newcomer, it would be a hit.

I have been reading Qidian for a long time, and I am willing to spend money to read books. Here is my personal opinion: I think everyone is following Ye Zi's books because of the previous online game trilogy, Slaying the Dragon. To be honest, I personally haven't missed a single book in this pursuit, until I am the Sword Immortal. I can understand Ye Zi's mental journey. I personally think that he is not like many old mages who rest on their laurels and write the same old routine. He is always seeking change, he is learning, and he is working hard. Like many people in the comment area, the writing is poor and has no new ideas. What I want to say is that there are so many books in Qidian. How many people have created a new genre? What kind of plot is called innovative? What we are reading is online. Everyone has different requirements for writing. They require good writing. Lord of Mysteries and Ring of Fate have good writing and clear logic. But if you are used to reading cool articles, can you continue to read them? Is it worthy of the writing style you want to read word by word? I have been chasing all the books on the top of the list, and have not fallen behind on any of them. However, I am still on the road of reading Zhai Zhu. Yes! It's nothing new, but every book and every protagonist has their story. Isn't that enough? Why do you always have to be so demanding on others? Everyone is working hard to make money. When you are working in the company and people are constantly asking you for problems, you wish that others would just put you on a pi. If you don't like it, you can just ignore it. There is no need to hurt others with words. At least this book has not reached the paid stage and has not earned you a penny, so why bother? Now that you have chosen to look at it, support him a lot, believe in Ye Zi, and believe that he will get better and better. Encouragement can make people progress. Have you been taught a lot of hardships since childhood, and hope that others will accept criticism and learn to be shameful and backward? Suffering is suffering, and suffering cannot make people progress. After reviewing your choices, you can make suggestions, but don't be bossy. Everyone is equal. Don't get angry at work all day and have no place to vent your anger. Finally, to borrow a sentence written by Baker in "The Peregrine Falcon": This is a dying world, like Mars, but still hot. Please everyone, please keep your heart warm at all times, even if this is a dying world. But so what?

I have read several online game novels written by Lost Leaf and they are okay, but the cultivation novels he wrote are not good to read, personal opinion

Written at the beginning: Looking at the online game trilogy, I didn't expect it to be so many years ago. It's just this book that I persisted in until now and finally decided to take a break. First of all, let me state that I completely understand and agree with what many book friends said, support Ye Zi, and have been blessed with feelings for so many years. However, I think that transformation or trying new themes is worthy of respect. However, as a reader, objectively evaluating the work is respect for so many years of hobbies and respect for the author. The following is the text. About the main line and worldview structure. The theme of this book is Eastern Cultivation of Immortals. As a test of the shift from online games to themes, it must be affirmed that the choice of a systematic text as a cheat is a very clever choice. Readers of online game articles can accept such a setting. The basic system is relatively stable. At the same time, the addition of the system can rationalize many plug-ins. This is why I have always believed that online game articles are easier to deal with in terms of world view. Most of the main storylines of men's online articles are mainly about upgrades. Wonderful works strive to be restrained, ingenious and in-depth in the treatment of golden fingers. As a golden finger, the system is quite trouble-free. Although it may not be deep and exciting, at least it will not crash easily. This book, as many book friends said, has almost no main plot. This problem is neither big nor small. After all, when compared to online games, it is also a vague main line. But regarding the development of Goldfinger, I personally feel that it is a bit too rigid or even lazy. Several aspects have been reflected so far: you can freely add points, which is equivalent to a little room for improvement in talent, and it is quite satisfactory; animal taming is almost nothing special and can only be said to be a combat skill; farming, elixir flow plus quick skills. The design of the simulator, let me put it bluntly, although it seems a bit fresh at first glance, it actually does not improve the reading experience much, and it is even suspected of being too low in word count. The reasons are as follows: First, there has been no failure case so far. Perception is the beginning, success, and end. The middle process is also a funny part that has nothing to do with the content. Second, in order to highlight the protagonist's talent gap, the duration is too long and distorted. Third, the protagonist's own growth is not taken into account. For example, the protagonist's life span is only a few hundred years, and it is obviously a bit counter-logical to practice for tens of thousands of years. I personally have an idea that it might be a lot more interesting to use this simulator as a deduction function that predicts the future to a certain extent. About writing and daily plot. Yi Zi is still quite accustomed to the writing style of online games. In fact, in the trilogy and the subsequent installments, the banter between the protagonists is also a very interesting part. But that is under the premise of entering the game background. In fact, there are still many serious scenes in the offline aspects. However, when applied to this book, the character of the protagonist is still a bit cynical, which is somewhat inconsistent with the cruel background of cultivating immortals in the book. This cannot be said to be entirely a problem, but it limits the upper limit of this book to a certain extent. One more question, daily routine and writing method. This book has only been open for a short time, and I have already written about secret realms several times, and the plot is almost the same: invitations, plotting against each other, and the protagonists reaping the benefits. The secret realm has become an existence like a copy of the online game. Even because of the paper man, the protagonist is equivalent to an existence that can be resurrected and summoned to a certain extent. At the same time, trivial matters such as giving gifts, feeding fish, blacksmithing, and cracking restrictions can be completely ignored, but they have been repeated many times, just like doing daily tasks in online games. This may be reasonable in an online game novel, but it feels a bit redundant in a fairy tale. Including the latest killing of the four saints, let's not say whether the combat power is a bit outrageous, but kill them one by one and write down whether there is a lack of nutrition for two or three days. Summary: This book is about becoming an online game and losing it. Ye Zi may consider using the form of an online game to transition to a fantasy novel, but remember not to be limited to the previous comfort zone. One more thing, looking back at the period when Internet literature was booming, many book friends are no longer young. Maybe it's our problem, becoming picky. In the past few years, I have also read some books by old authors. The once courageous snail transformed into fantasy and I can only sigh. The elf who wrote Mobile Storm, the new mecha text he wrote is full of superpowers. As for the writer of Katu, Dragon City is still the same as it has always been. There are fewer and fewer books that catch my eye, and it's even more sad to see an author I once liked no longer in good condition. I hope Ye Zi can sort out his thoughts as soon as possible and find his state. That's all.

This book is really disappointing. Even after many years, I still remember the scholar's integrity and bravery, Ling Xue's liveliness and cuteness, Ling Yue's strength and gentleness, Qin Yun's intellectual generosity, Binglan's silent guardianship, Bingcha's responsibility, Ziyue's naive cuteness, Summer's weirdness, the old man in the lonely grave, the seven-star lantern's bravery, and the brotherhood of the admiral's family. Every character, even the supporting ones, is lifelike and has its own story. From pirated myths, to dominating the world, to being unparalleled in the world. Although it is the same subject matter, the writing style is getting better and better, and the content is getting richer and richer. Later, we have to slay the moon and slay the dragon. Although the themes are the same, they are still fascinating. I had the patience to read this book on cultivating immortality, but it was on the shelf. After subscribing, I read it for the third time and found myself in a secret realm. I really couldn't stand it anymore. It's like a chronicle, the same plot, the cause, process, and outcome are exactly the same. The supporting characters in the early stage, except Lin Sheng, were impressive. I felt that this is what a person with such a temperament should do, and it resonated deeply with me. What depth of depiction are there for the other characters? Han Bing? Apart from giving the jade slips and magic weapons, is there any profound description of her? Chen Weimo, apart from traveling abroad more often, does he have any unique character traits? Chen Pinger? Why did she look at the protagonist with admiration when she was on the third level of Qi training? Pretending for the sake of showing off is the most boring thing. Regardless of what can be saved later, at least I lost my desire to read the book after seeing the early stages. That's it for me. I will still read Ye Zi's next book. I believe Ye Zi can still write wonderful group portraits.

I'm really speechless. The protagonist, you are a cultivator, right? You don't learn any attack spells. You only pick sesame seeds instead of watermelons.

I have been struggling in the early stage, but in the later stage, I still seem to be struggling without any talent, and I can't understand cheating. It's all about growing vegetables.

This world view and character view really shouldn't be too rubbish, okay? The protagonist said he was afraid of death at the beginning and then kept running away. The world view is so bad that I can't continue to watch it.

At present, the protagonist of this book has established a foundation. Let me talk about my views on this book: 1. The development model of this book is to go out to dungeons to collect materials - come back to run the industry and continue to develop - and engage in daily humor during this period, just like playing dungeons to drop materials for upgrades. 2. What I feel a little uncomfortable about right now is that this system is prone to glitches every now and then, the secret realm dungeons are a bit sloppy, and the villains are a bit witty and brainless. 3. The advantage of this book is that in the world of cultivation and upgrading, the next step may be to open a store. This kind of cultivation system feels good. We will see if the plot can be designed to be more exciting later. 4. Continue to wait and see in the future, hoping that some new things will appear. Even if it is an old bottle, it must be decorated with a new bar!

When I was in school, I had no money, so I used to have sex with Ye Zi. Come support today.

As the title states, this novel is not a favorite for me. Lost Leaf, thank you for bringing me the wonderful world of the online game trilogy and Dragon Slaying. But I have no interest in this new work of yours. There are so many good stories in the fantasy fairy tale series that I can no longer read ancient novels. Online game novels and martial arts novels have become the tears of the times. When the generation of people who read Jin Yong and Gu Long's novels entered the mid-life crisis, the martial arts dreams in their hearts were extinguished. When the generation of people who grew up playing online games entered society and were exhausted from hardships, the virtual dream was broken.

It's okay to plant spiritual plants in the front, after all, there is no physical magic weapon that directly matches the little green bottle; but the paper man incarnation, the ugly picture to stabilize the heart, and the bamboo sword formation in the back are really out of action 😅 Although the next door's spell to fight back is a reference to various "pay tributes" to his predecessors, at least he can still do some bad things with personal characteristics. On the other hand, this book really didn't have any personal characteristics until it was put on the shelves.

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Ah Ye, come on and update, you will get monthly tickets and rewards!

This protagonist is desperately trying to deceive others for his own chance.

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When I was a student, I played a trilogy of online games for nothing, which stayed with me throughout my youth. Now that I have the conditions, I support Ye Zi

I paid more than 2,000 yuan for the reward. I don't regret it now But I'm really disappointed. I won't watch it again. The reward money should be treated as payment for my childhood It's much worse than slaying demons You are indeed old and I have grown up.

Only lv1, this author looks like a newcomer at first glance, so I reluctantly support him 😏

Can a first-level author write novels Can a first-level author write novels😏

If you choose this book title, you will attract people who like geniuses, and then you will attract a loser with mixed spiritual roots. You will offend both sides.

Full of talent, he has been practicing for tens of millions of years, and he is only at the early stage of the Golden Elixir. He is awesome, and he is still full of talent. He could not write a novel like this without a cerebral thrombosis in 10 years. He has been practicing for hundreds of thousands of years, and his realm has not changed at all.

When I saw this sentence, I didn't want to turn the next page.

Newbie, new book, please support 😁

No, buddy, you tricked me into killing him. Aren't you full of talent? How did it become useless writing?

After reading the names and author names, I really couldn't read it until chapter 19. Brothers who want to read a cool article can go. I am very talented but have a ninth-grade miscellaneous spirit root and a bit of a stable flow. As a result, I encountered three waves of trouble after reading chapter 19. I killed a third master at the beginning. As a result, a group of bandits came to check and found out what the Chaos Sect did. They actually dared to go to the sect to check the disciples' travel records to find the murderer. Although they were solved quickly. I didn't say that I wanted to read a cool article, but I read it overall. I didn't feel any refreshment or relaxation when I came down. I was told that I was full of talent, but the full talent that I felt highlighted one of them. The others were suppressed by the protagonist's ninth-grade miscellaneous spirit roots. I have practiced the lowest yellow-level skills for more than ten thousand years, and the longevity of the Evergreen Duel has been increased by 70 years after practicing for thousands of years. Although the simulated life span is not worth it, the contrast is not that big, and it is a bit suspected of selling the meat of a sheep's head 😠

In a sentence: The fifth level of Qi training is half a step to the peak of Dzogchen, and the sixth level of Qi training is accurate. Do you understand the meaning of this sentence?

The previous super players have read it, but I didn't expect this one to be even bigger. After writing novels for so many years, there is no progress at all, but it is regressing. This book obviously feels like a long history, a watery plot, and a routine is used over and over again. I am too lazy to pretend. Who are you fooling? Is it worthy of the fans who support you? These two books have basically ruined the popularity of your online game trilogy. If it stays like this, you might as well close the book in order to preserve your old age.

You start with full talents, and in the first chapter, you test your miscellaneous spirit roots and work as a handyman.