After Losing My Job, I Opened a Portal Between Two Worlds

The domestic environment is so good that many people don't remember what happened to children in ancient times who went to the streets holding gold.

After reading the latest two chapters, the real world has moved from the ordinary world to super fantasy, and a strange ex-girlfriend has appeared. Good guys, the author's explosions come one after another. emmmm... The experience of being a bookworm for more than ten years tells me that this book has come to an end with me. Although my fate has ended, I still hope that you, the author, can work hard and write well.

Just look at the first few chapters. The author must have not left school. He is full of idealists and has no sense of substitution. Take the first three chapters as an example. "Blow up your family." You wouldn't say that you are the nephew of an earl or prince from the distant Qin Empire. Everyone can tell at a glance that you don't work. At least you have a tiger skin. Are you still afraid of them investigating? Sure enough, I was ignored and even knelt down. You are an ordinary businessman and others are jealous of you. If you weren't the main character, you would have died long ago without a golden finger. The author felt that what he wrote was that the child took the gold and left, but it was domestic peace and tranquility. Next to it is the police station on the street.

I think it's pretty cool, and it's over when it's cool, and there's nothing bad about it. If you write it like this, don't let the protagonist suffer. It's ok if there are other extraordinary characters in other worlds besides the protagonist. Fortunately, you changed it, otherwise you wouldn't necessarily click in. The only thing is that the quantity is too small, and I'm afraid that I will forget it or become addicted after chasing it. If the author writes more, and recommends it, the results will naturally get better.

Why does it get worse and worse later on? What is armor? Changing it to armor or armor is more normal and smoother, and what about this person? Who are you waiting for? Can the aboriginal dialogue be more normal? It's too Chinese! A bit awkward and out of place, isn't the protagonist a bit cautious and thoughtful? How did he become mentally retarded later?

It's quite good-looking, and what kind of stallion wouldn't be in the right size? As long as it's comfortable to watch, it doesn't matter if it's a harem or not. It's not the real world. In the imaginary world, we don't have the guts to do big things. Support the author

Yes, there is another plot involving a woman in the first three chapters. I know the follow-up without guessing.

As the title states, in the Middle Ages, no matter where you were, people who couldn't pay would take action, including the government. If a person wants to go to another world without weapons, he might as well look at the consequences of going to a backward area alone.

The link is too big. The three worlds are still complementary. It is not necessary to rule one world. However, as long as it develops slowly, it is no problem to be a member of the ruling class of one world. It is similar to the strength of one of the five permanent members.

The whole story is full of naive social cognition, and many people can see that the protagonist's thoughts are too naive. 1. In the article, nobles and common people meet and communicate: A life-saving favor cannot solve the class difference between nobles and common people in that era. Most common people just give a few gold coins to get away with it. Although the protagonist's attitude of not being afraid is mentioned in the article, an ordinary person can remain calm in the face of that kind of situation unless you have done great things or are very smart and have strong self-control. However, the gap between the transaction value and the pricing shown later in the article is too large. The understanding of a glass is completely insufficient, and you will not observe the economic conditions of the city in advance and inquire about favorable news. 2. There is no plan in doing things, it is all based on what comes out, and you don't know to investigate in advance, and you are completely led by others (although I understand that you want to use the existing noble status to operate, but over-strengthening the connection will appear silly as written above. Only by maintaining a stable state will the nobles think highly of you, otherwise you will be looked down upon. The nobles will only communicate equally with the same class, and they are all extraordinary. Generally, if you are a better noble, you will not think that there are no hypnotic attacks, right). Summary: The author has a lot of ideas, but he cannot write about the sense of the background of the times. He has not fully understood the cruelty of the Western aristocratic era, the differences and contradictions between the aristocracy and the civilian class, and the preciousness of knowledge. I haven't read the rest of it yet, but judging from the fact that the comments have turned into reality and fantasy and have added more worlds (there are gamified copies and super powers) without enough writing, the author has not yet realized that he should pay close attention to the details and choose to add variables to fill in the holes. To be honest, it is not very good now. If gamified super powers are not well written, it is a big mistake, because gamification and super powers generally involve rules, and the collision between rules and fantasy requires a reasonable high and low statement, and the collision between gamification and super powers is even more particular. Suggestions: 1. The author should delve into the details of the writing method between the two worlds and then consider writing multiple worlds in the next book 2. Directly change it to Zhu Tianwen, leaving one main world and other worlds without too much description. Only the benefits and effects obtained are all reflected in one world. 3. Strengthen the simplified description (involving some relatively sensitive numerical categories, which can be simplified and summarized. For example, when the protagonist negotiates goods with the nobles: the two parties negotiated a satisfactory transaction price after a war of words, and both parties think they have made a profit. I think it is more reasonable to write like this. You can give it. I dare say from the price list that the nobles will earn several times more than what the protagonist sells if they resell it. Moreover, if you write it like this, you can directly deepen the cooperation and buy the agency rights. At the same time, it allows the heroine to get close to the hero and establish a relationship, instead of being as deliberate as a marriage. A real nobleman will not be so stupid as to threaten you like this. People who have the ability to escape will be in trouble if the protagonist gets excited and runs away. Moreover, the protagonist's items are exclusive and do not have to be sold in one country. If you don't agree with me, it doesn't matter if I sell them to your rival country.) Or deepen the content of the article (give a more reasonable explanation or world background)