Surviving the Supernatural: I Can Devour Countless Talents

If you write according to your own ideas, a newbie like you will easily get panicked by all the gossip, and then make random changes and die suddenly. It's rare to find a book that was written with brains, and it seems that it actually wanted to write something. Although it has flaws, it is not a mass-produced piece of shit. Today's novels are like pre-made dishes. They are all written in routines. You just copy the template. Survival stories are even more so, selling water at high prices, hiding tips, doubling resources, I'm tired of reading them. The protagonists have no characteristics, they are all murderers with facial expressions, capitalists who do not invest but only harvest. They must be first or else they will die suddenly. I really love reading your book. Please don't cut it. Keep this flavor, put it on the shelf and order it all, cut it, and the author will disappear automatically.

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It's watchable, but it's a bit weird. The part where the protagonist is mentally attacked seems to be really mentally attacked. I feel a little dizzy and have an unclear feeling. Is anyone here the same as me? I want to find out if it's a personal issue

Although I have almost cut it off at the same time, 1,500 is a huge amount of money for me, and I have to spend at least two months to finish it! It's just 10,000 collections and not even 30 readings. There are too many big guys raising books. This is my problem. The writing is crooked, so I quickly got the reward to bring it back to the main story. But I need to get some relief in advance. The average subscription is now 300. If the increase is less than 500 in two months and full attendance is required, then I won't even have 1,000 just from the subscription money. I will have to finish the book and start a new book. I hope you guys will forgive me at that time😭😭😭 Finally, please subscribe! If you find this dungeon boring, you can skip it and get the rewards directly today to continue the main story. There is no end to this! Stop scolding, stop scolding! ( ๑ŏ ŏ๑ )

It's strange. I always feel that something is wrong. You may say it doesn't look good, but it's okay. You may say it looks good, but something doesn't feel right.

I just read the first 10 chapters. The author writes about a commoner protagonist whose tragedy is suppressed and writes it in a passionate way. He wants to be both tragic and funny at the same time. It's very fragmented and I can't stand it anymore. I decided to post a chapter and leave a comment. If I still write like this before it's put on the shelves, then I can't support it 🤐

You can get attribute points by killing people. This book has collapsed. People are one of the least scarce resources. In this case, the leader of a dark force like Juyitang can crush the protagonist just by relying on attributes.

It was okay at the beginning, there were no mindless conversations like chat rooms in other books, but after reading more than 20 chapters, I felt that the character was a bit fragmented. At the beginning, a cold and decisive persona was created, but as a result, some of the operations and dialogues later felt completely wrong, and the dialogues were too childish and embarrassing. I have read twenty or thirty chapters so far, let's look at it later...

How can I put it, the writing is not bad, but the author cannot describe group portraits and also writes about guilds, which is a bit difficult to criticize. Why are there so many lone wolf articles on the market? Because it's difficult to describe when there are too many people. For example, Qi Heng always said he was very powerful, but his specific combat power was not described. What is his fighting style? And Ye Chanqing, what are his skills? I saw Chapter 83 and didn't understand what was going on. (Currently I only see) how it is output, what its moves are, etc. What is Lin Lu's summoning system? I vaguely remember that there is a girl who plays with a bow, but she hasn't shown a few scenes. There are 50 people in a guild, and the others are all soy sauce bottles. The one who calls 666? Anyway, from what I can see so far, the quality has obviously plummeted. There was cooperation before, but now it's all about the protagonist exploring paths and slaying monsters alone, and everything else is just a vase. Even Qi Heng's combat descriptions are missing. The author's story line is good, and various plots can be read. If it is a lone wolf novel, or adding a life and death brother, the author's writing will definitely be much more brilliant than the current one, instead of all the flat characters without any characteristics. The character creation is quite good when chatting with each other in front of the guild. Oh, by the way, there is another logical flaw. How many chapters did you write in 8 hours of God's Ember? More than 30 chapters, I went out to explore so many times, fought several trade wars (?), And even fainted once. If no one woke you up, it would have been at least five or six hours since you fainted. It was just like sleeping. There is also a problem with this point. In short, the author's writing can barely be considered a high-opening, medium-moving game. The latter is a bit routine, and the writing is not very brilliant.

I don't want to say so much. Only when one of your protagonists is on the verge of death can you kill the enemy, and everyone else must not die!