Steam-Powered Great Ming: The Dragon Empire

The protagonist is a great man. His idol is Lin Zexu. His life goal is to ban smoking. It is not enough to emphasize such an important thing three times in each chapter. Even if everyone around him does not understand or support it, he will strengthen his belief in banning smoking and move forward bravely.

I am not opposed to banning opium and destroying opium fields, but the protagonist's actions and words are so childish, which made me embarrassed to death.

Write the protagonist as a smart person, but do not suppress the IQ of the supporting characters.

I feel that these novels with historical elements have a characteristic. Basically, few protagonists take the issue of heirs to heart, even in the world without demons, especially those that are passed down by a single line. The protagonist is particularly favored because of a single lineage. From the beginning of the article, it is said, The elders in the family urged him to have a few children as soon as possible to continue the love and stabilize people's hearts. Then by the 200th or 300th chapter of the novel, he was not even married, and he was going through life and death all day long. If he was not the protagonist, if something happened casually, wouldn't this power be over in the ancient setting? Especially the kind where the person in power points to the protagonist to take over when he gets old. I'm very curious, why do historical novels have to be written like this? Is it because you are afraid that writing about women-related plots will disrupt the rhythm or you are not able to write?

There are heavy machine guns and artillery in the era No one has thought about the building where Jiajing was? We also want to build airplanes. Can Jiajing agree to building airplanes? No longer allowed to hide in the bunker? The technology tree is wrong, the Immortal Pill comes once every three years, and the Magical Power Pill is clearly a rule system. And no one wants to study it? No theft or copying? Back then, when atomic bombs were used to invest in each other's materials, weren't the people in your world's only formula for immortality crazy?

What a good routine. I find that the current routines that coerce the feelings of the people are really effective. The protagonist always starts to go head-to-head with the nobles of the aristocratic families for the sake of the people. He is wronged and wronged, and then turns the tables. After one overturn, another one comes.

The smoking ban is indeed a good thing, but why are you writing so many chapters in such a fantasy world? If you solve it earlier, you can write other more attractive stories.

The author's writing is indeed good, and the creativity is very good, but success or failure depends on creativity. The author may have forgotten that the characters you write may have magical powers or immortality, but these all rely on Jiajing, especially those who live forever must take medicine once every three years! As a result, Changshengtian has appeared twice so far, but none of them has maintained the rule of the Ming Dynasty 😅

I passed the first round of PK. I feel great. Brothers, I took a selfie to thank everyone. Please read more

The protagonist is not the emperor. The Ming Dynasty uses the Ming Dynasty's rotten worship system to rule the world, and there is also the most disgusting ruling class (the Zhu family)