Pirate: Garp Steals My Domineering Skills

It hasn't collapsed yet, cheating + chat group + rebirth on the same earth. The heroine knows part of the protagonist's future and travels through the world of pirates. The ingredients are complex, and the female protagonist is original. Except at the beginning of the chat group, there was a mention later that Aizen transformed into a doctor and went to a ghost-free world. I guess he was invincible later and was ready to jump to the picture. There is basically no foreshadowing. When you write this element later, it will be very abrupt.

I don't know how much time has passed. At the beginning, I met Ace when he went to sea. After a few chapters, I met Luffy. I don't know when Luffy went to sea. Where did he go in the intervening three years. You wrote this for yourself, author?

It looks okay, but it's a bit messy. Sometimes something suddenly pops up and I feel a bit confused.

It looks good, I love watching it, just like the harem

The white tiger controls wind and metal It makes sense that metal generates water and water generates ice

It feels like I wrote an outline first and then filled in the number of words in the outline. It doesn't feel like a smooth story at all. But for the heroine Hancock, I will cast two monthly votes first.