The Mastermind: Remaking the World Through Dreams

The first thirty chapters (90) have a novel plot and online logic, which is quite good. Chapter 30 to 50 (75) is a bit cliche, the plot develops too fast, and the characters change perspectives too frequently. Revised chapters fifty to sixty-six (60), the crotchless plot control, confusing character relationships and character perspectives, these 60 points must also be included in the points for the three movies "Resurrection Night", "Kung Fu" and "Zombie", as well as the author's attitude of correcting mistakes when he knows they are wrong, and the correction is okay. Three new chapters (80) The beginning of the new plot is not bad, it feels a bit like the beginning of a book. The skill book and life club are a bit interesting when you think about it, but I think the pawn shop is more fun, like the pawn shop No. 44.

The writing is messy, and the protagonist's character is too low. If you are a good guy, I will always help you, and if you are a bad guy, I will always stop you. It is very boring to watch like this. First of all, you must understand that no matter whether they are good guys or bad guys, they are strangers to the protagonist, and even the world is unfamiliar to the protagonist. So what does it mean for the protagonist to keep on the sidelines? This seems very inconsistent. There is no suspense at all, because I know that good people will live and bad people will die... Just like reality, there are always some people who are worthy of admiration. If such people encounter difficulties, you can and intend to help them, but you can't help them all the time! They are strangers after all. In general, the front part is okay, but the back part is unbearable. The conflict scenes are not good. The protagonist is like a good old man. You and the world are on opposite sides. You must change the world in order to integrate into it. The most important thing for the protagonist to do is to change the world, slowly lead the coming of the extraordinary, and sit back and watch the situation change and everything to survive. Instead of always being biased, the pattern is too small. Personal opinion.

There is a lack of immersion, and it feels like the people inside are more like programs than real people. The author really needs to learn more from the writing methods of other great masters. Your writing method is too stiff. For example, the dream confrontation in the room before was clearly written from the perspective of your character. So what's the pity that he is not the soldier's superior, so the narration about the soldier disobeying and shooting should not be written. This kind of words should be spoken by the protagonist from the perspective of God. There are many similar plots throughout the novel, which completely eliminates the sense of immersion.

The recent plot was too long and delayed in development, which made some brothers feel uncomfortable watching it. I admit that this is because I didn't arrange it well when I wrote the outline, and I didn't grasp the plot well enough, so the writing was longer than I thought. I thought about it for a long time, and there are several solutions, such as deleting this plot and rewriting it, but I feel that this is not feasible. How can I let book friends bear the consequences of my problem. So, I decided to code the words when I get back from get off work today and add more updates until this part of the plot is completed. These word counts are not counted as normal updates, and I will continue to update normally tomorrow. I also hope that brothers will see Shitou's good attitude in admitting his mistake and stop removing the book from the bookshelf. The collection is upside down. My heart is bleeding. It would be great if you can vote for a monthly ticket, recommend a vote, and give a reward. The remaining plot words are expected to start at 10,000 words, and can reach a maximum of 20,000 words. The chapters will be divided into two chapters and sent out. They must be completed today! The stone is here to kneel down and thank you!

I feel that this theme is a perfect match for the mysterious resurgence. Don't engage in martial arts, just be a ghost controller. The protagonist stands behind and controls the supernatural resurgence. The mirror ghost feels a bit careless. The level of horror is not enough, and there is no scary feeling after escaping. It is like a martial arts practitioner, and he was killed by the dragon who practiced martial arts as soon as he came out. There is no ghost feeling at all.

How should I put it? The most important thing behind the scenes is to treat everyone equally in order to be interesting. The protagonist is too biased. If the plot is not suspense, what else is there to watch? If a good guy and a bad guy appear at the same time, the winner must be the good guy, and he must be the protagonist! But the protagonist behind the scenes can't be like this. There has to be back and forth. The good guy can't always win. It's like if you play chess by yourself and only let the red piece win, can this game be watched?

I saw a lot of comments... They said it was the nanny, they said it was the Virgin, they said they didn't kill enough, they said this and that... First of all, the protagonist has traveled through time, he is no longer a psychopath! Don't normal people have no stakes? If I'm in a good mood, I can take the initiative to help you? Are there interests involved and interests come first? The things my protagonist does in it are not even considered a good person... As for the nanny, big brother, it's modern times, it's China, not to mention other issues with the police and the government, don't you have a good idea about your life safety? As for the issue of layout, can we not use the settings of other books to argue with me? The protagonist himself can hardly survive. If you ask him to shout "I don't eat beef" to the world, what will he gain? Sometimes it's really strange. On the Internet, there are injustices here and there, but a generation of people who have come to power have gone so far that they don't even care about human life. Some of the comments and suggestions I deleted, such as "Battle Royale", "Millions of people fighting for a living spot", and "More blood sacrifices", I had question marks after reading them. Everyone's life is under a lot of pressure these days. I understand that I am also under a lot of pressure. I work overtime for free and don't have much money, but it won't be like this if I relax and read a novel...

In the first 30 chapters, I thought you were going to become a new writer behind the scenes, but it turned out to be a huge mess. The copy from 30 to more than 60 chapters can only be said to be messy and long. Not only did it disrupt your previous rhythm, but we were also tired from reading it, and you were about to put it on the shelves. How could the results be good?

Let's take a look at history. He also had a book called Dream Film Company before. It has a very good idea about the creation of dream scripts and the impact of dream energy on reality. You can read the author's book. It's a pity that he became a eunuch after a few scripts. He will not write about this kind of urban self-guided approach to upgrading the world in the future.

The bad guys will definitely fail. There is no suspense. No wonder this result has no twists and turns at all. Is it really smooth sailing? In reality, evil people must die, but the purpose of the novel is to attract people and prevent readers from knowing what the plot is like at a glance.