Immortal Ancestor Bless

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The background is from the period of being a coward, but there are two things that really make people complain. Ancestors are just like nannies, they can be found everywhere, and there is too much nonsense, and there is no sense of mystery at all. Also, the other side is very powerful and the whole family must turn the tide. This style of writing is somewhat outdated.

After reading it, tell me your opinion! First of all: Our ancestors were too weak! Nanny type? Personally, I prefer the behind-the-scenes type! It is suggested that the forceful character should be improved. Children who respond to requests will not grow up! Secondly: Is it a family story or a sect development? It is a bit difficult to write about the parallel development of the family and the sect. It is difficult to write about the conflict of interests between the family and the sect in the later period, and you will lose points! It is recommended to clarify the priorities and develop on the third line! Liu Dashan chose a place to build a sect (after all, after accepting disciples, it was nothing at first. There would be conflicts in inheriting the resources of his own family to cultivate foreign surnames, or the monsters [demon pills] defeated by his disciples were used by the family to sacrifice)! Boss Liu is building a family. If the boss has the condition, just stick to it and build the family! The second dynasty of Liu Lao is fighting for hegemony, so his Taoist intention should be to fight for hegemony! After all, in troubled times, the dynasty is the largest family! Finally: Regardless of whether you are a direct disciple (apprentice or family dependent), if you practice the same method, it is easy to lose the gap! It's over when you meet a genius family (although there is no such scene with the ancestors, but it's not necessary); it is recommended that the protagonist modify the skills of other schools and be able to practice Qi, but there is a gap with the Liu family! After all, there is a difference between closeness and distance. Revival of spiritual energy, seize the opportunity! The above is my personal opinion. If it disturbs me, I apologize!

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