The Gloom of the Past

It's a newcomer, the title of the book is four-letter, and it's still a Western fantasy. It's not easy to get signed.

It depends on how far the author can go. 300,000 Words and 1 million words are the two major hurdles. How many authors enter the palace first?

It is not that he has fallen, but that he has ascended to a higher place, but is called an evil god by mortals.

It's not easy to read a Western fantasy novel these days. I just read the beginning. The author's writing is very strong and the beginning is also very exciting. However, there is a slight problem. The protagonist is not portrayed enough. It is better to write the protagonist first. If the reader does not even know the protagonist, how can he have the desire to read it?

Come and take a look for me, Jie Jie Jie

The author is not writing a novel, but a fairy tale for children. The characters in it are very childish.

From the current point of view, there is a poisonous point. The earl's son died, so the protagonist also died. I was confused when I saw it.

The atmosphere seems good, but the more I write, the worse it becomes. The protagonist knows nothing and has been treated as a marionette. Also, he keeps getting stronger on his own. There is no one around him, so no one can share what the protagonist has achieved and how high he has achieved. That would be equivalent to achieving nothing at all and accomplishing nothing.

Your comments and collections are the motivation for writers to update

To mediocre people, we are mysterious and unpredictable. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. "

It's so beautiful, I'd love to watch it more.

It's so beautiful, I can't stop watching it

If you want to continue reading, please turn to the last page. This is really important for new authors.

Another unknown corpse in a mass grave...