Fog City Occultism Commission

Does the author have any other vests?

The writing is pretty good, except that I have some reservations about using my spiritual vision to scan others for being too reckless. There are no other issues.

It feels like the protagonist has upgraded a lot of skills, but his performance is a bit weak. Although I practice quickly, I feel uncomfortable writing. Although my language proficiency has improved, I abandoned the writing competition and started writing something else. Although I have upgraded many skills, I am always weak in fighting.

The casual cultivators of extraordinary beings seem to be real and make people laugh... How about referring to "Doctors Without Borders" and changing it to "unorganized extraordinary beings"?

To be honest, the protagonist's previous experience was already very legendary, so legendary that it made me hallucinate Klein's experience in Tingen. Including the latest chapter, he happened to get the information about the spiritual master's job change. Everything about him was too coincidental. The spirit he faced for the first time was solved by his teacher. The extraordinary enemy he faced for the first time was injured, but he happened to be able to solve it. The first time he met west Bill happened to be helping Matthew. After helping Matthew, he happened to discover the brown fairy and happened to find the tripod related to the picture. It happened that the incident happened just before he was about to report it. It happened that Matthew and he were not able to meet each other at this time, so that he could rush to the scene smoothly. There are too many coincidences. The author's writing style cannot control the protagonist's life. He can only arrange a bunch of coincidences for the protagonist to make the events meet the author's expectations. But from the reader's perspective, it feels like there is a "writer" who is crazily using extraordinary abilities to arrange the protagonist's life.

As we all know, deadline is the primary productive force. For the protagonist, the only thing with clear cycle time limit is the writing competition, and the protagonist also plans to win the ranking. When the bookstore owner presented the Divine Comedy to the protagonist, he did not give him the Latin version because of limited preparation time. This shows how tight the cycle progress is, but is the protagonist really in a hurry? It is understandable that things like redeeming advanced meditation methods and privately contacting the judges may increase the chance of winning the competition, but organizing housework, accompanying others on tasks, visiting friends' homes... Does this conform to the normal behavioral logic of a contestant? Graduation defense/professional title review/project acceptance is coming soon. Which good person would start cleaning housework, accompanying others on errands, and visiting relatives and friends at this juncture? Don't you think about priorities and priorities before making a decision?

Author, do you know why your grades are not good? Why is your theme the same as "I Loaded the Occult Panel" but the results are not good, and the other one is off the charts? The reason is the update speed and word count. If you update 10 chapters every day, it will be easy to get monthly tickets and results. 🙂

I'm a bit disgusted with Clara, I hope it's just an ordinary supporting role

The writing is very good. From the current point of view, the pace is smooth and there are no poisonous points. The author is quite high-quality and has philosophical thinking. The description of the world view is not superficial. All in all, it is worth reading.

I have written almost a hundred chapters, but the details of life in the article have not been well reflected, and the financial resources of the protagonist have not been well solved.

Today's chapter was very poorly written. There is absolutely no need to write like this. It is normal for someone to bid after there is a guarantee. Then you are too lucky and the writing is very poor. It would be better if there is no suitable technique.

I have read a lot about the stability of the protagonists in other books, but I always feel that the protagonist in this book is very reckless. Although he says that he is not afraid of investigation, he is still kind to the people around him. It is like walking on a tightrope. He has no awe of the mysterious side and no vigilance of strange extraordinary beings. I hope the author can quickly give the protagonist some fighting strength, otherwise he will not be able to protect himself if he suffers later.

I can understand that it is necessary to describe the environment and some philosophical thinking to reflect the characteristics and personality of the characters, but a large amount of filler has seriously diluted the excitement of the plot. 1. Several chapters are actually speeches of several supporting characters 2. A large amount of scene descriptions are filled in between the protagonist's action descriptions 3. The protagonist's actions are a bit indecisive and miss the key point I feel that these above are very affecting the reading experience, so that I skipped some chapters directly.

It's pretty good. Several similar books have been published recently. This one is well written.

One little question, why does the author use damn imperial monetary units? Don't you know the conversion is confusing?

It seems that the author has knowledge of Kabbalah, Hermeticism, Neoplatonism, Overflow Theory and other Western mystical knowledge. Very good, I hope I can write something new.

The ability of "Xin Sheng" is quite good. Ever since I watched "The Doomsday Jigsaw Game", I have become quite interested in this kind of "narration" ability. Of course, depending on the setting, if it's a "Guardian Angel", it's a bit like the "second me" of "Mumbling Psalms". In short, I look forward to the author writing more different things about this ability. I don't think there's any problem yet, it's just too little.

In the author's setting, the protagonist was a practicing doctor who graduated with a doctorate before time travel, but this is not reflected in the subsequent content at all. After all, the accumulation of knowledge in the previous life can be regarded as a huge wealth, and it is not an exaggeration to even say that it is another golden finger. However, the protagonist in the author's writing seems not to be aware of it at all.

Very nice! ! The author please don't cheat!

Q， Isn't the main character's biggest problem the disease of poverty? The official Steam mission rewards are only working hours, and there is no official money exchange channel. The default is Fu Ge, right?                                                      The protagonist lives in a poor house, and relies on good people for tutoring. He has no money to earn krypton gold to complete commissions to earn points for his skills. It's okay if he doesn't find a rich classmate to make a living. More than 100 working hours can't be exchanged for any money. It's pure oppression. Exchanging more than 100 pounds to buy things for entrustment rewards and decomposition will make you stronger much faster, and you can also use skills to complete game tasks. The author of this type of article always likes to suppress the protagonist's economy after cheating. It is obvious that the benefits of exchanging money are much greater. Many people who have knowledge that can be used in vain after confirming their power must exchange in advance, unless they are pure lone wolves in the later stage.         ，，， Anyway, you can still add skill points in the end, right?😰

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This book by the author should have 100 or 200 orders. There is also a book on my bookshelf that only had 200 orders when it was put on the shelf, but now it has 2,000 orders. So, come on, author.

How should I put it, the long paragraphs of theory are a bit difficult for me to accept. It is hard to imagine that I need to read such long paragraphs of theological theory to read an online article. There is even a chapter that is a whole chapter of literary arguments before it is put on the shelf. . .

It's okay. Let's make an initial order and wait until it reaches 500,000 yuan.

Are there any rules for author additions?

The book is very good, why are there so few subscriptions?