
People Are in Douluo, and Wuhun Controls the Sky Bottle
人在斗罗,武魂掌天瓶
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- Ongoing
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- 1.5M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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Ju Douluo discovered a strange seed. If you don't research it yourself and give it to a slave to waste experiments, what are you writing about? The century-old spirit beast has no attack power? What are you writing
It's very boring. The first half of the chapter is spent on being a flower slave. The protagonist can't even practice soul power. He does a lot of shit and doesn't improve his soul power. He wastes a lot of time. He runs away and is refining elixirs. It's really boring. He doesn't cultivate his soul power and just refining elixirs. I don't know what he's doing. No matter how talented he is, it's a waste of time.
The biggest problem is that the protagonist doesn't know what it means to be low-key
As a flower slave, I keep a high profile to death, for fear that others will not know that I have secrets and treasures.
Last time I watched the latest movie, I found that the protagonist is as stupid as ever. The common man is not guilty, but he is guilty of having a treasure in his possession. Don't you understand the logic? If you are so weak and still dare to make a deal with Qibao, you are like a child holding gold while walking in a busy city, seeking death!
I just saw a ridiculous comment
I write an online novel, and this reader actually asked me to see the normal world. Who doesn't know what this world is like? The normal world is so miserable. I read novels just to have fun. I just want to make you guys laugh. I hope you guys will be merciful. Thank you very much.
With the Palm Palm Vase, you actually gave Tang San the Ice and Fire Eyes
There is a small green bottle that can give ice and fire to Buddha
No, I'll just look at the catalog and you come here! Trade with Ning Fengzhi! A person who was ready to kill Tang San from the beginning of the original text, you are a trash little bastard, but you are still a talented weakling negotiating a deal with him! If Tang San hadn't had the halo of the protagonist, probably everyone would have died.
At first I thought he was a Taoist man modeled after Han Li, but when I saw it, I found out that he was not. He didn't have the strength to create a power, and he wasn't afraid of playing to death and offending people every day.
Shennong: Classic You criticize yours and I write mine I am so wronged that I beg you to be merciful, but I don't reflect at all on why others would scold him Famous name: I wrote it for your happiness, a funny article In reality: writing style It's very low and very poor, and I don't know much about the original work. It mainly focuses on gaining popularity in one place and another in the west. The vernacular writing is like "I am here to win the perfect attendance award" Whether you are a comedy writer or not, not having the ability in this kind of world is the original sin. Bounce back and forth in one place with a genius treasure. Crazy and seeking death. I can't understand the basic settings, especially the aspect of soul power, which can be upgraded to level eight or nine in just a few days.
It's outrageous for a flower slave to be so high-profile, but he's still just doing this, laugh.
The main theme is inexplicable, many plot arrangements are unreasonable, and the writing style is also very old, as if I have gone back to 10 years ago, Xiaobai's writing
If the elders of your Wuhun Temple use slaves like this, what kind of job do you think Qian Daoliu is? The great elder of the Judgment is speechless. He is a brainless black Wuhun Temple.
The worst time Ju Douluo was hacked
How dare Ju Douluo dare to rob criminals in the killing city? How many soul masters did Douluo have in the entire continent during his first period? About 5,000 soul masters died here in Ju Douluo every year? Was this white beggar born at level 8 or was he caught after practicing to level 8? .. How dare Ju Douluo to raise so many descendants of soul masters in captivity? You must know that Wuhun Palace exists as a palace of soul masters. It must absorb the faith of soul masters. You suppressed and bullied so many soul masters and also implicated the younger members of the family... Wuhun Palace has so many soul master families that oppose him, but he still unifies them.
Since I choose to write a Douluo fanfic, I respect the Douluo system. Fewer peripherals. Even if peripherals are added, they must be related to the Douluo system. And the author's plot connection is too blunt. His character is also too childish. There is no such thing as the caution of a model worker. The best way for a grassroots character like the protagonist to grow up is to use his love brain as a source of support when he is weak. After all, nothing is more reliable than the love brain. Then you can cultivate heavenly materials and earthly treasures, take them and brush soul bones. Dou Er's fairy grass can eat four grasses. Won Ma. Like the fiery glue of apricots and vegetables. Soul ring. Soul bone. Add the body of grass jelly.
Why does the protagonist trust Bai Wen so much?
Inexplicably, Ju Douluo is interested in the Asparagus Babel but not the herbal medicine. The Resurrection Saint is looking at the medicine field. Have you read the original joke? If the Wuhun Palace could be so luxurious that the Soul Saint could visit the medicine field, then what would Tang San have to do with it?
Putting aside everything else, can you, a little piece of trash in your 20s, kill a 30,000-year-old soul beast? No matter how talented you are, is it possible for you to have treasures? Even Qian Renxue can't do it, not to mention the natives. Even if they can't do it, they will still be the successors of the gods. Besides, what means can your 20-plus-level little Karami have? You can defy the sky with just one fire? ?
Why buy so many slaves, infrastructure construction? Develop, run away, buy slaves, develop, run away, buy slaves, repeat
I wish all the readers a happy day
I'm really a little busy recently, mainly because I have too many things at work, and I haven't rested yet. I only have time to write something in the evening and read comments. I also want to say a few words. If you like reading what I write, I wish you a happy reading. If you don't like it, please be less aggressive. My recent work in the workplace has made me physically and mentally exhausted. I try to be restrained. I'm sorry, dear readers.
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Dear readers, thank you for your support and care during this period. However, I feel very sorry for you. The main reason is that writing novels is not my main job. My blood fat has been a bit high recently, and I feel really confused when I stay up late. It will be on the shelves tomorrow. I would like to thank all of you for your observation. Tomorrow, I will ask all of you to place an initial order. I will try my best to update it tonight. Thank you, little one!
Does this author have any previous works? This name is so familiar.
? ? ? Unless the protagonist has a background of level 95 or above, why should we expect peaceful coexistence (especially the two eyes of ice and fire, and a lot of fairy grass?