I Lie Flat, and My Talented Star Wife Discovers Me

Alas, it's just the dying fantasy of a little virgin from Sichuan and Chongqing.

The story is still okay, but it's hollow and loose. The daily routine has no highlights, lacks appeal, and always skips viewing. The plot of the novel is not bad, but there are also shortcomings. The highlights and highlights in the story are simplified. Although the narrative is simplified, the wonderful parts cannot be simplified. For example, in A Chinese Ghost Story, the sorrow and entanglement between the two people is inseparable and simplified, including why humans and ghosts can't be together. You didn't write about it. You can use Yan Chixia's words to point out this taboo. Isn't this a highlight? There are also inns for lodging. There are no poems on the paintings of Ning and Nie. I don't know whether the netizens in the story know about your simplification, but as a reader of your book, I can't feel it at all. It hangs in the air and disappears. Do you understand this feeling? The later Jigong, including his life experience, is certainly not lovable, but it is undeniable that because of this, Jigong's image is fuller and more heart-wrenching. Although passing this point directly does not affect the overall situation, there is also a lot missing in the character image. The following description is also the same. There is no abbreviation for the wood transportation in the ancient well, the dialogue between Jigong and the abbot, and the poem "Inscribed on Lin'an Residence" is not highlighted. This is also a highlight. You always avoid the important points and miss the light points. I hope you can pay more attention in the future. Your daily writing is too bland, has no feeling, is not sweet, is not warm, and is too bland. If you look at your subscriptions from the background, which chapter has fewer subscriptions and which chapter has more subscriptions can explain the problem. This is also something you need to pay attention to or improve. Overall, the book is good and easy-going. It would be better if it made more progress in daily life. Come on, keep reading!

No, you, a person who has a systematic way of adding points, are you not afraid of damaging the land if you are a single heroine?

It's Wenzhao Gong again, with a ghost's talent. I find that writers who write about entertainment always like to regard the copied works as their own creations. The audience in another world or after rebirth does not know that the protagonist himself cannot be ignorant. Before you fool others, fool yourself first.

If you have money, you have traveled thousands of miles to meet each other, but if you have no money, it is difficult to hold hands with each other. If you have a hundred thousand people, you can cross the same boat. If you have a million people, you can sleep together. If you are rich and powerful, you can live together with one heart in front of you!

The rest of the plot is probably about giving out sweets, giving out sweets, giving out sweets, and plagiarizing famous works and songs. Nothing new at all. You write this, after the male protagonist's talent was exposed, all kinds of beauties flocked to the story, and even the female protagonist's best friend planned to break up with the male protagonist. At this time, the male protagonist wakes up. The world is so beautiful and there are so many beauties. The male protagonist begins his career of hunting for beauty. The female protagonist discovers that the male protagonist is getting better and better, and gradually finds that she is getting further and further away from the male protagonist. She can't help but think about it every day, and then things are exactly as she thought. More and more girls who are better and younger than herself appear around the male protagonist. In the end, the heroine wanted to say goodbye to the hero, so she drugged the hero's wine, took the opportunity to cut off the hero's head, then hugged the hero's head, got on the sailboat, and drifted away to the vast sea😃

These songs of yours really make me 3Q. Basically, the original singers are all male. I wrote it for my wife to sing, so why don't I write a song suitable for a girl to sing?

After reading the introduction, I have to say that the people in this world are very spiritually deficient, and Butterfly Lovers is so good.

How can Butterfly Lovers be so amazing in modern society?

Let me tell you a cold joke. An author writes about ordinary people getting rich suddenly, but the content about poverty is very real. When he was rich, he went to a club and found many BYD, Changan, Volkswagen, and Chery parked on the roadside. . .