The Chronicles of Eternal Life

The protagonist's constant application of knowledge from his past life feels somewhat forced and contrived. Making money with knowledge that doesn't involve the extraordinary is fine at first, but the part about performing rituals for the deceased feels really awkward.

He keeps calling me a rebellious son, a rebellious son, not a single normal sentence he utters.

The author must have sold their account; the later chapters are very weak, and the plot is full of inexplicable bursts of laughter. I can understand being happy, but why spend so much time on this? No wonder it hasn't been published yet.

You're supposed to be a slow starter, but you're way too slow.

The author went to too much trouble naming them; the maids were named Da Niu and Er Niu, the servants were named Xu Yi and Xu Er, and there were also Da Zhu and Xiao Zhuang... Even just randomly picking up a word from any book is better than these. For example, from this passage of mine, we can easily gather the names Xu Fei, Xu Sui, Xu Kai, and Xu Jian.

Good job! Keep it up, just a little short. Keep it up!

I thought you were dead back then.

It's not popular yet, but it's well-written; I've saved it.

It's great, I love watching it, and I want to watch it again! 😁

Interesting (⇀‸↼) Let me see 🧐