Stockpiling Millions of Tons of Supplies to Survive the Apocalypse with My Parents

Dear author, first of all, your book is very well written, but there are some parts that I feel are not quite right and could be easily misunderstood. Here are three points of feedback (these are just some feedback; if you, the author, find them disagreeable, you are free to disregard them). First point: The female protagonist and her parents had enough supplies to live on, yet they still managed to buy so many supplies for free, emptying out so many supermarkets, gas stations, and so on. I think they could try to find some bargains in a few different cities. Although it's an apocalypse in the novel, we're still in a peaceful world outside of it. Seeing this makes me feel a little uncomfortable, especially when I read a later chapter where the army says that the female lead emptied most of the city's supplies, causing many people to starve to death. That made me feel even worse. Visiting more surrounding cities and getting free shopping isn't out of the question. Second point: This is the point I most want to make: when I saw the female lead pretend to faint and be escorted by a soldier, knock him unconscious, and even try to kill him, I felt really upset. I've been trying to organize my thoughts carefully, afraid you might think I'm being overly moralistic or trying to blackmail you, but I can't help but think back to how our country is able to live so peacefully because of these people who are carrying the burden for us. I've watched many military documentaries, and seeing those admirable people risking their lives to bring us peace, coupled with the fact that they were the ones who carried out the rescues during disasters in our country, makes me feel even more distressed. Third point: Further on, when we saw the outer perimeter of the female lead's villa, a group of soldiers were trying to storm it. I felt that since they had already said they were sent by the base, they shouldn't have been labeled as soldiers anymore. They could have been a team organized by the base itself, mercenaries, security guards, or something like that. I feel that calling someone a soldier is a disgrace. The military would never do such a thing. They are a group of people who would risk their lives to shield us from bullets. If you tell me this is the end of the world and that people's hearts have changed, then I really want to tell you to look at our Chinese history, especially modern history. Is it based on the theory of inherent goodness or inherent evil? I think it's both. Human nature is complex; how can it be generalized? It is because of those kind people who risked their lives that we have the happy life we ​​enjoy today. If you're going to write that part, you could write that Al-Qaeda forces come to rob, and then our army happens to run into them, cooperates with the female lead, and uses this opportunity to communicate with her to see if they can spare some supplies to save people, and then offer her some conditions. This way, you can enrich the plot when writing it later. Now that the country has realized this is the end of the world, talents like these must be well protected and we should cooperate with them. After all, our country has encountered all sorts of major disasters and calamities. We've risen from the brink of collapse and achieved our current success step by step. We wouldn't be so foolish. Finally, I hope the author's writing continues to improve. Keep it up! 😊

Today, at 4:40 PM, the sky in Zhengzhou looked like the end of the world.

Do you know why there's a term like "Qidian Orphanage"?

I've read it! Author, please write faster, I can't read enough! 🐷

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