Quick Transmigration: Black Technology Across Worlds

Two reflections. First, this article is particularly long-winded. The author has to use dozens of sentences to write something clear in two sentences. Therefore, the whole article is suitable for skipping reading. Anyway, those annoying words in the middle will be omitted, and the plot of the article will not be affected at all. Two, it's too bland. She is a heroine, but she is actually very Buddhist. She basically doesn't slap her in the face or abuse her, and just lives her life in a low-key way. Even when I pick peaches with others on the show, I am afraid that I will pick more than other guests, so I carefully control it to the same level as others. I wrote many chapters about this kind of content on the show, just about how she tried to stay moderate. I was so pissed off.

Coming, coming! We love our family Er Qianqian very much!

The heroine seems to be very awesome, but it is of no use. She is very low-key, so low-key that others don't know how awesome she is. The whole story is anecdotal, not exciting, not exciting.

After reading the free part, give the author some advice. It's good to have more costumes, and the story is attractive, but there is too little ending. The author may always think that the story is complete and can start a new one, but in fact many people like to see the ending of each character in the story. Just like those biographical movies, it is always necessary to explain the character's experience after the story, whether it is good or bad. Nowadays, the endings written by the author always give people the feeling of ending in a hurry. After reading a rich story, people can't see the end of the story. Although everyone can guess it, this feeling is different from writing it for people to see. I believe more than one person said this, and I have seen other comments with similar views in the comments. Maybe the author thinks that this will make people feel eager to watch the next episode, but this is different from a TV series. A TV series is a continuous story, and the break in the middle will make people want to follow it. But this is the ending of a story. Not telling the ending will only make readers lose the excitement and will not increase the desire to continue reading. Instead, they will feel that they cannot see the ending every time, which will lower the rating. The author can imagine how uncomfortable it would be if "My Love from the Star" ended after the two went to the island for vacation, and if Harry Potter ended after Voldemort died without explaining the subsequent life and everyone's situation after the war. This is how your novel feels to people now. The story is obviously well written, relaxed and relaxed, and has no poisonous points, but it just doesn't explain the ending of the characters, leaving people feeling like it's stuck in their throats or they find it tasteless after eating half of the meal. . . I hope the author can read this book review

From 17 years to 20 years, I can't live without Bai Yueguang until now. The first time I read Er Qian's writing, I really liked it (mainly because of Er Qian's writing style). Then I saw the book club group and immediately joined it (this was my first book club group). I was called boss when I first joined the group. I was very panicked at that moment (I thought: Oh my god, why are you calling me boss? I am a newbie who just joined the group!) Hmm. Because of everyone's enthusiasm, I quickly blended in with everyone (Hey, hehe, they are all very easy to get along with) Yeah. The first person who impressed me deeply was General Attacker (this is her nickname, she is not offensive at all!). At that time, we were playing chicken and discussed in the group, and then we formed a fixed teammate with General Attacker for a period of time. Then there was Zui Zui (this person often changed his nickname, and he couldn't find anyone at first). Zui Zui was a very warm little cutie. His super profound words were, 'Winning or losing doesn't matter, I just want to play with you. I didn't believe this person who claimed to be a boy, but now I do. Well, I hope you and Wuhen are not allowed to leave each other until they have a child. Hehehe Hmm. Then there is Gu Xiaochen. The first time she noticed Gu Xiaochen was because she and Lao Wang discussed the issue of attack and reception, and then the two of them formed a cp inexplicably. Ah, there are also their articles in the group (it seems to be Wenba?) There are also words. Because Yanyan can play the guzheng, my first impression here is that he is a big boss. Yanyan is really a sweet little cutie. Then the voice is very impressive, and Sister Qun Huabin is also a lot of cuties Of course the pinnacle of my life is the guest appearance! That's right! I have a cameo! It's still a worthy cameo! Ah! I absolutely love it. Hmm. The main thing is Er Qian, we all met because of Er Qian. Now that I have a little sister, I may not have as much time, but that's okay. What's important is your body, and your body's health is more important than anything else. From "Online Games: Youjian Black Shop" to the current "Quick Travel: Black Technology", I have always been there! Er Qian. As long as you keep writing, I will always follow you Love you!

This is the most unlucky young lady I have ever seen. She suffered such a huge setback during her first time traveling.

This is a fast-travel female science fiction novel based on the heroine's soul traveling through thousands of planes and the theme of collecting the wish energy of characters in the planes. The entire text is composed of various world stories. It can be seen from the story written in the first plane that the heroine has a procrastinating personality and cannot make a perfect clean break when dealing with things. Maybe it is because female creatures are more sentimental?                                                                                                    Before the story began, the heroine was a female cultivator from the Xuantian Continent. Due to the double betrayal of her Taoist companion and apprentice, she was trapped at the bottom of the cliff of the Nine Netherworld Abyss. Her body was destroyed, leaving only a trace of soul consciousness. She could barely form a shadow. However, she was also a blessing in disguise, and obtained a system that called herself "Plane Trading Artifact Spirit". The so-called plane transaction is to obtain world coordinates by locating different planes and different clients, enter the corresponding world, fulfill the client's wish, and then harvest energy. The question is, why do we need to obtain energy? As the original article says, the heroine wants to reshape her body and take revenge. The system is to repair itself, and its greatest wish is to return to its own era. If this is the case, does it mean that there should be a plot of the heroine's revenge and a plot of the system world in the follow-up? It's really exciting!              ，，， The heroine and the system are like a pair of happy enemies After meeting, teasing the system has unknowingly become a daily routine, and caring for the host has also unknowingly become a habit. She is often big-hearted and indifferent to what is happening around her, and she is worried about this! She is very kind. Even though she spends her hard-earned wish energy, she still wants to help people who are desperate due to illness. Finally, she develops a unique medicine and becomes an unshakable boss in the medical world. She is both angry and distressed about this!                                                                                                                                                                                                             "The energy of the wish, which was obtained after a great deal of effort, is not used to re-create the body, but it is only used to study medicine, and save the world!"              ，：，，                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       "                                                                           This is purely a sudden whim of Xiaosheng, because the systems of most system novels will disappear or be sacrificed in the finale, so I want to see an alternative ending. Summary The end of the story is too hasty. For example, the first story only describes the heroine who developed a new type of medicine and became a big boss in the medical field, but did not write the story of what happened after becoming a big boss, and did not complete the story. The supporting character Feng Shen was crazy about the heroine after learning that she became a big boss. In the original text, the author chose to mention these two issues in one stroke, giving people a feeling of beginning and no end, which caused the mood to plummet when reading. This will only greatly lower the scores and evaluations of the book in the minds of book lovers, so hope for the best.

Qianqian, I'll come back~ I'm taking exams this year (I'm in the third grade of junior high school), so I can't chase him. There were signs of fire before he left. It's very powerful. He is already a level 5 writer. To be honest, I don't really watch fast travel, but the short stories are also very interesting. Qian, please try to write better, more interesting and meaningful stories. The next time I come back, it will be the day I regain my starting point! Come on! You have all the votes and I have all the votes~Er Qian will explode tomorrow~ I just gave my father~Oli!

I have invested 10,000 points, so don't stop updating!

After watching several worlds, it's a bit poisonous. The protagonist is too Buddha, the writing is too watery, the whole story is just a running story, not a scumbag or a slap in the face, the author also made the supporting characters very disgusting, too disgusting. The whole article has no passion or plot. The protagonist lives a dull life, and the fate of the best relatives is not written out. They are not punished, but live a good life. The ending of each unit is hasty, just like... Ah, it feels like it is over after I finish it, boring, boring.