Qingyuan Immortal Clan

Another plug-in brainless bitch

Unknowingly, I have written 100,000 words, which is a small milestone for Taibai, a new author. Haha, due to work reasons, many readers cannot reply in time to their chapters or comments, and I don't know how to reply (laugh╮( •́ω•̀ )╭), Taibai's writing power is limited, some settings or plots and foreshadowing may not be fully considered and need to be improved. Everyone is welcome to criticize and point out, just don't be too angry haha~ Getting back to the subject, this book requires a lot of sidekicks. Book friends can write the names, realms, and identities of the sidekicks in the comment area (the more detailed, the better, Taibai can copy the book review hahaha), the author chooses according to the needs of the plot hahaha Finally, please read and recommend~

The setting of magical instruments is still not very reasonable: it is inappropriate to use first-level low-grade magical instruments in the later stages of Qi training.

The family cohesion is not good, even those with better qualifications will run away.

Let's make an advertisement: I will be the "Clan Leader". If you want to become an immortal, come and be my follower. Let's kill and conquer the world of immortality together.

The devil's cave is coming, and evil disasters are everywhere? Why does it look like this is just a clichéd family cultivating immortality novel to me?

This book, hey, helps the disciples of the sect to persuade them to retreat.

I recommend paying for chapters after 100 chapters, because there are too few to attract people. For the more popular paid chapters, many people subscribe.

Relatively bland, the golden fingers are becoming less and less prominent. The main character feels average.

I scanned the catalog... First-grade low-level Talisman Master 😰 and I gave up immediately.

Is the writer from Wenchang, Hainan or Xuwen, Zhanjiang? Is the internet disconnected at home?

What is brother doing? Rest for so long

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down, work hard and encourage each other 😁

The setting is good, the writing is okay, and the author is probably not a newbie, but I feel that the previous perspective and narrative focus are a bit off, and even the family portrait has too many characters written at the same time. The sixth chapter of the opening chapter is 2 months later, and then three years have passed in more than ten chapters. The beginning of the chapter is not so out of rhythm.