
One Piece: Call Me Magneto
海贼:叫我万磁王
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- Completed
- Length
- 729k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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339Chapters
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Out out of the factory, just go to the factory to make screws. After a few days of training at the beginning, you can be 50-50 equal to the navy vice admiral who can do two colors and domineering in your own department, and the deserter king is not as bad as you. Also, the conversation with the Vice Admiral of the Navy Headquarters was so embarrassing that I had to leave the three rooms and one hall. The dignified Vice Admiral of the Navy Headquarters actually asked a newcomer for his nickname. Moreover, there was no systematic description of the process of the protagonist becoming stronger. Even the fruit development was quite abstract. Even if you go to a future technological kingdom to systematically learn knowledge. Knowledge, and then turned into a lot of skills, I also recognized it, but if you just learn the brainless exercise of the Deserter King, and then roughly develop the fruit a few times, without being domineering, you can be 50-50 equal to the Vice Admiral of the Navy Headquarters. If Kidd's fruit in the original book was really so awesome, he would have reached the top of the Yonko when he first challenged the red-haired one.
Ducici is a fruit, but he is not a crazy guy 😏
Kidd Pirates members
A total of 31 people, the pictures are only some of the members
The comment section is full of double standards. Oda cheats the character and destroys his combat power: Good! Big tail, no need to say more! The fan author cheats the character: it is illogical, the combat power is broken, and it is rubbish!
Pictures of magnetic fruit and thunder fruit
The magnetic fruit has its own lightning on its surface⚡️
Why has no one written about Huo Banxian? After eating the fruit, he awakens his innate voodoo body, which passively reflects all damage and is 100% indefensible against real damage. You know how I have lived these ten years, do you know? Do you know how much I suffered in order to develop this indestructible body? The world's greatest swordsman slashed me and he died. There was no joy in fighting. Even dogs wouldn't eat this straw fruit 🤓
It is reasonable for a Lanjiao to fly across the whole group into the dead sea without even meeting the Lieutenant General. It's difficult to control more than a dozen cannonballs, but you can still make the lieutenant general vomit blood? A mole can chop a few hundred meters of Neptune like a melon in a windless zone, and a 300-million-meter-high Luffy on top can be chopped like vegetables. At least find out what you are writing a book about?
Did you develop the Magneto Fruit into Magneto? At least we need to turn on a magnetic field to rotate, right?
The writing is the same as the movie version of Luffy Previous post: The magnetic fruit can control a cannonball, but it can only go as far as two hundred meters before losing control Next post: Defeat the Vice Admiral Previous post: The electromagnetic push coin developed with great concentration can be as powerful as a bullet Next post : Defeat the Shichibukai natural-type rustling fruit user Previous post: The electromagnetic push can only discharge 10,000 volts, which is one thousandth of the power of Enero's normal attack Next post: Defeat Enero, the God of Sky Island Did it go through your mind when you wrote it? If the protagonist is weak, he should develop first. You don't mean to say harsh things while also having no strength, but you also forcefully write about him defeating powerful enemies It gives me the feeling that you are desperately suppressing the growth of the protagonist, and on the other hand, you are afraid that the protagonist will not have a strong record.
Magneto is really not that good, but Qing Xiaobing is a bit more awesome. In a world like Pirates where the average person has a superhuman body, he is a bit unable to do anything.