
One Piece: From the Start, I Awaken the Phoenix Cloth’s Cosmo
海贼:开局觉醒凤凰座小宇宙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 150k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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73Chapters
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The combat power of Saints is much higher than that of Pirates, but I don't know how many years it would take to train on my own! Of course, near-death can speed up the progress, but it doesn't matter. The protagonist has just awakened, and Seiya has been practicing for about ten years before reaching the sixth sense. The protagonist's talent is not as good as others who have not had many near-death experiences. It doesn't matter if he grows slowly, but at the peak of his sixth sense, he can kill pirates indiscriminately.
After reading a few pictures, the author only described the appearance with the word "sneer"? You have to sneer at everything you say? The crooked-mouthed Dragon King's younger brother, the Sneer King
The protagonist who suffers a lot and has deep hatred meets the protagonist group at the beginning. It is really a third-rate plot.
Bronze Saints can defeat pirates, after all, the minimum limit is Sonic Punch 😰
Tell me what you think after reading it! Originally, the subject matter chosen by the author was quite attractive, but it is a pity that the content was not well written! Why? Because he deliberately suppresses the protagonist's growth. I am currently following up another Saint Seiya fan novel of the same style called "Marvel, Awakening the Microverse at the Beginning". The protagonist in it also awakens the power of the Phoenix Microverse, and the author does not deliberately suppress the protagonist. Also lest the protagonist become a character fast enough, various bugs are used to enhance the protagonist's strength, such as using infinite gems to enhance the character. The protagonist first asked Ancient One to borrow the Time Stone to upgrade his strength from a Bronze Saint to a Silver Saint, and then borrowed the ether particles of the Reality Stone in Thor's girlfriend's body to upgrade to a Gold Saint. Now they all punch Mephitus, the leader of hell, and kick the Lord of heaven. The feeling of reading is joyful and refreshing. Moreover, the Saint Cloth was given as a complete set. First, I made the Bronze Saint Cloth myself, and then I made the Dark Phoenix Saint Cloth (Death Queen Island Chapter) after the bronze business collapsed. By the way, the protagonist beat the hell lord Mephitus while wearing the Dark Phoenix Saint Cloth. Now the protagonist is planning to make sacred clothes. That's a joy to read! ! Unlike the protagonist of this book, he was only given one part of the Bronze Saint Cloth at the beginning, and only the palm part. Nausea! Moreover, the author is obviously a novice author, and there are many contradictory parts in the writing. For example, the protagonist's relatives were killed by a bomb by the Baki Pirates, and the protagonist himself was also affected and died. Fortunately, the Phoenix was reborn from the ashes and survived. He had just vowed to kill Baki. When the members of the pirate group saw that the Straw Hat Pirates were fighting against the Bucky Pirates, they gave up the opportunity for revenge to the Straw Hats and became a bystander. Moreover, they looked at it with the eyes and mentality of looking at the second dimension with a three-dimensional fang, and felt that they were superior to others. This mentality and this inconsistent feeling are so disgusting!
It looks weird, but I can't explain why.
You don't need to watch it to know that Licking Mengqi's Family is a subject that many people hate.
A small universe is a small universe. What is the Phoenix small universe? Is there such a setting?
Kill the pirates, kill them all
The Sixth Sense can compare to Pirates, right?