1394 Cultivation of Immortality in Two Realms

I don't understand why a book of this quality is so unpopular haha, I think the ideas and settings are pretty good. I recommend the author to recommend himself to Chiji. Other interested readers can also join in! A small comment: if some backgrounds were explained more clearly at the beginning, the experience would be better. For example, when the spirit beast first appeared, there was a lack of explanation and setting, which was only added later... And there could be more foreshadowing about the immature age/character of the protagonist and the little fat man. I feel that the protagonist sometimes behaves very steadily, but when the little fat man shouts, he turns into a primary school student again🤣

Except for the two circles of Wenzhaogong, which are a bit interesting, what everyone else writes is a piece of shit.

Here comes the old reader, who has read your hero's destiny. The writing is very good, but it's a pity that the outline of the later Invincible Lord was missing? Support the author now

The writing is good, but I have some suggestions for you. Write more plots about the development of different worlds. Look at the authors who write about time travel between two worlds. They are all authors who mainly write about how to develop in different worlds. As for just taking it with you where you live. In addition, although you are writing about a junior high school student, his way of dealing with others should also improve step by step. At the very least, readers should feel that he is gradually growing. Rather than intuitively, he has been living in an age of innocence.

When you read books from both worlds, you want to read wonderful stories, but the author spends a lot of pen and ink to describe some cultivation methods, techniques, and principles... Content like this, no matter how consistent your logic is, is self-enjoyment and self-pleasure. It is difficult for readers to resonate with it, because everyone knows that this is what the author is making up. The false is greater than the true, and it is tasteless and a pity to discard. That's how I feel.

What I wrote above feels a little bit toxic. It should be because the age of the protagonist is too young, which makes people feel a bit "mentally retarded" when they first enter the other world. The writing at the end is okay. What do you think of giving the protagonist a first grade in junior high school? . .

The first three chapters are set in the first grade of junior high school. They become classmates after being exported to a different world, and they even left behind the teaching aids. I can understand the character set by the author. But when it comes to Chapter 9, when facing representatives of several families in Fang City, he can be neither humble nor arrogant, generous and generous, with extraordinary bearing and dexterity. I read six chapters, not six years.

Although the protagonist is very immature at first, I feel pretty good after watching it. I look forward to the update 😁

In what state of mind did the author write? Who are you writing to if you are so poisonous?

The quality of Qidian articles is getting lower and lower now. This kind of quality is too low.

It's not like a novel written by a human being. Don't read it.

It is a good book that has been buried under the starting point. Personally, the characters are a bit complicated. They are not like a 12-year-old kid in the first grade of junior high school, and their realm is also different. It is a bit difficult to understand the popular reading.

The book is a good book, but the space fragment plot should be deleted, otherwise it will be a bit messy. There are so many turbulent spaces, which gives the impression that everyone can encounter a different world. Even if there are 60,000 billion people in the world, there are 600,000 different worlds.

I saw Chapter 43. With such a good storyline, what do you do as the author? Do you have to add any messy conflicts? No wonder no one watched it when it started so well, but now it makes me feel bad.

I've read Hero's Destiny before, written by Yuanyuan Xiong. That book is really good. I don't know if it was written by him.