
Comprehensive Understanding: a Dimensional Journey Starting from Douluo
悟性逆天:从斗罗开始的次元之旅
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- Completed
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- 1.6M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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To be fair - something that makes people laugh
Unless it's a military mystery, no one will pay attention to the structure of a firearm. Take me as an example. I at most know how to make a breakgun, but the rifling in the barrel cannot be made by hand unless you use a mold to pour it from the beginning. In ancient times, it was impossible to make modern bullets without a complete technological process. The best you could do was make black powder bullets. However, such power was of no use in Douluo Continent. Because in order for a normal bullet to have the effect of a modern bullet, it must have nitroglycerine, a chemical substance that can instantly explode with powerful power after impact. I guess normal people don't even remember the chemical formula. A normal person made a modern firearm in feudal ancient times, which makes me want to complain. Thinking about it makes people laugh. No matter how cool your writing is, you should still take care of our brains. We are not fools. Observing the exercise routes in Tangshan and being able to name those acupoints, I was really convinced. You know so much, why are you still an otaku? Knowing so much why still accomplishing nothing. See through other people's skills, their routes, and create their own skills. You didn't create it that way. You didn't even find a test subject, you just practiced directly. You are really awesome.
How can I put it, the author's description of Dou Yi's social security was too good. No one even paid attention to the business that the protagonist, a six-year-old child, started making money every day. He even saved up to 300,000 gold coins in one or two years. Tang San cried to death. Then he jumped too fast from chapter 20. The author obviously didn't grasp the rhythm well, and the prediction would be cut off.
When I saw that a chat group was suddenly added, I couldn't stand it. The cheats are usually explained in the first few chapters. How could cheats be added after more than 20 chapters? , If you want to travel to other worlds, you can't do this. You can directly use your understanding to go against the heavens, and finally kill the Dark Evil God Tiger to absorb the soul ring and beads to gain the space ability. Can't you use your understanding to go against the heavens to develop the ability to travel through the world? Obviously you can attract readers with your extraordinary understanding, but in the end, you attracted them for more than twenty chapters and then drove them away.
To be honest, when I saw the first picture of Brain Martial Spirit, I thought that the final journey through the heavens was about the protagonist growing up and breaking the confinement of the world, sublimating the world and then ascending! Unexpectedly, I ended up in a chat group and upgraded Wuhun to a plug-in. I felt that the quality of the book was obviously lowered.
There's no need to look at the King of Wisdom. Just kidding, shouldn't the protagonist of his own martial soul and the Law of Wisdom use his own brain? It seems like there is an extra artificial intelligence and a system. Why don't I just read the system text and understand it with just "ding". The grass dog tail continues the mink.
Errors and Omissions
1. A modern firearm made by the protagonist's hand has no industrial foundation. How can it be made by hand, let alone the number of bullets? This is not an assembly line production, how can you produce so many bullets 2. When the protagonist hires people to obtain the first soul ring, a soul hunting team, level 40 or 50 They're all out, it's just like a joke. In the place where the protagonist is staying, the city lord is only about forty. How can you find a bunch of people in their forties and fifties? I think it's possible in the Star Dou Forest 3. The protagonist's business is so big. How can a level 10 person who hasn't even obtained the first soul ring hold it? After reading about ten chapters, don't ask, it's just not okay to ask.
Still defying heaven's understanding and wisdom? Does the author have one?
If the novel has a female protagonist, to be honest, I don't like the original female protagonist, it will make me feel less immersed in the novel.
Giant Poison, a chat group came out of nowhere. If you don't come, I'll treat you like a Douluo fan. It's okay if there is a collapse of iron (after all, the technology is not bad) But you have another one (combat power rubbish, plot garbage) After leaving the chat group, it collapsed
The protagonist didn't look cool at all. He made such a big fuss in a meeting, but was provoked at the beginning, interrupted constantly during the conversation, and spent six hours teaching science... It reminded me that the protagonist bought more than 20 maids before, but almost forgot about his responsibilities. When cleaning, the protagonist was embarrassed to be lazy, so he went to help...
Cultivation is so slow. In a place where strong men can rape women at will, if you don't practice hard, you will be able to do so many miscellaneous things. If I had the ability to observe the meridians and acupoints of the flesh and blood all over my body, I would have long ago become the Martial Saint Immortal in "Yang Shen", the God-Seeing Immortality in "The Romance of Dragon and Snake", the third-level gene lock in "Infinite Horror", and the tenth-level divine transformation of the body secret realm in "Eternal Life".
In the future, if you see someone bragging about Shrek copying these plot clips from the original novel, I will throw this comment in his face. The reason why the original novel helped Oscar obtain the soul ring is because Oscar is destined to be Shrek's. Dai Mubai will eventually return to the royal family, so Dai Mubai still has to obtain the soul ring on his own? If you don't become part of their small group, why should they help you obtain the soul ring? If it were me, I would join Wuhun Palace directly. Sixty-two people were admitted and fourteen graduated. These fourteen people may also include Shrek's teachers. Maybe Flanders also counts himself, Yu Xiaogang, and Liu Erlong among them 😅 The remaining ones who have not graduated are either the same or useless. ☝️Hey! 🤓Dai Mubai, Oscar, and Ma Hongjun also have a tendency to be ruined by education 😄 Oscar is lazy and not diligent, Dai Mubai degenerates into eating, drinking, whoring and gambling, Ma Hongjun is more important and trusts Flanders to go whoring to solve the evil fire, he does not use his brain and relies on Flanders to find a way to be invincible 😅 It's time to introduce how bad Shrek Academy is as a whole, an ordinary small village does not have Notting Academy One-third the size, but our Flanders only rented one-third of the area to build a simple building, put up an arch and hung a tattered plaque and called it a college. The school building was formerly occupied by villagers, and the villagers were responsible for the food 😰
What was originally a good story about the protagonist's struggle suddenly created an intelligent life in his mind and just lay down...
It can be seen that the author wants to innovate and write something different. As a result, the adaptation was too advanced and was unacceptable to the current world. Times have changed. Just like Jin Yong's era of Hong Kong comics, it was common for heroines to lose their virginity, but now the author can be beaten to death!
Wuhun brain
As we all know, the character's intelligence and layout level depend on the author's level I haven't read it yet, but I feel it🤓
The protagonist has cultivated the Extreme Demonic Eyes and has extraordinary organs. The eyesight is the same as that of real people.
Small suggestion
If reasonable and permitted. You can try to develop the spiritual method of transforming the sky and striking the earth. This thing is really awesome. This technique is dedicated to practicing, tempering, and using mental power. In Huang Yi's novel. The master of the magician Pang Ban, Meng Chixing, practiced this technique and used his spiritual power to transform his physical body. Make your body comparable to fine steel or even worse than fine steel. After his death, his disciples burned his body with fire for three days and three nights. Later I forgot whether it was Ba Si Ba or Si Han Fei. In short, it is also a method of cultivation. Directly use mental power to create a spiritual world, and then pull the opponent's spirit to reincarnate with you for hundreds of generations.
The "amazing wisdom" of selling dog meat on sheep's heads
Pen
No wonder your book was exempted, and after reading about thirty chapters, you suddenly jumped out of the sewer and into the mire of a chat group. It's not strange at all for a person to write a bunch of soliloquy narrations for readers to see, your pen, your entrance limit exemption, and this shabby place!
Not tight
The protagonist doesn't look very smart, he has a martial arts brain
The front is good, but suddenly starting from the mercenary group, I don't know what you wrote. Once the resurrection coins came out, the whole novel was completely boring.
Now, can the authors who write Douluo fanfics stop writing random things just to make jokes? After reading dozens of Douluo fanfics, as long as the protagonist is a commoner, no matter how awesome the awakened martial soul is, there will always be a line about "Fighting Soul"! ! ! !
A dungeon that can be cleared with a pistol, does it require training?🤭
Author, I feel that you are not suitable for writing novels. You should find a job.
Brothers
If you find any problems or have any ideas, please leave a message and I will correct it. I hope I can write this first novel ヽ( ̄ω ̄( ̄ω ̄)ゝ
The entire level of the Douluo Sewer is like the dimensionality reduction of Ta Ma.
Only then did I realize that the status was "completed"... Entered the palace? 🤔🤔🤔
They were so enlightened that they started chatting in the group again. What's the point? Is it too small?
I recommend a novel, "The Peerless Tang Sect: Dai Luoli's Road to Godhood". It's super good. You can click on my profile picture to read it directly. If it doesn't look good, feel free to comment.
In this book, God King Douluo is at the near-annihilation level, and the chat group is at the fifth level.
This is the first time I saw someone destroying a star with a power of 500 tons. The reason is that the combined attack of three god kings almost destroyed the planet, so the star level is not even close. If you compare the planets in the Douluo World with the planets in the heavens and worlds, it is awesome.