Hogwarts: Harry Returns from the Lands Between

Tulai

There are a lot of Harry Potters who have returned from various places, and many of them are excellent. This article is a follow-up work. It is difficult to write a unique one. The protagonist needs to have distinctive characteristics, and the supporting characters must be portrayed with depth, so that the new Harry can collide with the original characters to create a novel story. The writing style of the author of this article is not bad, and the story writing is not bad. This is an advantage. However, the characteristics of the protagonist are not distinctive, and he has no personality traits. He seems to be strong, calm and wise, but there is basically no description. In terms of force, except for fighting Malfoy, fighting against trolls and the original work are not outstanding. In terms of intelligence, several storylines that analyze the essence of the problem are very deliberate and have a strong smell of spoilers. It is obvious that the author has preset the results to reverse the process, and also pretends that the protagonist does not know, and the writing is not clever. In terms of the portrayal of supporting characters, they only show the prominent stereotypes of each supporting character in the original work, such as Ron's timidity, Hermione's emphasis on rules, Dumbledore's behind-the-scenes planning, and Snape's deep love. But apart from these traits, each character basically has no other characteristics, and there is no character growth. Just like an NPC in a stand-alone game, except for the basic task dialog box, there is no new performance. These two shortcomings have limited the growth of this novel. It is recommended that the author think about it and design it again. (There is no violation, the author's behavior in deleting the post was wrong!)

Demigod Harry

How did the fact that the Sorting Hat is dirty become a joke similar to that of Blind Douluo? Could it be that all the past headmasters of Hogwarts couldn't even use a cleaning spell?

Is there a dragon clan? If there is, I won't watch it. The dragon clan dogs are the most annoying.

Just learned that the actor of Professor McGonagall has passed away... Hogwarts is now without a Headmistress... Good go, Ms. Maggie Smith... Thank you

After reading Chapter 20, I feel it's a bit watery and the plot isn't very attractive.

This Harry can do it, he has borderline warm and hospitable qualities. By the way, will it give Hogwarts a little dragon thunder shock?😏

I have an idea that Dumbledore left Harry in the care of his uncle and suffered all kinds of torture to prevent Harry from becoming a wimp like his father James.

Especially when it comes to killing trolls, it's really hard to scrape them.