Songs of Chu in the Ji Han

Xuzhou could be a place that could assemble a version of the Pei County entrepreneurial group from the Eastern Han Dynasty. The Liu family had a little Pei emperor, an empress surnamed Lü, a strategist surnamed Chen, a minister surnamed Zhang, and if you found a logistics officer surnamed Xiao Guan, the warlords at the end of the Han Dynasty would mutter: "The Pei County group is having a resurrection match."

This Liu the Fool thought he was invincible, and looked at Zhou Yu as if he were a fool. He told him directly, "Your brother was killed by someone I, Liu the Fool, had sent. You're stupid and cowardly, and you call yourself a scholar? In my eyes, you're nothing but a dog!" This kind of protagonist with such low intelligence makes it impossible to continue watching!

There are many interesting ideas, and the research is quite good, but there are too many writing flaws... Furthermore, why would figures of Cao Cao and Yuan Shao's stature constantly dissect and elaborate on matters that aren't so easily discussed openly? If you're worried about readers not understanding, you can explain it using a third-person perspective/the protagonist's inner monologue.

Liu Bei did not claim the title of king, but Liu Biao did. This is a very serious problem!!! Not to mention ancient ethical concepts. Liu Bei was a warlord who conquered the land for decades, only slightly inferior to Cao Cao, and nearly defeated Cao Cao in his later years. Liu Bei was skilled at recognizing and employing talent.

Your surname is Liu, your wife's surname is Lü, you are Liu Bang.

A child out of thin air? They created a legitimate eldest son for Liu Bei out of thin air?

This Liu Biao is a Frankenstein's monster, possessing the qualities of various wise rulers (Liu Bang's roguish magnanimity, Liu Bei's benevolence, Cao Cao's cunning, etc.). I want to ask, does such a person even exist? Such a character is fragmented, with one personality one moment and another behavior the next, making him unrealistic. Who would truly like someone like Liu Biao?

Can I win over Zhen Mi? 🥵🥵🥵🥵

The writing quality is definitely not a problem. It's just that the protagonist you're writing is almost a mask of hypocrisy and self-interest. The only genuine kindness he shows towards ordinary people is also ruined by earlier issues, making it seem like you're just treating them as your personal property. I've read almost all of your books, and the best one is the one about Zheng Ping.

Why not give his own father the title of Retired Emperor? Isn't that going against the natural order?