Tokyo: I Took in Homeless Beautiful Girls

Among the several female characters, Maki is my favorite. Who doesn't like the innocent, cute and stupid elf? The one I like the least is my cousin. I don't see any charm at the moment. Maybe I don't have any feelings for this young female imp character who likes to be called a miscellaneous fish~, but I am looking forward to her performance in the Shura Field later. It would be great if she is the younger sister in the recent new series The Lost Dog Heroine. The Shura Field needs more aggressive people to make the blood flow like a river. Finally, I have a little regret. I originally thought that the (perverted) characteristics of each character were very interesting, but Maki only had a little bit of it at the beginning, and it didn't show much later. I thought I would be a sister. The more Maki did it, the more she felt better, and Mana Kobe burst into tears. In short, this is a good book. The above remarks are only my own opinions. There may be some misunderstandings. I hope you can understand me. 🙂

The male protagonist's character is a very normal one for a harem novel. He will be a little hesitant at first, but after chapter 40, he will start to be a scumbag. He is the type who no longer hesitates after he is sure of his mind. Driving fast, I heard that one-third of this book contains deleted content

I've been reading Nikkei for two or three years at Qidian. This is one of the few that can be read after the decline of Nikkei. At least it's impressive among a bunch of wives' novels (mainly because of the characteristics of the heroines).

I found a lot of whispers in a small amount of plots

I don't like this book, but I like the author. Can the author reveal the itinerary?

Many people complained about Maki's character and the fact that the male protagonist actually gave her money at the beginning. Actually, regular readers should know that when I write heroines, they are basically substituted into real life situations. This is a habit I have had since the first book. What does it mean? It means that the heroine has a prototype in reality and I know her. Of course, I'm actually a little embarrassed to say this. Maki's prototype is actually me, the me in the rebellious period before. Those who have read the previous book should also feel that Maki's sometimes psychological activities are very similar to those of Umino Ryoko. This is because their prototypes are both mine. The so-called "running away from home" is also a reality. When I was in high school, I had a quarrel with my parents because of something that was not easy to talk about. In fact, it was not a quarrel, but I suddenly got angry and ran away from home. I didn't bring any money with me at that time. I only had my mobile phone and bus card with me. After I left home, I turned off my phone and took the bus to wander around without knowing where I was going. Finally, I ended up in the big park next to the junior high school out of nowhere. I sat there all afternoon. I got tired from sitting there at night and wanted to go to a convenience store, because there are convenience stores here where I can buy things with my bus card. I wanted to see if there was anything I could eat. It was here that I saw my junior high school classmate. Her family lived in the school district next door. Her parents have gone back to their hometown because of the holidays these days, but she doesn't want to go back because she is sick, so she stays here. As soon as she entered the convenience store, she saw me sitting in a daze on a chair at the door, and curiously asked me why I was here. I felt very tired at that time, and I didn't want to make up any more unnecessary lies, so I simply said that I had run away from home. As a result, she looked at me in surprise and asked me why I wanted to leave home. I suddenly felt a little embarrassed. I ran out because I was sulking. I was embarrassed to say it, but I felt weird if I didn't say it. So I pretended not to care and said that I asked my parents for money to recharge Q coins, but my parents didn't give it, so I ran out in anger. Of course I was joking, saying something bad or something. The truth is definitely not that simple, right? How could you run away from home because of something like this? But she believed it. Her beautiful eyes widened. She was staring straight at me like this, which made me so panicked that I didn't dare to look at her. Just when I was about to say something bad again, she suddenly said that she still had two hundred yuan and asked me if I wanted to top up Q coins. I was shocked at that time. Later I found out that the two hundred yuan was the living expenses her parents had left for her these days. ………… I stayed at her house for three days and two nights. That was probably the craziest and happiest thing I did during my rebellious period.

I can only look at it in the second dimension. After taking it in real life, I couldn't even think about it. I guess my sister gradually couldn't satisfy the sense of betrayal and started cheating. My sister is even more heavyweight and there is a high probability that she will join forces with her sister to find someone to cheat on her.

Let's not talk about how this novel is written, but why does it keep opening on its own in the browser? ? ?

Seriously, you are such a gem of an author. Your work is both simple and profound, so I gave you a reward of 50 yuan. Although it is not much, it is not a reward.

In fact, the meaning of 🦌 is not only 🦌, but also the period of time before you look for the side dishes and 🦌 comes out. In this period of independent time cut off from your difficult life, you have only one simple goal: 🦌, and you know that this goal will be achieved. It is this certainty and pure happiness that brings you joy and comfort. After all, life is full of failed hopes.

This is the best light novel this year. The heroine is innovative, the protagonist is responsible, neither clumsy nor depressing, the characters are all full-bodied (radical and slightly twisted characters are outstanding), and they are all loving. There is a sense of lightning protection but there are twists and turns, there is no thunder and no depression, there is no violence, there are novel ideas, there is writing and logic, the plot is reasonable and not procrastinating, the emotions are full, and the environmental details in the text are also very good. They are all advantages. Come on~~ (Attached is a picture of half a year at Ginkakuji Temple, the author describes it very well)

Every group needs the following types of people: The leading sheep 🐏 The fighting wolf 🐺 The brave tiger 🐯 The non-stop deer 🦌 The non-stop deer 🦌 The non-stop deer 🦌 The non-stop deer 🦌 The non-stop deer 🦌 No Non-stop deer🦌non-stop deer🦌non-stop deer🦌non-stop deer🦌non-stop deer🦌non-stop deer🦌non-stop deer🦌non-stop deer🦌non-stop deer🦌non-stop deer🦌non-stop deer🦌non-stop deer🦌

Thanks to the author. I had already quit, but recently started again 🙂

The author has a thorough study of Japanese culture and his writing is exquisite and penetrating.

After reading it, to be honest, I was in a hurry. The content of 100 chapters can be expanded to two or three hundred, adding daily plots or deepening the characteristics of the heroine. Because reading the latest chapter feels like someone is forcing you to eat instead of chewing carefully, you will choke. Female + settings + short description + inexplicable favorability, and then you can go straight to partying. Then there is the sense of immorality. To be honest, I don't feel it at all. Why do so many people like to defeat the superior? Identity, sense of achievement, expectation, curiosity, although the concepts below are different from those of this book, they are still very similar, and it is too easy to get it. Then I will just feel like this, like this, and then I will continue to indulge in obscenity. It's like drawing a card. I give you a few draws at the beginning, but if you can't draw anymore, the desire will be very strong. After charging for three or four hundred draws, it will be boring in the end and just thrown into the warehouse. It jumps right into the topic at the beginning and the content after that can only be muddled through by being astringent. However, the female characters have no characteristics that make people care. No matter how many small batches you write, people will not buy it. Those previous reminders are just sperm in the brain. Those who later said that the water was bad must also be them. Even if you write pornographic stories, you still have to write something that will keep the reader's mind filled with scraps. Otherwise, how do you make money and compete with others? I still hope the author can lay out the plot. At the beginning, you won't expect to achieve results. If you have some achievements, you have earned it. If you praise it too much and fall short of your expectations, you will always be disappointed. I really hope the author will write well and write slowly. I haven't written such a long comment for a long time, so I comment very seriously.

When did the author run away from home? I'd better prepare the sack in advance and catch him in the dark room hehehe

No fun, I thought they were twin girls

I have only read the free chapter so far, and I feel that the male protagonist is really too miserable. What kind of people are around him... The twin sister is even more speechless. To put it bluntly, she still subconsciously puts her younger sister above the male protagonist. This will definitely cause thunder in the future.

No, bro, why are you writing the 91 script here? As a consumer, you must read critically!

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I seem to have seen the future and hope of 18+Galgame. There is Sese in the plot, and there is plot in Sese 🤭🤭🤭 Maki: I can't do what my sister can do, Maki wants to take away my sister's bird position and mouth 😡 Mana: I have to declare that you are the challenger 🪖 Shiori: I will win 😟

Well, there is no plot, it is all about character interaction. It feels like playing a pornographic version of galgame without any patches. Suitable for making games. But my galgame is not popular in our country,

The short description made me fall in love with Maki's character, she is arrogant, cute and fun.

Nothing 👐 is more suitable than ☝️this one 👌 ☝️ It's very easy to set up. After the author finishes writing, I will find two artists to make a _______. 😚 The protagonist's source of money: writing/working in a pet shop/picking up money Regular locations: home/shopping street/Beijing University/pet shop/high school/home of the heroine We Chinese must also have our own original ____!

This subject reminds me of Sister Kiss. ​​Has the author read it? The ending of Sister Kiss really shocked me. It was so outrageous, but it also made my stomach hurt. It was so good and I loved watching it😋

Dude, you really know how to write. What's the difference between this and reading a pure love book?🙂

Sure enough, I still can't accept Mana😅

The author is still too immature, and his daily writing is not very good. He relies on the novel settings in the front to attract readers, but it is a bit boring later.

I have read the previous few books by this author, but they all had some minor flaws. This one has really improved, it is much smoother, and the plot is better.

Why can't I feel anything about it... After reading a few chapters, I started skipping to read it. I remember I used to like reading this kind of thing 😭