Faerie Embers

This book can. No system, no time travel, I like this very much. The characters in it are real and full-bodied, and there are no brainless or invincible characters. The world revealed so far is still very small, so I look forward to the follow-up plot.

Is this a family story or a personal story? The writing is a bit group-like, but the protagonist is not close to the family and is a bit separated. I don't know whether to expect the development of the family or the protagonist's solo career. The protagonist feels resourceful in the early stage, but in the middle stage, he is purely a reckless revenge type, and I don't know what the positioning is. The wife has no name, but the protagonist's revenge for his wife does not feel enough. The early stage is quite good, but the revenge plot in the middle stage is a bit ordinary.

I came here to read books because I was really short of books.

One of the rare masterpieces in recent years, indigenous, gold-free, panel-less, and system-less is so rare. In addition, the writing is superb and the plot is exciting. It is more than a few blocks better than the garbage that ranks among the top ten in terms of traffic. Keep up the good work.

A village is just outside the city. How about writing a county or town? It was outrageous enough to see people cultivating immortality in shantytowns before, so you might as well just write about shantytowns. If mortals can't live in the fairy city, then there should be craftsmen outside the fairy city. After all, it was a family that cultivated immortals before. It shouldn't be a problem for mortals to build a big house to live in. Why does it feel like living in a mud house and thatched house? ? ? Does a monk from a cultivating family have to wash, cook and experience life by himself in the village? It is actually possible to recruit several maids and servants. It all depends on how the author writes. Maybe the author just wants to write about rural immortality. 😥😰 There is no spiritual power in the village. I still don't understand whether it is possible to practice or not, and whether the level of the monks in the village can be increased. Moreover, there is no spiritual power but I can make money by drawing talismans. . . . . . Maybe the author wants to take medicine, but if the setting is that the spiritual energy outside the entire fairy city is polluted, then where does the clean spiritual energy in the elixir talismans come from? Well... Maybe they are all brought out from the fairy city... And does it really have to be so low in the village? All monks are seekers to some extent. Although their futures vary widely, they must have a basic level of education. They must be able to understand the exercises and understand the artistic conception of the mountains and rivers. The author mentioned the two meridians of Ren and Du, and the meridians of the human body or similar settings. Why do all the monks of the Xu family in the village have a kind of... They have been farming before and have not received any cultural education at all... With the village There is no difference at all among the native villagers... No matter whether they have qualifications or not, children must be enlightened... In reality, children in the village have schools, and the monks and children feel like they are playing in the mud in the village... It seems to describe the feeling that family continuity is very important for many characters, but in fact, the children feel like they are just herding sheep... Then there is the complete background board of the sect...

How can I put it this way? You need to read this book with your brains in mind and read less mindless comments.

Came here from Xuanjian to take a look 🙂

There has been a shortage of books about cultivating immortals recently. From what I saw from the recommendations in other comment areas, the writing is really good. If I don't have it this month, I will prepare a monthly pass for next month for you 😁

No chapter was updated yesterday, so the author needs to make up for it and add more updates. . . There are a lot of monthly tickets

It's pretty good. I write slowly. There are fewer and fewer books that I can read. I can afford to wait for Shensan and Xuanjian. Don't be in a hurry.

I think this book is well written. Especially these chapters, the writing is smooth. Layout one link after another. Over 90% of the time, I think the fairy tales in the world may not be popular enough or popular enough. The author is disappointed or disappointed. But suddenly he gave up the article without saying a word. It's puzzling. For the author of this book. I placed small advertisements in several fairy tales. Banned for a month. I rewarded 10,000 points to become the hall leader, and even went around looking for books to subscribe and get monthly tickets (I finally got 12, 4 guaranteed monthly tickets, and paid to subscribe to 7, 7,000 points... I have already voted for 5 tickets, and I was thinking of voting for 7 more tickets in the next two days. But seeing the end of the update, I don't know if I should continue to vote for these 7 or even 10 monthly tickets!). Brother... Don't let people down anymore If you see it, I hope you can pay for these two days. Maybe even 10,000 to 20,000 words. As long as you dare to have this attitude. The remaining 7 monthly tickets are all given to you, and they will be updated before the end of the month, and 3 more tickets will be added! If this is not possible. Goodbye Jianghu!

Unlike cultivating immortals, you might as well write about weirdness or martial arts. Xiucian lives in a village, but he can't get married and can't go anywhere during the Qi training period. But he also said that not everyone has spiritual roots. After reading more than a dozen chapters, why don't you change the subject?

I don't quite understand why this book is not popular. There are very few books that can be read.

The overall pacing is okay. But I didn't want to watch it anymore. Do you write family stories or personal stories? If you write about family, it shouldn't be so divided. A direct mess. Kill all those who are dissatisfied and opposed. Anyway, you are the strongest. Who will remember three generations later? Just cut off the family if you write a personal essay.

This title is a bit discouraging. The title should be changed. A good title can attract readers to click in and read.

Cut? ? If you are sure to cut it, delete the bookshelf.

One update a day will not retain readers except Xuanjian. But Xuanjian is also the author who has written more than a million words, and it is slowly becoming popular after being recommended by readers every day The author is now facing huge pressure On the one hand, it may be the pressure of life and survival from his family Second, there is a huge gap between the cost and gain of only 1,200 yuan for a book that has 900,000 words The third is the lack of popularity. The author does not feel that the direction of progress is confused, and this book may be thrown off the street 😭 Fourth, the update time is a flaw, and the readership is seriously lost due to persuasion or retention. If I could check this book steadily every day around 21 o'clock, even if I updated it, my results would be much better than now 5. I guess there are still some problems with the outline. The author may have a lot of ideas. Failure to follow the outline 6. In fact, sometimes when a book needs watering, it should be watered down as much as possible. For example, Mr. Song's son. About him, a character who has no inhibitions for the sake of his path. Intersperse it richly. Whether as a foil or a villain, he should be able to do both. There is also the second elder in the Guardian Hall, who chose to abandon the family for his own personal path in order to avoid the collapse of the family. This character could also be enriched. Since this book is a group portrait. Everyone struggles to make choices under fate and the general trend, struggles hard, is confused and painful... And slowly carves, describes and depicts it. In the author's writing style. I believe that if you persist, there will be hope. Just like Chongming Xianzong, it now has 1.99 Million words, and the author is working at the same time. While persisting every day, never give up. The current performance is not very good, but it has gained many stable fans. That's why I said that the author must stabilize his thoughts and ideas. Based on the current results of this book, writing a book full-time will definitely be very criticized by family members and people around him. You can try to find a relatively stable job to answer to your parents. In my spare time, I will polish the plot carefully and enrich other group characters. Stable update time. Keep updating. At the same time, contact the site editor to choose promotion. Within three months at most, the quality of this book will definitely make you stand out! Come on, "I can't go on a blind date anymore"! Don't let down the brothers and sisters who are still voting for you, following updates, and giving rewards! If you persist, you will definitely succeed!!

To be honest, according to the recommendation standards of Qidian, you should cut it out. Without recommendations or follow-up reading, there will be very few subscriptions on the shelves. Of course, if the author is writing for love, just pretend that I didn't say it

Very well written! The writing and plot design are all praised, which is very rare at this starting point But Xu Anlan feels ugly in the first line. His character is actually quite hollow, and his plot is completely skipped without affecting the reading. Others, the protagonist line, the battle between water and land in the fortresses, and the exploitation and strife among the Chongluan sects are all very exciting.

The writing is good. Newbies to writing books should have a good attitude. The writing is online and reading will definitely get better and better. There must be a lack of exposure now! What the author has to do is to update more, and you can go to other authors' book review sections to promote their books to increase exposure. Come on!

I haven't read it for a few months and found that the author suddenly updated a few chapters. . . Originally, it was a good story about a family with the potential to become a god, but I don't know what went wrong. Maybe it was after writing about children? It's a bit awkward anyway

The author said that this book will be written slowly,

Yes, I haven't seen such a good book for a long time.

The author combines family, group portraits and disasters into one, unconventional and very insightful. In the future development, Xu Xiuyuan's golden elixir will not enter the secret realm to achieve enlightenment, or will stay in the fortress after the recruitment is over (there are too many doubts about the achievement golden elixir not entering the secret realm). The family can only enter the fairy city through the Anlan steps, or key figures in the family (such as Anlan, Luwei, Qi Lianbuxiaoxiang) will also go to the fortress to train in the future.

The author has updated again, okay, all monthly votes will be given this month

Okay, it's pretty good-looking, come on

The writing is profound and powerful, the plot is rigorous, and the characters are distinct. Come on, author!

Very well written and very interesting to read. Wait for updates from the author every day.

First order support, come on, come on, come on!

I have basically read the family novels from Qidian. This one is in the top three. Others either imitate Xuanjian or have cliche plots. There is no doubt about it. Come on, author, I hope you don't give up.