Changsheng: My Dojo Can Be Upgraded

I've read almost fifty or sixty chapters. I originally planned to finish the free chapters before posting about Shen Nong, but there are too many flaws and I don't want to read anymore. This book has many flaws. For example, the author sometimes forgets how many acres of spiritual fields the protagonist has opened, casually gives a thousand spiritual stones to a child who has no cultivation, and a sect-protecting formation that is said to be indestructible by the golden elixir is ignored by a first-order rabbit demon. But these are not big problems. The biggest problem with this book is the protagonist himself. Judging from the content, the author wanted to write about an easy way to cultivate immortality and follow the daily flow of farming, but in the end it ended up being a mess. Let me briefly talk about the background of the protagonist. He is a time-traveler who has the memories of an old immortal cultivator who has been in the world of immortality for 60 years. I wonder if he can survive in the world of immortality to the middle stage of Qi training. Not to mention talent, he must have experience in society, right? Do you have a lot of protective spells in your hands? As a result, after the protagonist traveled through time, he looked just like Ruozhi. The magic spell is gone, and the cultivation level is not very high, so he just takes people to his dojo, and finally lets them go? Co-authored memory white fusion? A treasure land that far exceeds the Jindan Sect's spiritual energy concentration and can even use the spiritual field to grow rice so casually, I don't know how to write the word "people's heart is sinister"? In addition to life, the protagonist is also a pure person in terms of spiritual practice. It doesn't matter if you don't practice the fundamental method diligently. It can also be said that the efficiency of cultivation is not as good as the golden finger guarantee. You don't know how to practice the Gou Ba Dao Protection Technique. You can only use the Gou Ba Sword Technique for a lifetime, right? Is the Dao-protecting technique Gouba meant for you to kill enemies? That's for you to deal with all kinds of situations! He didn't practice anything like restraining, escape, or fighting skills, and he still disliked this and that. You Gouba are living in a society where knowledge is highly monopolized! If the protagonist stays in the dojo all day long, forget it, but Gouba likes to seek death and runs out at every turn. I, Gouba, will also accept it. I feel like the author has no idea what he wants to write, and he doesn't care about where he writes. I am too lazy to continue reading, and can only summarize it in two words. A lump.

What you cultivate is your true heart, and what you strive for is your own avenue. Everyone has a different understanding of the avenue. I don't understand why some people break their guard when they see the author saying that they don't accept people and are not ambiguous. They all have a chance to live forever. They don't want to explore the unknown and fall in love every day? Are you so in need of love?

Your sect-protecting formation allows a little demon to come in and out. How is this different from his family?

I really think that Bai's female character is poisonous. Brother, you are in the world of cultivating immortals, how can you trust someone so quickly? (Don't say you don't believe it, your actions mean that you believe her) Are you going to support her for the rest of your life? Show her your spiritual energy, show her the spiritual fields, they are better than those in her sect. If she poisons you, or makes some tricks, it will at least be a trouble, not to mention that she will send it. Previously, the protagonist thought that it would take 12 hours to get 0.1 And stopped practicing. Here I think the protagonist's character is not good, but considering that the protagonist is a modern person, it is normal to be irritable, but the heroine is really poisonous.

Is that mountain guarding formation fake? The rabbit demon can enter at will.

Recommendations have come in the past two days, and many people feel that Qi Baiwei's appearance is poisonous. Two simple explanations. A woman at the end of her fight had just defeated a powerful enemy when suddenly a stranger appeared. She throws a throwing knife that poses no threat to the protagonist. After realizing that it was a misunderstanding, he took the initiative to lower his attitude to the lowest level in order to survive, and also took the initiative to hand over his storage bag. Then it must be killed? If you don't kill, you poison? If you don't agree with the three views, I suggest you read another book. Just move your fingers. ... This book does not make a distinction between classes below oneself and everyone above oneself is equal.

The author has a 100% M tendency... Either picking up a woman to serve (often serving a woman whose cultivation is far inferior to him), or taking the initiative to become a cat slave (a cat demon with no cultivation)... These are basically the protagonist's pursuit... I can't understand

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, just keep your promise and show off everywhere

It is a leisure dojo, but the protagonist does not keep any seeds (spiritual wheat), does not plant trees (peppers, fruits, etc.), Does not raise fish, and does not make things. This kind of protagonist does not deserve this kind of writing. He can only be the second generation of urban rich.

Does the author live in heaven? Just like that, he saved the murderer who wanted to kill him, just because he was a woman? ? ?

You don't think this woman is a good person, do I? I also think she's poisonous, what does it mean to be non-threatening? If an ordinary person tried it, or if the protagonist was unable to do it and died immediately, she would not be a good person. From Qi Baiwei's point of view, if you kill an opponent and a stranger suddenly appears, you will naturally kill him directly. There is no need to ask stupid questions like why you are here. He just killed an ant casually. This is a person who can mix in the immortal world. In my opinion, it is quite normal for Qi Baiwei to do this in the world of immortality. Killing him will not expose himself, and if the other party has any family friends, the probability of being found is much smaller. Introduce yourself as the protagonist and kill him directly. If you don't kill someone who just attacks you without asking anything, why should you keep her alive? If you let her go, aren't you afraid that the dojo will be exposed? Then it will cause a lot of trouble.

A repeatable spiritual field mission, Pig's Feet means that you have to grind for a year before you plan to do it. I don't understand, and there are no special requirements. It just has to be done after a year. If you do it too early, will Pig's Feet die? It's not like the system doesn't provide seeds. Once it's planted, you don't have to worry about running out of things to plant. Are you afraid that the spiritual field will be harvested?

No... There's no plot at all, you just look for a woman as soon as you come... Is this a novel or a pornographic book? ?

Can you please stop being a cat slave? Raise it like its father. To be honest, it's not worth seeing.

I just read a few chapters and saw that the protagonist believed that water-based exercises were practiced by women and therefore did not practice them... A small point can reveal a lot. I saw in the comments section that there was a story about rescuing a seriously injured female cultivator and showing others the bottom line. Unsurprisingly, he is the kind of embarrassing macho protagonist from ancient times... I saw the author's response: Isn't it the Holy Mother who doesn't kill me? But the main point of the conflict is to show others the bottom line, not whether to save or not. If you want to save the big one, you can just throw two pills and leave. I didn't see it there, but it's probably because the author wanted to use this character to open a map. In fact, there are many ways to do it, but it's not handled properly, and readers who like to read this kind of sloppy writing generally reject the heroine, harem, etc. Maybe it's not the author's intention, but it does cause negative feedback.

After it was released, I continued to read many chapters, and I felt that the actions and thoughts of the protagonist were a bit disconnected. He treats beautiful women with a calm and condescending attitude, but treats men with fuss and intrigues. For example, the reincarnated girl seems to be indifferent but she treats her as her own. The second witch is a seductress but wants to kill someone without any coercion. Qi Baiwei has many crises in the sect but there is no movement. Later, she forces a deep-seated girl to accept a disciple in the next life. The protagonist likes loli? You know that the other person is the reincarnated boss and the thousand-year-old demon also likes him? The remnants of the Buddhist sect believe that the little monk Wushu paid a price in exchange, and used the corpse as a clone, and he also pretended to be generous in other things. Here I remind myself to suppress the speed of practice, but here I want to expand my strength greatly. This book is not without its merits, but I don't like the protagonist.

If you have too many poisons, you don't want to use them. The clone was captured and mined for several months, and he didn't even do anything. He's a fairy with a haircut

This novel was written like a fool. Inexplicably, he brought a female cultivator back to his residence. All kinds of treasures were seen by him, and it was inevitable that he would feel evil. Why are you so confident? Wouldn't he assassinate you? This woman licks like a dog. I can't stand even a little bit of persuasion to give up.

Well, at the beginning of the game, beautiful women came to hide in the mountains. If there is no story about her later, there will be a lot of story. (Haha, just complain about it. It's good that the author didn't delete the post. I'd better change the offensive parts)

The more I write, the less interesting it becomes. The higher my cultivation level, the more I feel wronged and surrendered.

The protagonist in the author's works is very incompetent and weak, especially towards demonic cultivators and evil cultivators, ill-intentioned politicians (King Wu), and the lord of the Central Plains City. There is no sanction for being insulted by others.

The pig's feet written about are too poisonous, and the eunuchs are also normal.

I saw someone in the comment section asking whether the protagonist is really stupid or pretending to be stupid. I think he is pretending to be smart 🙂

It collapsed so quickly. I just voted for the monthly vote and it's boring.

There is really no horse, no horse, my hands are really cheap

This is saved or lost 😰

No heroine or any rubbish eunuch stuff, 🐩I don't even watch it

I brought a girl back to the dojo for no apparent reason. It looked a bit big.

Very promising, I didn't expect the eunuch to be so fast

I've given you three tickets, can you please update them soon?