I Travel to the End of the Fairy Road

I have been following it for a while now, and I feel that the main theme of the love world of this work is: Emotional suppression, taking responsibility, bitter love, and other negative elements. Although there are elements such as acceptance of fate, consideration, non-jealousy, free and unrestrained generosity, etc., The overall atmosphere is dark and unhappy. Of course, pink bubbles filled with a bunch of love letters are not what make people feel. "I think the current changes in the plot and the emotional description that the book focuses on are not integrated with each other." Using what a bartender I like told me, he said that the pursuit of bartending is always two words: "balance." Spirits can be prepared so that no one can taste the liquor at all; If the liquor is not prepared well, even if it is diluted with water, the heavy liquor taste will not disappear. This book is currently like a cocktail that is too heavy. I feel that the owner is full of sincerity in the ingredients used, but the taste is not integrated and balanced enough. Daddy Orange and you have been book friends for more than ten years. I have followed all your works for more than ten years. Emotional drama is probably your most scientific challenge, but I sincerely hope that you can mix this glass of wine. ※Finally, it is a virtue to provide advice while also attaching suggestions for solving the problem. By dismantling and analyzing all the current best-selling emotional dramas, you may be able to sort out many routines and arrangements of elements for writing emotional dramas, at least to give your inspiration and imagination a breather. Since analytical skills are also what you are best at, it is equivalent to your deep-rooted and extremely rational character to enter the avenue of emotional writing. Or take the writing styles that you were good at in the past: humorous writing style, strategic thinking, description of timeless life philosophy, etc., And use them back in the description of emotional dramas. This is equivalent to trying to use your maxed-out martial arts and using different internal skills and mental methods to see how it works. I believe it is very likely to be a successful new genre. The above suggestions, of course, are not my business as to whether you will become possessed or commit suicide with a knife.

Chapter 11 is starting to get weird again. I've been refining it, but there's nothing useful about it. It's just boring again before it's put on the shelves. Write less about women and less about emotional drama, no one wants to see it. Does it mean that if you don't write about women, you won't be able to write a book? This book suffers from this problem.

What a pity. At that time, I was so optimistic about the immortal road and the struggle to become a god. It was a pity that when I wrote about exploring the mountains, I suddenly changed my style and turned into a short story. As a result, every subsequent book was not long.

The first few chapters are pretty good. They can't be called fairy grass, but they can at least make people's eyes brighter. The only flaw is that there is always a large amount of inexplicable psychological activity. Of course, it may also be due to different personal reading habits. But there are problems starting from traveling back to 3000 years later, and the problems are huge. First, there are two women. The younger sister has a crush on the protagonist, so it is understandable that she has feelings for the protagonist. But my sister wanted to kill the protagonist at the beginning, because the misunderstanding was solved later and the protagonist had a handsome face, so she had feelings for the protagonist inexplicably, which felt very brainless. And as far as the timeline is concerned, there are only a few days before and after, and the Sichuan opera changes its face not so quickly. Second, after the protagonist travels to the end of the world, he can learn various secrets from the past for free. In my understanding, after the protagonist gets the secret skills and returns to reality, he should work hard to learn them, and then use these powers to show off and slap people in the face. This is more fun, instead of going back to the end of the world and having sex with girls. The third one is that the protagonist returned to reality after getting the weapon refining from the end of the world, and directly shouted to the Nascent Soul monk to exchange for 10,000 spirit stones, which made everyone know. Elementary school students all know that wealth is not revealed, and the protagonist is just a third-level Qi practitioner. According to the fact that the protagonist only has one hundred spiritual stone resources per year, which is equivalent to the resources of an ordinary handyman disciple for a hundred years. Not to mention that the inner disciples value this resource, it is easy for ordinary disciples in the late stage of Qi training to kill the protagonist, right? There are many other small details, such as "I feel like I'm in love again" inexplicably in the last days, and in reality, I pretend to be aloof because I am being slapped by a Taoist companion, which feels like a split personality. Since Dan Da returned to Qidian, I have read almost all the new books at the beginning, and almost all have given long reviews. It's just that the accounts are not the same, but I am really not a black man. You are the only one in the entire Qidian that allows me to write long reviews, purely because of feelings. It feels like it's really not suitable for writing an emotional drama, it's too abrupt, just like the previous book Tokisaki Kurumi, without any sense of involvement. The biggest problem with this book is not that you want to write about women, but that you want to accept two women at once, sisters. In my humble opinion, the innocent and cute character of the younger sister has been well portrayed, so there is no need to add another older sister. Even if we have to add it, we can wait until the sister successfully accepts it, and then add the sister's emotional drama, step by step. I really can't write a low-level plot about being sexually abused, and the results will be better than the inexplicable good impression I have now. Finally, I still hope that the new book will be a hit.

Dan Da, I took a look and found that it was only 80 after six hours of fake pursuit, and it was 50 after the real pursuit. This number will have to be cut after it is put on the shelves. There is really no need to write it down. If it doesn't work, let's just follow the trend... It's only 200,000 words now, and it's not too late to stop. In the next book, we won't write about women, only kill, kill, kill.

The author's Endless Arms and Immortal Road Confrontation can be said to be classics among classics.

If the results of this course are not satisfactory, I suggest you open a vest, give up this identity and start over, and regain your original intention. Sometimes I can't watch it because I don't have confidence in the subsequent plot and have no expectations, so I will be picky about the current plot.

7. I read Endless Arms, and every time I read it, it takes about a year. I read Gods Game 3, and I can't stand other novels at all. I like this real style so much, it really makes me feel immersed.

Hey, after chasing it for two days, I still went back and watched Immortal Road again, for the fifth time. It is also a fairy tale, Xianlu is a true classic. This one obviously wants to follow the trend, change and speed up, but now it is not even as good as the early stage of the family story of Thousand Machines Palace and the family novel. The pace is too fast and it seems to have a battle of wits. The result is a fake battle of wits where the protagonist's IQ is crushed throughout the whole process. It does not have the taste of a big egg. It is really a pity. A simple novel written by a novice is too convoluted, and basically relies on breaking news, jokes and characters to win. Danda really has no advantage in this aspect, so there is a way out as if he specializes in witty writing 😟

Is the popularity of Dan Da big passerby gone? Hey, the author of Endless Arms, I feel that this account is useless.

I watched Hentai again and still want to watch the sequel.

It's been almost ten years and I haven't gotten married yet. I hope Fate 0 will not be short of money soon and can write a big article.

After reading Chapter 14, the protagonist has some intention of cultivating in the immortal world. The first part is a bit delayed. I don't think there is much need to write about the previous cuckolding part. The feelings in the apocalypse are also very inexplicable. How can people living in the apocalypse be so nymphomaniac? The protagonist does not have any ecstasy attributes. If you can't write about emotions well, just don't write about them at all. It's good to work on your own. It is outrageous that Fang Licheng, a tortoise man, can become the leader of the apocalypse. Apart from seeing that he is a turtle, there is nothing that can make him successful. There is no shining point in the character at all The protagonist's first time traveling is not attractive. It is not as interesting as discovering history by exploring alone. Only in the second time traveling did I have some successes, such as training secrets and so on, but the writing was not very satisfying. In the first 14 chapters of this book, there is only one small point that was not fun before the time traveling.

Dan Da's writing style and logic are better than most novels, but his grasp of exciting points and rhythm are much worse than before. If you have cool articles that you like to read in Danda and have good grades, you can really learn about the rhythm and coolness.

So far this book can be regarded as a "dog-licking sobriety manual". However, to get out of the dog-licking stage, two improvements in self-confidence are needed: Confidence in oneself, Confidence in the interaction between the sexes. This requires experience value x comprehension. I hope book lovers can gain awareness from this book, improve their understanding, and be able to upgrade in the future with minimal experience.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

Can you stop being so sweet?

There is no break, one book after another is seamlessly connected. It seems that there are more books to be opened and several books are being updated at the same time 👍

It's very interesting, but be careful, whether it is official history or unofficial history, it usually does not represent the facts. It is reasonable for travel notes and autobiographies to create imaginations for the sake of entertainment, and they should bear the risk with hard power as their backing.

Is it possible to update? I'm not happy watching more updates.

Seeing this, the story line of the book Fate is probably the monism of time and space. We can refer to the famous comic "Doraemon" based on monism. First of all, in the original timeline, Nobita married Fat Tiger's sister, and then Shixiu was born in the fifth generation. In order to make his life better, Shixiu sent Doraemon to change his ancestor Nobita. At this time, Nobita's marriage partner became Shizuka. According to the monism of time and space, Shishu must have ceased to exist. Then there would be no fifth-generation Shishu sent Doraemon to change the past, so this would be a paradox. The author explained (Shixiu's explanation) that the changed timeline will be that Nobita and Shizuka get married, and the child they have will marry the fat girl's child. Then Nobita's grandson will have one-quarter of the genes of Fat Girl and Nobita, and then the child born to Nobita's grandson will be Shixiu's father unchanged. In his words, the established result (Osaka), the idea of ​​going, and the transportation method chosen during the process have just changed. So Shixiu changed history, but history will eventually be corrected to the normal timeline, otherwise there would be no consequences and causes for Shixiu's behavior of modifying history. In other words, at the time point of monism, when Doraemon is sent back from the world, this result is inevitable. Of course, Doraemon is Doraemon This book is this book, and it only provides an idea If you follow Doraemon's monistic timeline The protagonist will not appear to save Lier in the end, because this is an inevitable result Then there are only two possibilities, One is that Li'er fell, and the protagonist rescued her from an invisible place, and then had to ensure the inevitable outcome of the timeline, so Li'er and Wei'er may not meet again. Another possibility is that this is cultivating immortality, which is nothing more than breaking the way of heaven to change fate, and directly confronting some powerful or heavenly power that controls the timeline.

I have read every book of Fate, and I really like this one. The time and space logic of Fate is well written, and the classic battle of wits and melee scenes are also exciting (but recently some fight scenes seem not to be detailed and reasonable enough) I really hope Fate gets better, and all the tickets are given to you

In fact, you can see from reading updates every day that this book may not have more than 100 readers in total. I think you have perseverance if you persevere until now I won't mention the emotional description. But after reading this book, I really felt like I had no idea what the story was about. . . "My Father" is simply the story of Jiang Chen's journey through upgrades, exploration, and ultimately saving the world. Although the upgrade at the end was a bit too fast, and the urban plot was a bit delayed, on the whole, we readers all know what Jiang Chen is doing, and in the end all the pitfalls related to the "Ring Keeper" were filled. But this book is really different. It's not just a matter of emotional description, but it's often that I don't know what the protagonist is doing. . . I don't even know what the protagonist's purpose is, so I don't want to watch it.

Today, Wei'er. Did I discover something?

You have a big egg, will you write a book later?

Write the infinite stream rebirth stream well, don't follow the trend, don't write things you are not good at, the leading author will not change the subject matter randomly, it is easy to lose old fans, and you can't write new subject matter even if you don't say it. And finally, don't write about women's love scenes, you are not that material.

The author has solid writing skills and great potential. It is rare for him to be able to focus on writing. It's just a short chance. I hope the author can concentrate on his creation and become famous as soon as possible.

This is by far the highest artistic level among Yuanfen's works that I have ever read.

What's going on down there? Have you written half of it?

Does it look good? Is it still the same as the early stage of Immortal Road Fight? Is it still a fairy tale spy style?