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I don't know what you're writing about, but I don't like predetermined fates. People nowadays don't like predetermined fate either. We have seen too much and experienced too much in life. Why does the protagonist get so much because he was born well? There is no operation, it is all a gift from fate.

Your strength is that your writing is tightly linked and logically connected. Wouldn't it be better to use your writing style to write traditional and refreshing prose? If you want to create a new glory, write in the fantasy fairy genre. It's not brainless. It has a lot of updates and a fan base. There are no other works in the industry after Clash of the Immortals. Its popularity has been lost over the years. Anyway, I have enough money. Either don't write it. If you want to write, write another book that is as enjoyable as Clash of the Celestials.

It's not good-looking, it reveals cheating, the copy is looking for a woman, don't read it

I like meaningless preaching, about how the world is dark and people are selfish. Why are you saying this? It's up to you to say it. The protagonist is like a junior high school student who has read a few novels and thinks he has seen through the world.

The golden finger setting is okay, but after watching two dungeons, I only found that the protagonist went back in time to get a girl for each dungeon. The plot was written without a sense of substitution, and it was very low👎🏻

At present, Chapter 36 finally has a better beginning of rebirth. Classic Betrayed by Best Brother Woman But others are passive. The protagonist obviously took the initiative and had a plan. Many people in the first copy of Trojan Horse felt that it was not good to eat both ends. Brother, your own world is at stake and you still have time to think about others? This is what unlimited people have to do! What's the point of playing if you don't maximize profits? You can play pvp games without paying money to buy equipment. The character is an egoistic cold-blooded Sigma man. The second copy is a natural born killer. One of the few cult heroines that I think is disgusting. It's a pity that the protagonist is not bald.

The gun battles and martial arts planes are too boring, and collecting Melory is also a bad point. Who has time to watch how the protagonist flirts with female supporting characters such as Melory? I should just briefly touch on the female supporting characters. This is not a romance novel.

The second copy is obviously a self-pleasure thing written by the author Wen Qingfa. Very boring.

The fate number has been sold long ago

The author listened to the readers' opinions and wrote an infinity novel. It was still a pure novel. However, the author was lazy and directly wrote an invincible novel. The calculation and growth of the protagonist that we wanted to see were not at all. Author, you need to know what your strengths and weaknesses are. If you throw away your strengths, what will you let readers see?

It's a shootout, it's low-level martial arts, it's a Hong Kong variety show, it writes a few unflattering low-level worlds, and all the readers ran away. I can write step by step, write with overwhelming force, and I can't even write cool articles. It has to be deep but not deep, and it has to be refreshing. I have opened a few things in a mess, but I can't see any of them playing a key role.

1. First of all, the author's setting is too complicated. Especially the priority of offensive and defensive spirits or some other settings. I think these cumbersome settings are not appropriate in the novel. It would be better if these operation settings of yours were placed in the game and players could see them. I think the author still needs to simplify it later. 2. The background story of the protagonist. To put it simply, I was betrayed, but don't worry about why I was betrayed. After seeing the plot of Chapter 20, I obviously felt that something was wrong. Generally speaking, it should be that after I was betrayed, I didn't believe anyone, so I chose to kill them all. The other is because you have been betrayed, so you need to be more cautious. However, in the plot described by the author, it seems to us readers that the protagonist is obviously in an awkward state of mind and is duplicitous. This obviously goes against the idea of ​​enjoying the novel to the end. You did this, but you regretted it again, since you wanted Helen in the first place. Why don't you think of another way? It had to be in front of Helen. Do things worse than animals. I want Helen to follow you again. As a result Helen committed suicide. You regret being so stubborn again. 3. There is another setting by the author. The Greek gods are all gods of white slates, and Zeus is the god of green slates. Is there any color or gold on top of the green? So the gods in other myths are not colored or golden. Unless you mean uh Indian mythology. Of course, this is also easy to solve. Take Zeus for example. It's the same as Three Kingdoms. Marked Zeus, bounded Zeus. And the Esoteric Zeus.

This number should have been sold. If not, it would have gone back too fast.

I really hate the fact that after the protagonist has a cheat, he relies entirely on the cheat to upgrade and doesn't care about martial arts.

It's smelly and verbose, there's a lot of useless stuff in the system, the main character's outlook is disgusting, and the plot is also very disgusting.

I'm actually not the kind of person who would leave something disgusting before leaving something I don't like, but Endless Arms is indeed one of the first few works I read. Seeing Fate 0 become like this... I have mixed feelings.

After reading the comments, I found out that it was the author of Endless Arms 😅. I clicked on the author's avatar and took a look at the results of the author's other books. I felt a little mixed...

It seems that it was probably written by Yuan Yuan himself. The writing style is the same, but it is not as exciting as when there is no endless weapon.

I had high expectations at first, but the more I watched, the less I could stand it. Originally, each copy of Infinite Streaming was screened once, but in the later stages, the writing got worse and worse. It felt like the main character had been refined 😅

I have been writing for so many years Not even a great god

The self-interested protagonist will betray for the sake of profit, but his character is very twisted. He feels that he knows what he is doing is wrong, but he forces himself to do it, and then tries his best to explain it. It's fun to watch decisive killings. But the protagonist's entanglement completely obliterated this sense of pleasure. If you are not a good person, you will not be a bad person. There is a sense that my bad intentions are not because it is good for me, but because you ask me to be a good person. In order not to listen to you, I chose to do bad things.

"Self-made Goldfinger Reborn Unlimited Streaming: Fuck all the female protagonists/partners"

Why are people scolding me in the comment area? Let me support you. I really like this kind of legion combat, but it has a few shortcomings. The pace is too fast and the copy lacks polish. There are too many female followers, and they all turn into harem stallions. I hope there will be some big scenes of legions fighting.

Why are the protagonists of recent Infinite Flow novels all named Wu?

I went to read the Hentai Arms you wrote next door. Are you two the same person? Endless Arms starts off so refreshingly and without any sloppiness. Look at what you wrote in the first chapter of this book.

Dan Da should be rich and free, so why not write something you like. These books written are all imaginative articles and trend-following books that forcefully cater to the market. Just choose a familiar field of Xianxia or Western Fantasy.

You've been writing a book for so long, why do you start with poison? Wouldn't it be better to just let the protagonist not know and go for a run? Later, the protagonist is teased for not paying attention in class, and then reverses and slaps him in the face. Can you not write such a cliché?

What do I say? I haven't read what you wrote before. Anyway, it's not very healthy for new readers. I only saw chaos in three chapters. To put it simply, it's suitable for old readers, not suitable for new readers. Anyway, I'm full of question marks❓😂😂😂😂

Awesome. After reading the previous books, the first few were okay, but several of the later ones were finished before reaching 1 million words. They were discontinued, and then they updated two books at the same time. Are you sure you want to write well?