
This Daoist Makes the First Move
贫道起手了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 469k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
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150Chapters
2.7kRecommendations
14.2kFans
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Damn, the protagonist's master is truly incompetent; all his disciples are dead. No wonder that steward ran away. If the sect leader hadn't emerged from seclusion and noticed something amiss, allowing him to withdraw, he wouldn't even know his master had been sold off. 😄
The introduction is contradictory. It says that the atmosphere should be improved, but then it says that people don't have martial ethics. This means that there were at least some rules in the original atmosphere.
He bowed (kowtowed in greeting).
Journey to the West: This humble Taoist bows in reverence. This humble monk returns the greeting.
Silly
Haha, this simple-minded old Taoist isn't suited to writing purely original content; his world-building is terrible. The protagonist is inexplicably strong from the very beginning, and he often acts on a grand scale, as if he were a celestial general incarnate on earth. He seems to have a powerful backer and is unrestrained and carefree.
Alright, alright, it was I who bowed, you've already started.
Qidian is too complicated now; even a level 5 player feels like a newbie in the Xianxia genre.
It's pretty good, but the level designation is a bit outrageous. The protagonist is still practicing Qi cultivation, yet he can fight against a Golden Core cultivator three major realms above him without being at a disadvantage. Wouldn't that cause a power imbalance? The disciples have all reached the Void Realm, while the protagonist is still cultivating Qi.
Two chapters, two kills—such a powerful new book? It reminds me of an old friend from the Investiture of the Gods.
This sect is riddled with factions, and its underhanded tactics are endless. Disciples without a background are nothing but cannon fodder. With so many powerful figures fighting amongst themselves, it's bound to be destroyed sooner or later.
I read it all in one go. The first three chapters are written in a above-average style, which is quite good. The first 20 chapters were a bit off-putting because the background setting and the protagonist's character were too vague, making it somewhat toxic.