I Just Climbed Out of the Abyss and Now You Want Me to Go Back?

It has been updated to chapter 62, which just tied it There are a lot of novels written about plants, but I have relatively high expectations for this one. His selection of materials is quite novel among the many novels I have read with plant protagonists, including the unique abyss setting and the protagonist's contradictory mental state. Then there are five pink furs. I personally particularly like this setting, the pink-haired tsundere is so high! Also, the process of them searching for each other's sisters didn't drag out much and was very enjoyable to watch. Writing the quintuplets together still depends on the author's penmanship. So far it's okay, I hope the characters can be better portrayed. It can still be used as a daily comedy, the daily life of the girl Kazuki exploring the abyss. The development of the worldview is quite natural and not stiff. What I personally hate is the procrastination of the plot, but the author's pacing control is okay. At least the protagonist's tree heart rescue plan in the early stage does not have any weird plot that makes people vomit blood. I won't spoil too much It also always gives me the feeling of watching anime It's still a seedling, I hope the follow-up development will still be strong! Identification result: Liangcao+ {"TopicId":"1033428034865004544","TopicName":"Read any time during the summer"}

Come on, it's the first time I've seen a fan from the Abyss. It's very well written 😍

Brothers. . . I was poisoned before I even clicked on it

The protagonist's performance should be no problem if he goes to the circus to be an ace.

In addition to being relatively new in terms of logic and plot design, there are many plots in this book that are fun to read casually and are quite embarrassing. However, this is originally a light novel about being with a beautiful girl. It is indeed the kind of book that can be read without thinking. But there is one very important thing. This book is not suitable for people who care about basic logical relationships.

It's not very good. From the beginning, the protagonist is trying to survive by having his tail cut off and giving up the accumulated energy.

A typical isekai light novel, but the title is too studio-like, and this title will attract many novice readers. Moreover, the heroine appears too late, and the light novels in the beginning are light and the novels are strong, which will cause people who like to read light novels to run away at the beginning; and people who like to read novels will run away if they see that they have to pretend to be dead or the taste is not right in the later chapters, and they will say that you are poisonous. Not many people have the patience to read novels these days. It is recommended that the title and introduction of the book highlight the core of the book, with the goal of attracting an audience who will actually read it. They want to cut me into five equal parts! How about this? Finally, come on, come on, come on!

The curse setting of the fourth level Windless Sea has to be said to be a failure. Whether the curse on the 123rd floor is the hallucination of dizziness and pain, it gives people the impression that the abyss is everywhere and the curse of the abyss is irresistible. As a result, the fourth floor is about cutting off the flesh and feeding it to the sea beasts, which leads to four problems: First, the senses are directly downgraded, as if the abyss has revealed its HP bar, which is quite abrupt. The second is the "curse" of the fourth level. As long as you are rich and powerful, you can exploit the loopholes without harm. The badges and identities of the fourth level have become a joke that can be bought with money and power. The third is that it does not conform to the basic setting that the deeper the abyss, the more serious the curse. A "curse" that can be exploited is equivalent to no curse at all. The fourth is a logical contradiction. The curses in other layers are obviously closely related to the invisible and intangible abyss force field. After the explorers came to the fourth layer, they found that the biggest threat was the monster in the sea, and the force field had no effect on the human body. It was impossible to classify the monster as a curse from the beginning, but described it as caused by the special ecosystem of the fourth layer. The fourth layer is a curse-free zone. It is impossible to give a curse-free zone a badge and identity for the curse-free zone. As of August 10, 2024, I thought the author had buried some foreshadowing in it, but no reasonable explanation has been given.

When I saw the cover of this book appearing on my daily guide, I had the same expression as the cover.

Is the introduction a setting from the abyss? "Made in Abyss"?

Similar to the world view from the Abyss, the author very boldly chose the quintuplet heroine and a tree as the protagonists. The story is exciting but the fighting is a bit tight. It doesn't have many poisonous points, but sometimes it feels a little oppressive when reading it. However, in terms of the subject matter, this is very consistent and enhances the perception. In general, it is much more healing than Coming from the Abyss (in a real sense, stop lying to others and saying that Coming from the Abyss is very healing!!!) So far, it is highly recommended! Why is mygo on the cover (if you read it correctly), I personally think it would be more appropriate to put a scene from the abyss The title of the book is not very attractive, especially after the beginning, they all voluntarily dived.

It is the first time for a newbie to write a book, and reading it is very important, as it determines whether a book can be recommended! Everyone in the audience, please click your fingers to read this book every day! Especially Monday and Tuesday! Xiao Mengxin begs for help!

According to you, the abyss should be dangerous. Why does the protagonist sleep so deeply? Very strange.

Author, why don't you consider changing the cover of this book? It seems really discouraging and far from the tone of the book.

It's best to change the title of the book. There are too many short compositions in the studio now, and this one looks too similar to yours.

Becoming human... Ruined😮‍💨

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Objectively speaking, as the first book, it is remarkable. The light novel tastes quite decent, but I feel that the description and plot could be richer. There may also be some logical problems in the introduction, so I recommend reading it again. And I would like to emphasize that if your ability to describe combat scenes is limited, it is recommended to avoid it as much as possible. That's it, as far as new books are concerned, it's pretty good, and I don't think there's anything overly toxic about it (it may not be a good thing to say, but it may be a bit too chewy for some people's tastes). If the quality can be maintained, I will continue to read it. If the quality continues to improve, I will keep a monthly subscription or something. Come on author🌹

It's surprisingly good-looking, with good text and plot. Come on, author!

It looks like it has great potential😍

You are very kind to me

I voted for four monthly votes last month in vain🤔

Update time in the underworld

Come on, author, if this is really the first time to write a novel, the first novel should be a time to accumulate experience. You don't want to write 700 or 800 chapters. I just hope to have a better ending, with generally smooth logic and no poisonous points. It would be good to simply write it as a love novel, and it would be good to intersperse the abyss copy. But if, I mean if, you really can't write it, then it's eunuch. As mentioned before, it is very important to accumulate experience. If you really want to work hard on writing novels, don't be afraid of eunuch. Although as a reader, you don't want to write eunuch, but instead of wasting time here, struggling Instead of holding on to the plot, it is better to look back at your own work, summarize the advantages and disadvantages, and try it again, so that you can shine in the next work. Keep this novel at a time when there are no problems in the work due to your own lack of skills. If you have any regrets, you can complete it or re-upload it and rewrite it after your level improves. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, and I have absolutely no intention of asking you, the author, to give up! But if you really can't write anymore, there's nothing you can't do if you become a eunuch. Some platinum authors are Virgos who also have eunuchs. The main reason is that you, the author, are too slow. I always feel that you will become eunuchs at any time because you can't write the plot [f n=31], I also hope you can persevere. Persistence is also a kind of talent, but perseverance alone is not enough. You must have something to write a good novel. I think the writing style of the work is really good. I don't want to say anything fancy, but it is just comfortable to read. The above is just my personal opinion, please forgive me if it offends me. I don't have much money, I'm a poor person 🤤. I can only donate one monthly ticket.

Won't you please update it once it's on the shelves? I'll give you two monthly passes.

Keep up the good work, order all

Come on, author, keep at 4,000 words per day

Do you want to vote? I voted after updating two chapters.