It All Begins with the Shadow Assassin Yang Xuyan

Well, what on earth was the author thinking? He got the Tao Heart to plant a demon. Jade pendants can also absorb skills. Why don't you find a Taoist skill with a good level and start practicing the Tao Heart Demon Planting Technique. Is it difficult? Why do you need to do other things? This is a bit of a waste of time. Did the author not write an outline? He just wrote whatever came to mind.

I can only say that it's okay, but the protagonist seems aimless.

I can only say that the views of people like Li Xunhuan are no longer suitable for modern normal people. Please hurry up and finish this article. I feel uncomfortable when I see this person. It is unimaginable that a person can give his partner to someone else and still miss him. He treats the person he likes as a tool and still pretends to be a lover. He is a pure clown and a hypocrite. This kind of gifting of a girl has been sprayed as a green turtle for a long time and no one has seen it.

He is also an old author who has written several martial arts fanfiction books, but the more he writes, the worse he gets, and there is a sense of self-admiration in the literary youth (if the author is doing it for love, just pretend I haven't said anything)

It's hard to believe that Kong can defeat the Tao Heart Seed Demon who is the ninth level demon. The Tao Heart Seed Demon sees all things as fluctuations, the true energy is a fluctuation, and the innate true energy is just a higher level of fluctuation. In my opinion, the Secret of Immortality is not necessarily better than that of Tao Heart Seed Demon. The martial arts source of Huang Yi's martial arts is the Illustrated Book of the God of War. The Purple Blood Dafa is questionable.

The Taoist demon is not very strong. There are many martial arts that are stronger than him. Why does the male protagonist insist on insisting on it? Aren't other magical skills good?

After reading Chapter 48, there was too little excitement. The protagonist was worried every time. The martial arts scenes were written with no passion and did not have the earth-shaking and noisy mood of the time traveler. You had to upgrade from a soldier step by step. It was tiring to watch. If you don't get the Secret of Immortality, you won't be able to practice it if you have a Taoist heart demon. You have to make a lot of excuses. This will make readers continue reading.

Xiao Li's flying knife chapter was very poorly written. His martial arts skills were clearly superior to Shangguan Jinhong's, but he still wanted the protagonist to die in his hands. Why didn't you write that he died in the hands of Long Xiaoyun?

I finished reading it quickly and found it very boring when I reached Chapter 42. The author has been describing all kinds of awesome things about the protagonist, and then there is no more. The life experience, appearance, martial arts, and adventures are all very exaggerated. Anyone who meets the protagonist will be impressed, have a favorable impression, or be very afraid. What next? The protagonist did nothing, just going through the motions. Chapter 42 describes the battle in detail, with a total of 4 times, and a total of 4 shots. This is the first time I have seen such a protagonist in the Shuangwen category The author's setting for the protagonist is to improve the strength and solve the shadow assassin's obsession. You should do it. What about improving the strength? What about your obsession? After the second time travel, I didn't learn any martial arts, so I just pretended to be cool. All four times I shot were crushing, and they were all torture. No experience, no improvement. All previous improvements were written by the protagonist who realized it by himself, so you are so good at self-study. What are you doing to waste this time? When I came out and saw the plot characters, my obsession was gone, and I didn't feel like a chess piece. Life has become bitter. Playing everywhere, making friends and pretending to be cool, it's so boring.

I have only written a few chapters now. I just got the Dao Heart Seed Demon, and I haven't written any plot, so I immediately changed the copy. Then the dungeon has more writing than the main map The writing is okay, but this book has a premonition. The dungeon is intensive to collect martial arts, and the plot is copied. In the end, there is nothing left to write, such as opening a harem, and the number of words is low.