The Legend of the Condor Heroes: A Long Spear Against the Sky

Jin Yong is good in every other way, except he looks down on the imperial court too much. "Mastering both literary and martial arts, then selling them to the emperor." Learning martial arts requires resources, right? Who has more resources than the imperial court? It makes the imperial court seem like it doesn't have a single master! This is really speechless.

The author exaggerated the internal energy to the point of being able to breach a city gate with a single spear thrust. His physical abilities are hardly attributable to being severely injured by a second-rate supporting character! He starts off incredibly powerful, but immediately falters when faced with a plot point; the drastic drop in performance is enough to make readers want to abandon the book. I'll try to persevere for two more chapters; if it doesn't work, I'll quit.

The author writes very well, I hope you continue! Will you add a harem element? I hope Long'er will be included too.

The biggest problem with Condor Heroes fanfiction is the protagonist's incompetence. Anyone who's read a few versions of the original novel knows he's nothing like the idiot portrayed in the TV series. In typical fanfiction, like comics, the protagonist already has various flaws, so it's not impossible to create a character who surpasses the original.

This book lacks entertainment value and becomes tedious after a while. Furthermore, the protagonist isn't decisive enough; he clearly offended Guo Jing but didn't kill her? If Guo Jing didn't understand the protagonist's actions, she would become a major enemy—this move is detrimental! And he even wants to restore the Southern Song Dynasty?

Excellent, a great start. I love traditional martial arts fiction, but I never expected you to bring such a fresh perspective to it. Keep it up! Valuing emotions is admirable; you are a true hero!

The biggest injustice in The Legend of the Condor Heroes was the Fengbo Pavilion incident. Why don't you just kill that Zhao guy first and then talk about what happened next! Don't even mention the others who all pretend to be blind while claiming to be heroes who serve their country and people. Disgusting, absolutely disgusting.

I don't understand why they killed Tore. What's the point of involving a person in matters of national importance? If they were so indignant, why didn't they just go to the desert and kill everyone they saw? It's completely insane killing. This reason for antagonizing Guo Jing is as ridiculous as that. Think about Qiao Feng's way of doing things; the protagonist's personality isn't even that of a hero, let alone a great man. It's disgusting.

Honestly, the way Huang Rong, the female lead, was acquired was so inexplicable and sudden; it felt like just another mindless harem novel.

I just want to ask, how come he broke through the city gate with a single blow at the start, only to be beaten into a rout by two martial arts practitioners beside Yang Kang? I'm completely baffled.