Naruto Just Wants to Be a God of Death

Up to now, the plot has reached a turning point. First of all, it develops too fast (the plot). If you don't control it now, it will be difficult to write later. Most people will read it because you don't procrastinate, so I hope I can grasp the degree. There may be few readers now, and there will definitely be dissatisfaction among those who read the book later. I'm satisfied, I hope the author won't accept the impression. The second issue is the combat effectiveness, which is similar to the above. I hope I can control it (don't force it, think about the plot carefully), that's about it Personal feeling To be honest, it's hard to control now, it's too big. Final words Come on, author! ! !

Currently my favorite Naruto/Death fan among male videos, and even my favorite 2D fan. As a girl, I didn't expect to see such a detailed emotional description in Qidian. I even wondered if I clicked on Jinjiang by mistake. Come on, author! The biggest shortcoming at present is probably that it is short and not enough to read.

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Thank you for allowing me to find happiness in my busy life. See you in the next book, and the flowers will be finished!

Finished spreading flowers! ! ! Looking back now, what I like most is Naruto's growth process from his youthful days when he first entered Soul Society to becoming a good captain full of responsibilities. Thanks to the author for allowing a lonely child to take control of his own life and find his own happiness~ Looking forward to the next work

When a new book is released, the first thing to do is to read it. This determines the recommendation position and exposure. It is the most important thing. It is recommended to read the latest chapter every day, which only takes about one minute. Secondly, rewards and monthly tickets are also very useful. They will be placed at the top of various lists and more people will see them. It is recommended to tip the character (that is, give a gift to the character, although there is no character card yet), because the profit for the author of the tip book is the same as the tip for the character, but you can add star points to the character. With more star points, there will be various benefits, such as designing portraits from Qidian, birthday events, card activities, Qidian coins... Especially if the reward is less than 10,000 points per time, Qidian can only reward 10,000 points to get a monthly pass, so tipping to characters has the greatest benefits. Thirdly, when everyone is reading the book, this chapter says that it is very useful to like it in the book circle. This chapter says that if there are more than ten likes, achievement points will be added. If the amount is enough, the work will be upgraded to stars, and you can enter the Hall of Masters, and you will get some coins, fan titles, and monthly passes Likes and replies in the book circle will add contribution points. If the level reaches level 4 or above, you will have some coin benefits. Finally, turn to the end every day and compare your feelings for the characters. If you can write, you can write fan fiction, and if you can draw, you can draw fan pictures. This will add star value to the character.

Although I can't write a book, but taking a hundred steps back, author, can't you update a hundred chapters at a time? Maybe people will say this is unreasonable, but I also said that I can't write a book.

I have a question. The author of Naruto is Kishimoto. Why does the author conclude that the third generation is a good guy? There are still conspiracy theories. Or is it you who is the author of Naruto? You know more about Naruto than Kishimoto. Even if you find 10,000 reasons why the third generation is bad, he is still a good person. In the second creation of a fan, you can say how bad the third generation is, but the original author is a good guy because the author of Naruto is Kishimoto.

Surprisingly good, the details are open to debate, but the plot doesn't drag on! ! The natives are double-crossed, and their personalities and actions can be self-explanatory in all aspects, and there is no such thing as a clever trick. The only shortcoming may be the writing. I would rate it 7 out of 10. More than grain and grass, feel free to eat

The writing is very good, and the author is still suitable for writing fan fiction. But a word of caution to the author, don't make the same mistake as the Harry Potter book. Except for Naruto, don't have too many intersections between the two worlds, otherwise it will basically fall apart as soon as you write it. I voted for two monthly votes and eight recommended votes, but I withdrew them first. Leave it for a month or two and then come back.

It's very nice to read, but when it comes to social change, Internet article writers generally don't have the quality to write well in this area. It's very confusing, so forget it.

The interplay between the two worlds in the early and mid-term was very measured, and the rhythm was just right, but it was obviously uncontrollable later on, and the plot went crazy without a perfect ending. The final if line feels like it's just a waste of a scrapped draft that has already been typed, and the ending is too sloppy. A lot of what I wanted to see was not written out, and the various changes were only written out at the end, which was a little too late. It felt like I had worked hard for 30 years to achieve the ultimate mastery, and then found out that I was invincible after coming out of the game. Those who are familiar with Naruto, the God of Death, and accept the interpenetration setting between the two worlds, may consider ordering it. It is still good in the early and mid-term.

I only chased the Naruto part... I can only say that I drove high and went low... There was too much preaching in the later period, so much so that it covered the original character design... Except for Naruto's mouth, everyone else is a puppet in a puppet show...

1. I hope that Naruto can develop his own power on the side of Death, one that is not related to the Kyuubi. The Nine-Tails without Naruto was single-handedly suppressed by the big pillar, and the Nine-Tails with Naruko singled out 12345678 tails + the two pillars of the Samsara Eye. This shows that the Nine-Tails and the Wood Release are the same. It is not the Nine-Tails and the Wood Release that are stronger, but Naruto and the big pillar. And logically speaking, as Naruto is the protagonist, I think his soul essence (potential) is enough to give birth to a powerful Zanpakutō on the same level as Yamamoto/Ichigo/Aizen in the Shinigami world. This opinion will not cause logical conflicts and will become an attraction to attract Shinigami fans. After all, Shinigami are all those weird Zanpakutō in addition to being fashionable, right? 2. As a general fan who grew up watching Naruto when I was a child (I dare not say that I am a big fan because I only watched the anime online for Shippuden, not the manga. I bought both the Naruto manga and anime CDs when I was a child). I think the author has done a good job in portraying the third generation. It is completely consistent with the performance and setting of the original work, and there is no need for any changes. Many people say that the third generation is either stupid or bad, and then infer that the third generation is bad, but why can't it be stupid? I really don't understand that so many people just turn a blind eye when the settings in the original work are clearly stated. It is said that the head of a large organization cannot be stupid, but in reality, Song Qin and Song Hui were countless times more educated than the three generations, right? But when the Jin soldiers came to the city, Zhao Ji and Zhao Huan were even a little smarter than the three generations? If you don't understand, go and find out for yourself what these two talents have done, it is guaranteed to shatter your outlook on life, so I won't go into details here. Even if such magical things can happen in reality, is it unacceptable for the third generation to be abstract when dealing with the internal affairs of the village? Why can't a comic book character be just plain stupid? I just can't understand it. 3. I hope that after Naruto has witnessed a lot of darkness, whether in Konoha or Soul Society, he can still maintain his radiant kindness. Naruto is my white moonlight. He is a true saint. He deserves all good things. I hope he can become the common sun of the Naruto world and the Shinigami world (unparalleled power and heart-warming)

It is indeed a book that starts high and ends low. The rest of the writing relies on the defense.

It's a typical high-start and low-end game. It was considered a high-quality product before it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, it started to collapse all the way. The plot, characters, and settings all collapsed. I am a complete Yundehuo fan 🙂

The most damned among the Hokage is Obito. To really call him a scumbag is an insult. Compared to him, Danzo is a humanoid.

The author finally realized that it was getting more and more boring in the later stages... In the final analysis, the core problem is that the author couldn't write the deduction content well and was too obsessed with following the main line of the original work. Naruto's side did not follow the main line directly, although Invincible was a bit broken, but overall the viewing experience was okay. The Bleach side really became more and more boring in order to follow the main line. If it had been decided to follow the main line, why not have more worlds? There is more content that can be expanded.

Samurai Edition

The author doesn't really think it's good to add extras when the main plot climaxes. The main plot hasn't been updated at all in 5 days, and now I have no interest in following it.

You're worse than Ma Liu's ending, the whole Sasuke if has to be ignored

There are endless OOCs. The protagonist's strength is like stepping on the instep of the right foot with his left foot and then spiraling up to the sky. I don't want to explain or cheat. Anyway, I become stronger by switching between the two worlds. One side is invincible and the other is invincible. It's better to cheat. It is more or less a suitable reason to become stronger. It seems that as long as you are alive, your exp can increase. In the beginning, some of the secondary settings that the author used to make up for the loopholes were okay, but gradually the number of secondary protagonists was increased, and he began to stick to the original settings and freely play without restrictions, writing wherever he thought. Three hundred chapters, I really want to finish it. I have only studied Naruto, and the beginning is good. I want to use this article to understand the world view of Death. However, the settings of Naruto are just okay, and I don't know which of the settings of Death are true and which are false. This book has lost its reference value. deeply sorry. Personal evaluation: Ordinary grain. The three views are not poisonous, but the numerical values ​​are poisonous. The plot cannot be evaluated, and it is a bit confusing.

I'm scratching my head, there is indeed something wrong with the writing, but it's a bit difficult to be symmetrical with the current Kyuubi, so let's brainstorm? If the one with the nine tails is not satisfied, you can change it together! Come on, come on

The classic drive high and go low, it doesn't look good from behind

Of course, the blank parts of the original work can be written by the two creators, such as the mechanism of the Pure Land or whether the Byakugan affects the soul. The relationship between the daimyo and the village can also be changed to only affect the senses. But there are some things that are completely contrary to the original work that really should not be written. For example, in the original work of Shippuden, Naruto was fed a crow in the early stages of the book, which was able to eliminate the reincarnation of the dirty land and turned it into a jutsu that came directly from Sasuke's mouth. And after turning into the Ten-Tails Jinchuriki, you can still use the power of the gods, and the reincarnated body of the filth becomes the Ten-Tails jinchuuriki and the rim tomb for the filth state. The whole thing is forced.

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Howling and mourning, singing joyfully with compassion, anger and anger, the nine-tailed Asura.

I caught up to chapter 235 before and put it aside for a while. Now I picked it up and read it from the beginning. I can't stand the part where I saw the Raikage. I can only say that Naruto is a bit separated in the Shinigami and Ninja worlds. Forget it, let's jump straight to the author's next book.

The fighting was written inexplicably, with nothing in it. Also, the protagonist becomes stronger and becomes invincible for no apparent reason without learning anything.

I haven't read it yet. I seem to have ordered all the remaining 32 chapters. I'm a bit disappointed with the subsequent plot. I always feel that something is wrong and it's not the development I expected 😅. However, I'm still going to order all the chapters. I'll give myself an explanation for my previous updates and hope that the next book will be better.