Make Hogwarts Great Again!

I'm having trouble writing. Can you write with your eyes closed?

Is it true that every fan writer has an original dream, but then his dream is shattered when he sees the results 🙂

What the heck is written in Chapter 21? I made a lot of high-sounding remarks from the moral high ground, but in the end I ended up lying to children. It's disgusting.

I retreated first. The protagonist, the native, doesn't know the plot. If you don't care, you can watch it.

In the common room, are you going to let students sleep with one eye closed at night while cosplaying with dolphins?

The opening of this book sets up a relatively high-profile character for the protagonist. Without any understanding of the protagonist's past, it is difficult to create a sense of involvement. Without a sense of involvement, the characters and plot seem a bit hollow. I feel there is some difference between using the protagonist of the original work as the protagonist of a fanfic and using a self-created character as the protagonist. Of course, this is just my subjective opinion...

Are you really not going to write anymore? I quite like this setting. Among so many Harry Potter fans, there are only a few who really care about education and use modern ideas to improve the educational status of Hogwarts. And it can also positively refute the weird ideas of some positive characters in the original work. If this feeling persists, it is expected that Professor Magic will surpass the position of Professor HP in my heart. What a pity.

🎭 Character design: This book has adjusted the characters' images for rationality. 🎬 Plot: The protagonist comes to Hogwarts before Harry Potter enters school to promote the problems that the magical education methods need to be reformed based on the advantages of modern education in the Muggle world. He can persuade parents to let their children enroll in Hogwarts without relying on magic to achieve logical rationalization. ✒️Writing: This article rewrites "Harry Potter's What If Timeline" from the perspective of a Ministry of Magic employee and teacher. The entire description method is never procrastinating and tries to skip plots that have nothing to do with the reform or that do not conflict with it.

It would be too hard for Umbridge to break down

Are you a eunuch? I quite like it.

The first two were a bit awkward to read, but the third one started to get better.

✒️Writing: No problem 🎬 Plot: Not bad 🎭 Character design: OK

44/44. The title of the book is very "crazy", but the content is quite solid. A native implements educational reforms to keep pace with the times at Hogwarts. There is a slight flaw in that there is no further elaboration on the implementation of the system. ——Shen Nong Baicao Garden. July 14, 01:34

The entry point is novel, I am an experienced fan writer, and my writing style is also good. It's just that it's hard to collapse in the common room, it feels very weird.

After reading too many Harry Potter fanfics, I am almost immune to most of the themes. After all, even if many works are well written, they will be boring to the end after reading the beginning. However, although this book is also a professorial text about the director of education of the Ministry of Magic, the author's writing skills are very mature and the things written are very interesting. The only worry at the moment is that the protagonist's strength and "intelligence" may be too strong. If he is not familiar with the original work in the setting, he will strip the final boss Voldemort's underwear in a short time. This will lead to a lot of strange things in the future plot, such as magic transformation. If the original world view is expanded or Nose's strength is greatly increased, then the author will probably find that there is not much to write about. Oh, there is another way to set up a grander vision (other fans often write), such as overturning the law of secrecy, merging wizards and Muggles, and even the sea of stars and so on. . .

Room of Requirement Dumbledore didn't know?

I haven't read Harry Potter, so when did I open the new book?

Nice! Update quickly😍

Can you watch Harry Potter if you haven't seen it?

After all, he is still an old author, and his skills are still there. The protagonist is German, and he has indeed written stereotypes. It can be said that the protagonist is a strict, smart, and upright person. As for the issue of the indigenous people, this can be completely ignored. Instead of reading countless stories about time travelers saving Hogwarts with the same plot, I would like to read a story that looks at Hogwarts from another angle. The time travelers and locals are not important. The content of the novel is interesting and innovative. It is important that the protagonist does not lose his intelligence.

The protagonist is similar to Cedric from the original generation?