Demon Slayer: I Can Add Some Points to My Breathing Technique

The author's grades are a bit poor, please try your best👏

Make the breathing method the same as the exercise! The original work is just a special rhythm of breathing to strengthen cardiopulmonary function! And all the flowers, water and fire in the original work are just special effects! As for strengthening breathing methods, it is better to strengthen your lungs directly. The stronger your lung function is, the stronger your breathing, heart and lungs will be! Only the one with low martial arts level in the original Demon Slayer! Enhance your cardiopulmonary function, visual nerve, and body coordination to be better than ordinary people! You are just a pillar, your cardiopulmonary function will make you breathe stronger, improve your physical fitness, visual nerves, opponent moves, attack tracks clearly, body coordination, range of motion, reduce unnecessary movements, sword swing speed, power speed, dodge, etc.! If you enhance any one of them here, you will be a big enhancement compared to those in the original work. Especially the stripes, this one is even more heavyweight. Is Duduo psychostimulant good? Why write the timeline of Demon Slayer and only the secret organization! If you were a hundred years late, all kinds of artillery, guns, aircraft and missiles would have come out, and why would they be hidden? Because steam engine trains appeared at that time. Things are getting serious. Not to mention that the United States is interested in immortal creatures like you, you can't even withstand the muskets of Japanese nobles!

First of all, it is clear that Demon Slayer's Breath of the Sun and Breath of Water have neither fire nor water. They are all special effects for the purpose of painting on the screen. According to the settings, there are no such special effects.

I don't understand how the protagonist, who is a numerical monster and a system person, is reduced to having to learn from wild dogs on the roadside like Ninja Village. When did the system make sense? Which breathing method is not automatically mastered after the skill points are understood? In the past, the He Dao was fine when the value reached it, but now why is it unable to be transparent? The world view of Demon Slayer is not big, and I haven't written many words in it, but am I here to watch Demon Slayer fight ninjas? The protagonist has never even seen Mukai, and has no clues at all, and 4 of the protagonists have not appeared. How come he is reduced to writing about the shinobi village with only a few words?

What I wrote earlier is pretty good, but it's really hard to agree with Quan Blade....

Identified as a story about the protagonist eunuch, highly suspicious of a dream ending, not recommended

Until the fist blade appeared. Well, if you want to play your own niche hobby, just write whatever you want. It doesn't matter if you just get a dagger. If you want to make money, don't write about Kenblade. Most of Demon Slayer's audience likes open battles. You can say that Kenblade is passionate, but it has nothing to do with open battles. The other thing is the sense of fighting scenes. You write about the protagonist with a sword slashing through the ghost's neck like a flash. I have seen animations, comics, or similar film and television dramas, and I know how it is expressed, and I have the picture in my mind. As for the fist blade, I can't think of it at all. Not to mention that the pictures you posted are all different. Then there is the characterization. The moment he took out the fist blade, the protagonist felt obscene. Inexplicably, he thought of street gangsters, tooth tigers, killers, and assassins. The thought of using the sun's breath later was as uncomfortable as rice with mustard.

Is it an ancient setting that the male protagonist is emotionally insensitive and has no emotional intelligence? ? No one likes it now. The more I look at it, the more I think 😅😅😅 The people who have both settings are among the few in the huge base of reality.

I put it down for a long time, but when I look back, I haven't finished it yet. . . To be honest, it is better to write something like Zhutian. It is difficult to insert more content into the story of Demon Slayer. The original one is not that profound, and it will be all water from now on.

In order to avoid the truth about whether the protagonist has traveled through time, and because he doesn't want to choose between the ending of the dream and the dramatic change in the protagonist's temperament, he chooses unlimited water to delay time. From the time you set up this worldview, this question has been waiting for you at the end as the ultimate proposition. No matter whether you write a good or bad plot in the middle, unless you are creative and write that the protagonist dies in the middle before seeing all the misfortunes, you cannot escape from explaining whether the protagonist's experience is the fantasy before the equipment leaks and is electrocuted, or whether the protagonist's consciousness travels through the game after the game malfunctions and the dice rolls out a great success.

The protagonist is a time traveler but you don't know the plot? The writing is okay but I don't like the main character who doesn't know the plot.

I really want to read the comments, but the weapon is a fist blade, so I can't hold back 😰 There's no problem with the plot, and there's no problem with the relationship, but your weapon 😰 makes me really nervous right now

The writing is good and can attract people to read in one breath, especially as a Demon Slayer fan. It's a pity that Zhou Shuren's appearance is a failure, too much to persuade him to quit.

In fact, I have seen more than half of it now, and I still don't understand whether the protagonist is really just stuck in the game and unable to get out, surrounded by NPCs and not real people, or whether he has really traveled through time but is in the form of a game. I feel that at least halfway through this, I feel that the author himself doesn't understand it either. I hope the author can come out and explain it and reply personally. The results of this book will definitely be much better. Regardless of whether you decide to actually turn it into a game, games in 2099 are so awesome. Each NPC has its own independent consciousness. I decided to turn it into a real time travel. As the system said before, it would take more than 8,000 times the time of 4 hours to fix the bugs. After that, it would really be thrown back to the protagonist. In the real world, he would still be an ordinary person with nothing. No matter which decision you make, if you say it yourself, it will definitely improve your academic performance and prevent you from dying. Rather than leaving the reader guessing here.

Yaohu's skill name is too weird. What the hell is Desert Guyan? You might as well let AI help you come up with the skill name.

Once it's on the shelves, you have to pay to read it. If you don't send me the royalties, how can I subscribe?

😠 One inch is small, one inch is clever... I thought that the protagonist's entire fist blade was intended to make up for blindness, but it turned out that it was intended to be used as the main weapon. Anyway, I don't agree with what the author said. When fighting in complex terrain such as alleys and dense forests, short weapons have more advantages than long weapons. Short weapons are only effective in special operations. In other words, the protagonist is a cheater, and he also has an extraordinary world view.

I feel more and more that this point of view is correct. With more and more content, the author now has no control over the development of the story. It can only be said that this idea is a pity

I feel more and more watery. I wrote a dozen chapters about my daily life. If it doesn't work, just have a climax and then just end it. Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba is difficult to write a long story anyway.

You should now consider whether it is a dream ending or whether the protagonist should accept the fact of time travel.

I don't quite understand whether the author wants to write about stock trading or a harem. I have read more than 100 chapters and the male protagonist has no idea of ​​having a harem at all. The author has written at least three more that seem to be female protagonists. According to my previous reading experience, there is no progress until the ending. I hope the author can tell me how many wives the male protagonist has in this book.

I always recommend it, but I don't dare to read it Demon Slayer is a small world to begin with, and the upgrade system described in the introduction seems quite powerful And then I wrote more than 500 chapters Why do I feel that it is either a mess, or that I am overpowering the master,,,,,

I haven't read it yet, but I just have a question. I've seen a lot of Demon Slayer fanfiction. It's okay to have multiple heroines. Single or double heroines are basically butterfly ninjas. What the hell is a heroine? Tall, good-looking and flexible, Butterfly Ninja seems to be quite plain. It's not that bad, it's just that there are too many and it makes me tired of looking at them.

It looked okay from the front, but the latest chapter of yours, which has such a high energy level. It's really outrageous. It's really finished. I don't want to read it anymore. It's such an outrageous thing. The energy level of more than 60,000 is not as outrageous as you think. The original combat power is not as outrageous as you think. What's the magic change?

Where did you write it? Is there a heroine on the table?

I discovered this book yesterday and immediately ordered it today

There is a feeling of new spirituality, and I keep adding things I want to write. It's like opening a blind box. Nor will they follow a sense of security and avoid poisonous points, such as fan-made original heroines, etc.

The starting point is a rare quality Demon Slayer fanfic

This is another fan novel where the main character doesn't know the plot. I'm speechless.

I quite like the rhythm of the story. The only problem is that the world of Demon Slayer is still too small The protagonist's upgrade space is too small