Starting Out as a Disciple of the Yinkui Sect

Honestly, as a protagonist, you need at least one standout quality—either exceptional talent, unwavering perseverance, or brilliant strategy. But this completely ordinary, loser-like character isn't popular. No wonder your books are generally poorly received. I suggest you read *Pillow Blade* when you have time; see how it portrays protagonists. I think people prefer protagonists who can resist temptation and are decisive in their actions.

It's one thing to say Kou Xu is talented, but the protagonist is just too pathetic. If the protagonist has high spiritual talent, where is it? Those unique insights? The protagonist must have some outstanding qualities; right now, he seems incompetent at everything, and his talent isn't particularly remarkable. The protagonist definitely needs to be compared to the world's top talents.

I didn't understand the protagonist's thinking in the latest chapter. How do you know you can't practice the Longevity Manual if you haven't even read it? Maybe one day you'll have a flash of inspiration and understand some of its principles? What kind of writing is this?

So, whether the protagonist can cultivate the Dao Heart Demon Seed is, frankly, very difficult without extraordinary skills and fortuitous encounters; it's not something that can be solved by the mindset of a transmigrator. The Twin Dragons have the protagonist's halo, constantly encountering extraordinary skills and fortuitous events.

The protagonist is a projection of the author's own personality in some aspects, and newer authors tend to project more of themselves. The reason why everyone says the main character is not outstanding is because the author really can't write one. He never carefully observed what outstanding people in reality should be like, how they should be presented, and how to write about someone who is very ordinary. Humans cannot write or imagine things they have never seen.

You wasted those three golden chapters! Knowing this is the world of *Twin Dragons of the Tang Dynasty*, and you're still a disciple of the Yin Kui Sect, your first thought wasn't how to practice martial arts to improve your strength and survive?!?!?! Instead, you went out shopping?!?!?

After reading a few chapters, it's basically the author rambling on and on, spouting their own opinions, and in the classic ladybug style.

This author, who wrote three books and abandoned them all, should be blacklisted.

Lacking in martial arts skills yet prone to lewdness and flirtation, he's truly a perfect cannon fodder. Without some real skill, how dare he join Liangshan?

Pang Ban's cuckoldry technique is merely an application of the sixth chapter of the Demon Seeding Technique, "Seed the Sixth". The usual methods of cultivating demonic powers use tangible objects as the medium. However, because Pang Ban's level is too high, he can use intangible emotions as the medium, which is the method of "using people as the medium and emotions as the guide," commonly known…