Rising Through the Martial Arts World

The protagonist has a terrible temperament, acts erratically, and fails to distinguish between primary and secondary points. The writing is disorganized and the style is bizarre.

The protagonist's purpose in transmigrating is to resolve the cold poisoning caused by his physical cultivation methods in his previous life. He should immediately begin practicing that evil technique before learning other martial arts like the Evil-Repelling Sword Manual or seeking out a divine healer. Otherwise, even if he masters other martial arts in a few months, he'll still be crippled when he returns.

This Triple Burner Yin Sha Technique accumulates cold energy, isn't that exactly the opposite of the Evil-Repelling Sword Manual? Both have flaws, so wouldn't practicing them simultaneously achieve a balance of Yin and Yang?

How did you learn the Evil-Repelling Sword Manual? Was it through castration or the use of cold energy? They didn't explain it at all; you just somehow mastered it without any explanation.

After reading the synopsis: "The main world is timid and submissive, while the martial arts world is full of powerful blows," I didn't want to read it anymore. What's the point of talking about bullying the weak and fearing the strong?

Let's cut this and think carefully about what I want to write.

No wonder, the first three chapters were not exciting at all.

The protagonist's main world is set in the late stages of a vast dynasty. At the start, his internal energy technique, the Yin Sha Gong, is so cold and deadly it's a suicidal method, but its unique meridian circulation has a calming and concentration effect. In his first world, he's an old spy named Laudenuo.

Many fans of The Smiling, Proud Wanderer are very kind to Lin Pingzhi; can't they live without him?

The beginning was alright, but the later parts became too messy. Since you knew that the Martial Arts Sect transported you to another world because of luck, and that your identity fluctuated between good and bad, you should have guessed the importance of luck, yet you didn't try to obtain it. Your actions in *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer* are so erratic; shouldn't you change the original text?