Rising Through the Martial Arts World

The protagonist's character is too bad, he behaves erratically and does not distinguish between priorities and priorities. The writing is scattered and the writing style is strange.

There is no priority. The purpose of the protagonist's time travel is to solve the problem of cold poison caused by real-life physical skills. He should practice the evil skills immediately and then practice martial arts such as evil-fighting sword manuals or find a miracle doctor. Otherwise, he will spend a few months practicing other martial arts and still be a disabled person after returning.

Isn't this triple-burner Yin evil skill that accumulates cold energy exactly the opposite of the sword formula for warding off evil spirits? Both have flaws, so wouldn't practicing at the same time create a yin and yang?

How to practice the evil-repelling sword technique? From the palace or from the cold? I didn't even explain it. I was just confused and it was fine. I just practiced it.

When I saw the synopsis: The main world is submissive and the martial arts world strikes hard, I didn't want to watch it. What's there to say about bullying the weak and fearing the strong?

Cut it and think carefully about what you want to write.

No wonder the plot in the first three chapters is not exciting at all

The protagonist's main world is in the last years of a vast dynasty. At the beginning, the three empty Yin evil skills and Yin cold death are suicide skills. The pulse is unique and has the effect of calming the mind. The first world identity is that of an old spy from Laudno. In order to break the situation, the protagonist practiced evil swordsmanship. His spirit became even more broken and he acted erratically, but the author grasped it very well. The Second World is Sword Rain. I haven't watched it, but the protagonist seems to be quite relaxed. Comments on Dugu Nine Swords: It is purely a pretense of martial arts. It is a complete collection of broken martial arts summarized by Dugu Qiubei. However, Dugu Qiubei's vision is limited, and Zhutianli can only be used as a basis. Just give it a try, how can you defeat the ultimate swordsmanship in the Wilderness Chronicles?

Many Xiaoao fans are very kind to Lin Pingzhi. Can't we live without him?

The first part is okay, but the second part is too confusing. Since you know that luck takes you through time in Yanwumen and your identity changes, you should have guessed how important luck is, but you can't find any way to get it. In Swordsman, you are so messed up that you should change the original work. It really makes you sick. The sunflowers to ward off evil spirits mess up your character. You don't want to learn Taoism and Buddhism but pursue the minor path of music.