Martial Arts Story: Huashan Yanxiake

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Isn't Hunyuan Gong a palm technique from the outside in?

The settings are okay. The human body is a whole. Internal energy and vital energy should be the same as physical strength. People will always have it until they die. How can it be like battery power?

There is a reason why this book is not popular. Everything is taken for granted. Just like a naughty boy who knows that 1+1=2, he thinks that he knows all the knowledge and is smarter than everyone else. Everything can be applied using 1+1!

After reading it, most of the content can be said to be wonderful. The author has his own ideas and understanding of the setting, which is not bad. However, the writing of some plots is really inferior, and there are also retro-style narratives interspersed in it. The plot is introduced from a third perspective. This habit is really not good. I don't say it is outdated or outdated. Anyway, it doesn't match the content of your book. If you just use it to enrich the plot, then just pretend I didn't say anything. . In short, the book is okay, but there are many things that can be criticized. If you are not afraid that the author will be unhappy, you can go and read the sword out of Hengshan next door to check for any omissions.

I feel like this protagonist is too awesome compared to Yue Buqun. He keeps creating his own exercises casually and everything goes smoothly.

The character design of Pig's Knuckle is determined by planning, but the matter of brushing it is inexplicable 1, what are the benefits? What's the motive? 2. If I practice martial arts with high strength, can I guarantee that I can beat pig's feet? What about stability? 3. If I don't bring a helper, I can go and defeat Youxiang Wentian and Renwoxing who may have help from other demon sect elders. Where is my brain? There is no benefit, the risk is very high, and there is no preparation for the risk, why do you act like this?

Yan Xiake, I thought I was writing about the misty world, but I didn't know that your realistic version, the various principles of practicing martial arts, greatly reduced the sense of satisfaction. You only took Jin Yong's reasonable view of reality, and there is no romance at all.

During the Tianlong Period, Jiumozhi directly entered the Dali Kingdom to steal the royal things. The Xixia Princess Li Qiushui who was chased by the Tianshan Boy Lao went into hiding. During the Condor Trilogy period, the Four Jue entered the palace and went home, and even ignored the powerful prince of the Jin Kingdom. During the Divine Condor Period, Yang Guo killed the prime minister, the Mongol Khan, and Guo Jing blocked the main Mongolian army for decades, which fully demonstrated the master's ability to destroy the enemy's country.

Why do I think the protagonist's martial arts is very powerful in the description, but he's not that strong in fighting?😥

Another money liar, eunuch

Not bad, good, keep persisting, keep this level and give you full order

There were two battles to defend Mount Huashan just after it was released. If the writing was better, it could be written with ups and downs, but the author's writing is not strong enough, and it is as if the outline has been exceeded. To put it bluntly, what was written in these two defense battles can only be called "outline". By analogy, we were originally expecting a plot in which Shi Naian is linked to each other, Shi Qian steals a armor and earns Xu Ning to break a chain of horses. However, what the author wrote is "Wu uses tricks to earn Xu Ning and goes up the mountain", without all the ups and downs and brilliance in the middle.

I just feel like the way it's written is quite strange, and I can't tell what's wrong with it 🤔

The writing is smooth and the story is interesting. What attracts me the most is the self-created and improved martial arts, which are so well-founded that people today can be convinced. It just seems like that.

This idea based on Zixia Chuang's moves is very good. The book is also very quaint. Good luck to the author.

Where are people? ? How long has it been since, author, you forgot about the book?

Has the author seen Sword Out of Huashan? That fan-written book is pretty good. . Of course your fan writing is good