My Death in a Strange World

It was really good written about 30 chapters ago. But when I got home and had a conversation with my parents, those two pictures really left me speechless. Why are you doing so many complicated settings? Apart from spanking, it's just chatting. There is almost no plot advancement. The same number of words as water. You are not an orphan in Qidian Orphanage. Don't go through so much trouble. It is still a dangerous world with enemies, bad guys, and strange things. You are not a relaxed urban flow. You have 100 godfathers and godmothers and no one talks about you. But you are not

Doing weird things and picking up girls, it's pretty cool

Hello everyone, I am reading all the comments you have written. Many people say that Su Meier's plot is written too much. In fact, Su Meier is related to a big plot later, so I wanted to lay the groundwork first. As a newcomer, I may not have a good grasp of the rhythm, and the writing was a bit delayed. Now let's wrap up Su Meier's chapter, and then write about the subsequent plot. As a pure newbie, I may not have any strengths in other aspects, but my mentality is okay. This book only has 300 collections a month. I don't know if it's because of the book or the channel. But there are quite a lot of comments, some are praising, some are scolding, and some are giving opinions. Thank you very much. Newcomers will always hit a wall, just cross it. I feel like I understand something after writing this. Readers, if you have any comments or suggestions, please write them here and I will read them. Thank you again for reading this book. I love you and express my love with your hands.

Usually I just delete books that I can't stand without saying anything more. This one is really a pity. The first twenty chapters are quite interesting. Those who can't finish reading these chapters at the beginning of twenty-one are definitely geniuses. If you don't know how the story will develop, why don't you refer to other people's books? Why use the ancient plot of a cup in the face from more than ten or twenty years ago and still have several chapters in a row? The reading rate has definitely plummeted in these chapters. Shouldn't newcomers writing books have to figure out what readers don't want to read the most? We also need to strengthen the heroine's lightning protection. If she is not popular, she will definitely be criticized by many people. If it is an experienced author, the role of the shepherd boy in Zhutou Village will be made into a girl. Hey, you can take care of yourself.

The plot is quite entertaining, but the details and writing style are a bit too novice. It seems a bit nonsense. Generally speaking, I can see it, but I can't study it in detail.

It's average. You can watch it, but it's not as good as the reviews say.

What are you writing about in the chapters after Chapter 20, playing retro?

Author, I feel that your character dialogues are a bit immature, especially when I was listening to the book. I suggest simply writing less about people and more about deception. After all, writing about people in Mysterious Resurrection has been criticized by many people.

The most fundamental reason is: power. Do special departments have rights? How much power should there be? If we only look at the so-called levels, should the strongest person be the president? It's easy to talk about it when you don't have a family, but when you have a family, you have to write down the power in detail. The more you write, the more flaws you have. The most common way to deal with it is for parents not to cause trouble to their children and not to talk about it. Isn't this unrealistic? The other is to let other people take the initiative to please the protagonist's parents, but problems will arise in the subsequent realization of power.

It could have been written very well. Concentrate on writing weird words. There are too many stitches, I don't even know what I am writing. Write a new book and delete all the parts that are not weird.

It's quite interesting. I finished it in one go. Good luck to the author.

Why is the pace so fast all of a sudden? I think the world view will change soon after this is released.

The character creation obviously includes a lot of the author's own personal emotions, or some of the contradictions on the Internet are deliberately added. It feels better if I don't add so many personal items

This introduction looks very interesting, why did I just read it now?

The plot doesn't drag, and the writing is very good.

The writing was okay and I could keep reading. It was okay at first, but later on Meier and the ring appeared too blandly and frequently, and there was no desire to keep reading.