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Tens of thousands of Demon Sect monks are just fighting for the position of the Holy Son! Only one person will survive in the end! ? Are the people from the Demon Sect fools? If we do this, are there still people in the Demon Sect?

The setting is quite reasonable, neither too big nor too small, which puts the protagonist in an excellent position, which I think is pretty good. I just hope that the subsequent conflicts will not be too conventional. Let the protagonist be a good guy, but not provoke the bad guys. He can even talk to the bad guys and cooperate to a certain extent. As a practitioner with a good reputation, people don't always come to look for trouble. This kind of plot is really annoying. The previous crazy killing plot is really outdated. Now, to be honest, I prefer to be a little more calm, and then go on normal adventures to get treasures and the like.

I don't understand. Wouldn't it look better without traveling through time? Are all book lovers like this now? Is it impossible to substitute without traveling through time? Wrong

As an old bookworm, to be honest, I am very selective in reading. Your writing is really good, but your reputation is too small now. I feel that if you continue to follow the current pace, if this book can be popular, can you ask the editor for a recommendation position? I feel that your book is not ready for more people to read.

The setting of the world of cultivating immortals in this book is okay, and the economic system is also good. In my opinion, it belongs to the mortal stream, which means practicing step by step to improve your abilities and levels. But if you create two immortals in the early stage, one is the Heaven-Winning Immortal and the other is the Lu Immortal, it will ruin the style of the book. It's a bit out of the ordinary flow, especially once the Enlightenment Pearl comes out, it seems to be inconsistent with the effort to upgrade. You have developed top-level combat power so early and are directly related to the protagonist. Paying attention to the protagonist makes the two masters who are already very capable look like clowns. The fate of the protagonist is not in his own hands. The protagonist's story is more like the plaything of two gods. It doesn't mean that top-level combat power cannot appear, but don't have anything to do with the protagonist in the early stage, or don't write it out. It can be revealed later. Here you can learn the gift of Xiang Zhili from the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, and you can bury the button. If you write two gods like this, firstly, the protagonist's efforts and choices will reduce the sense of immersion in the main story, and secondly, Xiao Li and Guan Xuan will look like clowns. There are also the sub-top combat power Old Turtle and Weapon Spirit here, and they must be able to crush the two masters.

It was recommended by another author, and I think it's pretty good now. I'd like to mention one negative point here, which is that I feel that the character's lines are too colloquial and modern, such as "wtf". After all, the male protagonist has no background in time travel, so it's a bit inconsistent.

This is cultivation. Nowadays, cultivation is all about disciples harming masters, masters cheating disciples, fellow disciples constantly killing each other, and even Taoist couples and their children can be killed. This is to highlight the cruelty of the world of immortality, which is devoid of human kindness. After reading it, all three views are subverted, and it is completely unreadable.

Not bad, really good. It can be regarded as a mortal cultivating immortality. The writing style and plot are both average and above average. What's more valuable is that I don't see any poisonous points. Come on, author.

This book sucked again. I gave up after just a few chapters.

The story is well written, but the pace is too slow.

I quite like the indigenous protagonist. I would like to ask the author, how is the situation of the heroine?

It's been too long since I've seen Aboriginal Cultivation of Immortality written well. I support it.

The writing of this book was quite good before But, the plot as written now is a bit unsatisfactory. I know that the author wrote this plot through the event of earning 30,000 spiritual coins, so that the protagonist can improve his Taoist heart and conduct himself in the world. After all, the protagonist is an aborigine, not a modern person who has traveled through the past, and is almost useless in terms of how to behave and treat others. Originally, your previous chapter was about Zuo Daohua's flying secret technique for practicing Qi. If you write such a few chapters, it would be good if you get this result. After all, this secret technique can also reveal some big secrets behind it, which will serve as a foreshadowing for the future. But now, due to some reasons, it has been changed, and it will appear that the previous chapters are a bit too wordy. There is also the problem of the raw materials of the current talisman paper. You can achieve this by uniting other talisman masters. This has several advantages: 1. Unite other people so that your business will not be deliberately squeezed, because as long as a place lasts for a long time, there will definitely be some so-called labor unions. Moreover, this place is originally a small place with a small flow of people. The so-called customer source is fixed. Unless a large-scale war suddenly breaks out, the things everyone buys are fixed. Second, by uniting with others, you will have a source of raw materials for your talisman paper, and you can directly harvest other people's supply channels. You don't have to look for it yourself, it's stable. Third, as you said before, if you want to make mid-grade and high-grade talismans during the Qi training period, you can make low-grade talismans for others, because it is not cost-effective for you to make low-grade talismans, because your talismans must be better than the ones here. And because the quality of your talismans is better, your talismans can create a star effect and play a promotion role. When others join, you can sell better. Fourth, for those who join, you can use part of the profits as franchise fees. Wouldn't it be easier to make money? Five, in this franchise process, you can create some small troubles to achieve the purpose of training the protagonist. For example (there is a family that makes a living by making talismans, and now their business has been robbed. They want to find the protagonist, and then the protagonist will do something to defeat the other party) I hope this little plot can be over quickly, and return to the Purple Rain Sect as soon as possible Also, the particularity of the protagonist's skill (immortal) must also be shown. You must at least have these special characteristics. First, the magic power of the skill is stronger than others. Let's do it three times. After all, you have been improved by so many spiritual objects together with the master before. According to the description in the article, your talent has reached the level of the protagonist's master (Jindan Zhenren). Now that you have cultivated this immortal again, your Qi training speed has returned. You must be strong,

It's from the introduction. It's ok in the beginning. Come on.

It's very interesting. I voted for it 19 times a month. I hope I can keep writing.

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It's well written, and it's even more important to support it now that it's on the shelves, and there will be more of it!

Come on, author, Xianxia is a breath of fresh air 👏

I like the mortal flow the most. Check out this one.

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Are you tj? Stop reading this book to death😭