The Prodigal Who Lived in the Republic of China

He really traveled through the Republic of China, brought martial arts skills to Japan, and went to Japan to assassinate the Japanese elites who were attacking the Chinese side, and then assassinated the Atomic Godfather to make World War II more bloody.

,,,, What a fire burning opium

The dialogue between the characters is very weird. What I want to read is a novel. Can it be written more normally 😴? No drama or translation accent. It feels like I am reading lines, not life-like at all. Oh my God, my dear friend, I'm going to kick this author's ass with my boot. Oh my goodness. Come and see, my friend, for heaven's sake.

Personal suggestions are for reference only. When writing about the Republic of China, it is best not to get involved in either party or get too involved in the general trend of the country. Just write a dashing knight-errant. When encountering injustice, it is best to draw your sword for justice and just throw away the trouble. By the way, you can also go to Shanghai and Xiangjiang to meet the influential figures of the times. It is best to stay outside the times rather than blend in with them. As for national affairs, it is natural for ancestors to take the lead. It's an insult to write. Later, if there is no need to write about the Republic of China, we can change the map. The suggestions for martial arts level are concise and clear, and do not divide into some messy proficiency levels. It's okay if you don't know how to master it. All that stuff about superb levels is bullshit. Any skill will become rusty if you don't practice it for a long time. You can recover with more practice. This is the principle of never leaving your hand. Every time I see the author arranging a series of proficiency levels, I feel sick about what is small and what is great. Shouldn't it be a matter of yes or no? What would you say is the difference between Dacheng and perfection? It's just that the adjectives are used differently. At most, you won't be able to attend the meeting and then become proficient.

The creativity is very good, the writing is awesome 😓 Knowing the danger, he always uses a knife and a gun The protagonist is not a fool, right? Martial arts also include long-range concealed weapons, right? Hidden weapons can kill people at night without anyone noticing No safer than stabbing someone with a gun.

After reading a few chapters, the golden three chapters were mediocre. But he kills decisively, strikes fiercely and doesn't beep too much. At present, the golden finger seems simple. You get soul points by killing people. You can recharge two silver coins to buy cheats. The soul points can be upgraded to increase the level of cheats to improve your physical fitness.

What is the meaning of writing about Lucky Student? On the surface, it is to take in a little brother, but in fact, it feels like the protagonist is just a nanny.

Where is the prodigal son of the Republic of China? He has been helping the Communist Party to fight against Japan. This is also called a prodigal son! ? Just call the Republic of China to resist Japan.

Chapters 40 and 50 seem awkward.

When writing about three people, the author had to describe them from head to toe. When the protagonist took a shower, he also described them from head to toe. It was too literary and too watery. There is also a protagonist who can assassinate and compete with enemies. Do you think you are writing a published martial arts novel? 😅😅😅

When I first saw your profile, I thought I had come across what I had always wanted to see. There used to be a book about the evolution of the protagonist! Starting from the Quanzhen Sect of the Legend of the Condor Heroes in the Song Dynasty → Sleeping (training) in the late Xiantian period → Wake up in the Ming Dynasty (Qi training period → Sleeping in seclusion in the later Qi training period and breaking through the foundation building period (not breaking and dying) → Wake up in the late Qing Dynasty and the beginning of the Republic of China → Resistance War (not invincible and will not die) → Live in seclusion in Guizhou mountains in the later stage of foundation building after liberation → Break through the golden period when opening Dan (what you write later is too bland, so that's the end of the book). Although you are not writing about Mingjin and Darkjin Danjin (these are too old, Danjin is just like that, there is not much to write), in fact, I think it can be a combination of swallowing the stars and science fiction (Xuanhuang Technology Empire) (Earth alone)! The middle-aged and elderly people who were lonely and waiting to die were driving alone in Tibet. They picked up a smooth, black and dark red stone in the shape of a non-metallic non-jade in the river. On the way home at the end of the journey, they encountered a car accident. Before the darkness submerged their consciousness before death, they thought about their lives. If there was an afterlife like in the Qidian novel (a twenty-year-old bookworm). ) He will live a new life without regrets. The darkness will eventually overwhelm his consciousness. But he doesn't know that his blood is soaked in the black stone hanging on his chest and is absorbed by the stone. Maybe the stone feels his unwillingness, or for other reasons, the stone breaks through this time and space with his soul and consciousness and enters the long river of time.

Give the girl chicken legs. Chicken legs are a product of industrialization in modern times. Chicken legs in the Republic of China can only be obtained by buying chickens. What you wrote seems to be asking her to buy two more chicken legs as a snack when grocery shopping. Every inch of kindness fights with every inch of hatred. You should be more rigorous in terms of money and numbers. Have you checked the prices in 1941? Be more rigorous and readers will feel more real after reading it.

The creativity is good, but the writing is not! 🔨

Momojichi, a little brother became a disciple and spent four or five chapters. Why not use it if you have a hidden weapon, like Dongfang Bubai's one-shot or learn a gun? With the God 8 attribute of quick thinking and clear mind, wouldn't it be fast to learn? There is also an improvement in lightness skills. If you are fast, you can run away even if you are beaten. In the early stage, you don't need to be faster than a gun, just be faster than a gun. Money can be provided by people who provide intelligence, manpower and organizational points. Fighting to support war is getting stronger and stronger, and the local bandit gangs are replaced by tight security. Killing hundreds of thousands of people will not reduce the soul points anyhow. By then, the guns and artillery will do no harm to you except nuclear bombs. With a few moves, the island country will be wiped out. Surrender and surrender to you. Kill, kill, kill.

In modern times, during the war in Shanghai, would there be a shop selling weapons? Will there be a semi-public information shop? Such information only costs 80 silver dollars? Are you writing fantasy? We still need a pill seller! Were there schools in Shanghai during the war? I also spent 165 silver dollars to hire this genius to teach mathematics. Do you teach advanced mathematics, algebra, geometry, and the latest computers?

The writing is unnatural, and I feel like the author is getting older and wants to write about the free and easy feeling of martial arts, but the writing style is actually quite ordinary, so the writing feels artificial. I don't know why this book is on the top of the new book list. Is it because martial arts is too niche, or is it the author's own data?

The author should add some heroines, young wives, and people who have an affair with the protagonist to attract more people to read. Unless the writing is good and the subject matter is fresh, it will be difficult to achieve results.

Shanghai holding a torch in 1941? ? What a joke, a lot of flashlights have been sold, who's going to take the torch? ? This thing will burn out in a few minutes.

Does the author write online articles? Why do I always feel so awkward, like reading a collection of excellent essays?

I was so bored that I found a few boxes of books, which was enough for me alone. I have to bring a bunch of people with me.

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