The First Marquis of Great Song

I came to see the title of "The First Marquis of the Song Dynasty," not to see you play games. 🤭 The game has too much storyline.

They've been making this ridiculous game for ages, I'm fed up.

Holy crap! You didn't just copy Dream of the Three Kingdoms because you were too lazy to write your own skills, did you?

I only read the synopsis. If Bao Zheng in the book is the reincarnation of the God of Literature, then who was the top scholar in his year? If I remember correctly, Bao Zheng was only a second-class Jinshi (a successful candidate in the highest imperial examinations)? And the phrase "the god of literature descending to earth" usually describes the top scholar (Zhuangyuan).

The protagonist's personality is unlikable. Even after two lifetimes, he's still a loser. Couldn't he be a little more mature? His power development is mediocre, he doesn't know how to use the system, and he's always playing games. I came to see the protagonist's development, not his gaming. Even if he were playing games, he wouldn't achieve anything significant.

Do you think it's possible that the Song Dynasty was outwardly ruled by civil officials, but in reality it was a military government?

There's no doubt this book has the makings of a hit. However, the author still needs to address the issue of excessive game content. It's normal for the protagonist to be relatively weak in the early stages, requiring a large amount of story to improve their strength.

Cut it off, huh? Hehe, I've hooked up with a rich woman, gotta go!

Author, you can put the game system on the protagonist, but why does the protagonist have to play a virtual game? Why can't it be about doing quests and leveling up in the real world to acquire items? I did see you included real-world experience gain! Why does this require the protagonist to control a little character to fight monsters and level up? What was going to be a book I was starting to think was okay, but after reading this, I'm starting to lose interest.

The opening portrays Bao Zheng as too important, arresting a marquis with a single sentence. Not only that, but the author also arbitrarily pins the blame for others disrupting court proceedings on the protagonist. This is outrageous writing. Does the author really think Bao Zheng is the emperor?