Blue Star OL: The Only Closed Beta Tester

Personally, I feel it's getting increasingly boring. We'd already officially started the main storyline about the Water Mansion (after a lot of build-up), and then this whole "mansion" thing came up. I think there's a reason for the poor performance; one thing is never finished before another is introduced, and there are so many plot holes left unfilled.

This game is very addictive and offers a high degree of freedom.

My writing has really gotten better and better lately. After adding it to my bookshelf, I initially kept reading because the subject matter was interesting. However, around chapter 100, there was too much explanation and elaboration, making it a bit difficult to continue. Plus, the X Mansion storyline really didn't fit the book's theme. But after getting through that phase, it became increasingly interesting. Keep it up!

Rabies is too potent; since any attack can inflict rabies, the protagonist might as well just grab a slingshot, hit a few times to apply the poison, and then run away, kiting monsters to kill them.

Things were alright before we crossed the river. It was a pity about what happened later.

That mansion and the amusement park thing... To be honest, I didn't understand it. It was written, but not clearly. What's the point if the protagonist understands? It's like a riddle. Even at the end, I was still confused. Honestly, the writing is pretty good, but very disorganized.

Everyone, keeping up with the story is really important. For those of you who enjoy raising pets, please take a moment to scroll to the latest chapter and show that you've finished reading. Thank you! 🙏🏻

The author is a riddle-maker; the protagonist suddenly brings up a place, setting, or person that he has never heard of before, making it impossible to immerse himself in the story.

There's so much nonsense going on, and they're even using that riddle-solving gimmick. Luckily, I've read a lot of novels, so I can barely understand what the author is trying to say. Otherwise, like the reader in this chapter said, I would have had to read it several times before I even remotely understood what the author was trying to say.

What's the point of crossdressing? It's better to start writing more every day, build up a backlog of chapters, and release them all at once once you reach 3000 average subscriptions. Even if you don't reach 3000 subscriptions immediately, you can still use those as backlog chapters. Sometimes you can give yourself a break, relax, and have some fun.