I Lead the Internet Era in the World of Immortality

The lifespan of foundation building is only 120 years, so how long is your lifespan of refining qi? From mortal to golden elixir in 120 years? How many days will it take?

The arrival of the new era will inevitably have an impact on the old era. The vested interests of the old era will definitely not want this to happen. There will definitely be people who want to take the fairy brain created by the protagonist as their own. It depends on whether the author writes it or not.

How should I put it, Xian Nao, this name sounds so weird.

When I saw that only warriors used self-destruction to stop the invaders and there were no immortal cultivators, I knew that this book was going to be scrapped, and I couldn't stand it anymore. Goodbye

Why haven't anyone been arrested yet? With so many deaths in this war, both sides should have captured the weaker ones and gathered information

I just like this kind of novel that spreads across the Internet in the world of immortality or fantasy. I like to read it even if it is bad. I said that this author's writing is also good. Do you have any similar recommendations?

To be honest, I could write it in more detail. Yours is like an outline. The content is too dry. Just like an introduction, time jumps very fast, and it's getting faster and faster. If you write it like this, it will be finished soon. The protagonist's sense of existence is too low. You can write a group portrait, thank you for some other things, write some things in detail, and it is best to write something that can be connected together.

Why didn't I stick to my own settings, and later I forgot the character names and region names I wrote? For example, Suyue Fairy and Suyue Fairy City. ? !

It feels like the protagonist will be eliminated sooner or later, getting something for nothing and not learning new knowledge. In this powerful world, knowledge is power.

When I look at the table of contents, I feel like Dagang. How many chapters have he appeared in the library? How many users can a remote market have? A large number of mobile phones only appear in one place? Doesn't Almighty suspect that there is someone behind the scenes? Isn't it possible that Lenovo has something like a more advanced mobile phone behind the scenes? And the protagonist doesn't know about Goldfinger's unnatural nature. A single delay-free remote communication data transmission, this artifact of the interstellar era, is enough to drive people crazy.

The further you get to the back, the more embarrassing it gets. It's disgusting that two sentences can be criticized for something that can be said in one sentence.

The details are too rough. On this Q&A website, the only way to get points is to recycle skills and not repeat them. Doesn't this mean that most people will never get any points?

No secrets, no conflicts, just fighting! DuTM is the world of scientific researchers

There are too many paragraphs, too many explanations, not enough group scenes, and not much positive feedback. The protagonist just changes the map, releases the immortal brain, practices, changes the map, releases the immortal brain, practices... The characters who get the immortal brain are briefly mentioned, and the unfocused supporting characters are impressive.

How did you discover this book?

That second time traveler is the biggest failure

The previous one was good, but I started writing about women before it was put on the shelves, which saved readers money. I guess your first order must be bad. Who likes this genre and likes emotional drama? 🙂🙂🙂

I listened to a few chapters of the book and didn't understand it at all. Various "brains", various "gods".

1-There are too many catchphrases, such as such and such in an instant, it can be said to be such and such, even such and such, of course such and so, also such, simply such and such, and there are repetitions of meaning expressions before and after. 2-The mouth is so high that all kinds of data come at your mouth. 3-It feels like reading the manual. 4-No plot

It was okay in the beginning. When I wrote about the ascension of the Immortal Realm, I gave away people little by little and changed my writing. If the protagonist had ascended all the Immortal Realm under his control in one wave, he would have succeeded long ago!

Computers don't just have chat functions

Too waterytoo

What's going on? Can't you continue writing?

Your Internet is too far away from swallowing up that virtual universe. You can definitely aim at that. The rules can be simulated.

They always say that they are too tied to the Northern Territory. Firstly, there is no sect, and secondly, there is no family. How come I am tied too deeply by myself?