Arrival: I Am Looking for Immortality in the Long River of History

A half-assed protagonist who only does half of everything.

This book was once again persuaded to quit by the protagonist's three views. He is a selfish and white-eyed wolf, indifferently watching his family members around him encounter danger and die.

You're a time-traveler, you have a golden finger, and you ruined your family, you're pretty boring.

The idea is good, but the protagonist feels very disconnected. The protagonist is obviously a time traveler who has lived two lives, but it is completely invisible in the book. He does things without any head or tail. His mentality and style of doing things are only eleven or twelve years old, and he has no experience in social survival. From this point, it can be seen that the author is at most fifteen or sixteen years old and is completely unable to control this style of book.

Chapter 60 was pretty good before. In the end, it would be outrageous to just bring in a foreign genetic warrior. The whole world is building guns to fight off, but there are no genetic warriors. We are just trash, right?

A hammer in one place and a stick in the other. I thought it was okay at first, but it became more and more unpleasant later on. I've always been either cheated by this person or beaten by that person. Author, can't you write some plots in which you gain some ability through something and then solve some problem? Always being driven away.

It's okay, but the protagonist is always affected to develop the plot, and there is no main line to advance the plot. So it's a bit boring to watch.

A very creative novel. Just a bit of a drag. Flawed but a good book. As long as there are no more novels that say you can't practice immortality without spiritual energy. That would be too cheesy. It can also absorb sunlight. It is best to pursue the ability of consciousness to penetrate into the microcosm of the physical world to control all materials in the body and achieve immortality. That is, consciousness ascends to a higher dimension and becomes a higher-dimensional creature.

It's well written and somewhat realistic. The main character's wife is dead.

It's not that practicing martial arts against the enemy is not good, it's just that buying a gun is strange here. If the enemy is thick-skinned, the gun can only damage but not kill the enemy. However, it is very confusing to keep the bomb and not use it, and it cannot upgrade the technology. I might upgrade the martial arts technology, but it is not strong enough. The martial arts training time is not long, and there are a lot of things 😒 The protagonist will not die no matter what? I mainly read the ideas. There are not many interesting parts in this book. Author, please be more relaxed with your outline. I wish you good luck.

What a mess. Add whatever you have. Bigger place. Landlord. Met them all

After studying for 10 years, I think it's pretty good, very creative, and okay. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you!

After reading it, I feel like it's all just an outline, it progresses too fast, and there's no sense of development at all, and it's quite outrageous to kneel down before the character description is even out 😅

It's good to watch, but it's too cliche. I've seen the latest version. The protagonist is now at the limit of his body. It goes without saying that there will be a stronger one soon. It's almost becoming fantasy. In addition, there are too many opportunities. It only takes a few dozen chapters to have an opportunity. Every few chapters, one opportunity, he is truly a child of destiny.

Well written, I have the desire to read it

The protagonist lies flat, with nothing to watch, drifting with the flow, no goal and no theme.

Speechless, the protagonist marries a girl under the age of eighteen. Simply.

The writing is pretty good. Under the general trend, one's personal power is very small, and one can only go with the flow, constantly looking for opportunities to become stronger, experiencing the grief of the death of relatives, and walking alone, which is sad and lamentable.

More updates! More updates! More updates! Say important things three times! ! !

Read It can only be said that the success of great masters is the same, and the fighting methods of fighting on the street are all kinds of strange

Kill decisively. Practicing martial arts means killing.

What is this thing written about? Cowardly

Not great, it didn't make me happy

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

No wonder the more I read, the more familiar I become. It turns out that the author is the one who has traveled all over the world.

The author is from Shuyang, northern Jiangsu Province.