Dreaming About the World, Embarking on the Path of Spiritual Practice

Martial arts is just for fun, you have to start fighting like a dog. Who knows about killing someone in the wilderness? Or maybe the Kunlun sect knows that their leader went to settle a score with the protagonist and disappeared. Do they want to officially declare that their leader was killed by a junior like the protagonist? Do you still want the face?

After reading the first three golden chapters, I felt as if I wanted to eat shit.

Seedling Identification - Contains Spoilers Astronomy, but you can return to the real world This book is well written, the protagonist and supporting characters are very soulful, good grass starts, worth reading —————— —————— —— —————— —————— —————— Currently there is only one time-travel world [100,000 words] ——Swordsman Swordsman has not started the main plot yet I hope the author can write a wonderful story of Jianghu

Will the protagonist's "Snake King Magic" later evolve into "Dragon Magic"?

Please, don't use science to explain martial arts. I'm really convinced. You're just talking nonsense.

No wonder your book is not popular. Your thinking is still based on the Internet writing thoughts of ten years ago.

The more you look at it, the more speechless you become. You want to stop Hu Zi from joining the Sun and Moon God Sect. Just like your parents, why are you disobedient when they control you?

Just stick to science, right? You've traveled through time and space, and you're still materialistic. There's nothing wrong with your brain! ! !

The writing is too bad, otherwise your book would be a hit because the author doesn't know how to tell stories.

There are no demons on earth. It is better to be transcendent, which is more reasonable, such as telekinesis and soul.

Wear martial arts, just wear martial arts, and you have to be smart to explain your inner strength. How do you explain Ren Wo Xing's star-absorbing technique? Zuo Lengchan can still be frozen. Is it possible that the author also wants to come up with a scientific explanation for Tiyunzong's left foot and his right foot to reach the sky?

It is not impossible for the author to write about scientific cultivation, but everything cannot be mechanically imposed. Many sciences still have unsolved mysteries. In addition, cultivating immortals is indeed a very distant thing, and immortals are also an incomprehensible description. Therefore, it will be easier for readers to accept it if it is half science and half cultivation, instead of using science to apply everything. What's more, the protagonist has no systematic study at all. He only memorized a few books and learned some principles, which is just a half-baked... Those scientific masters still have unsolved mysteries. As a result, when the protagonist goes to a different world, everything can be explained by science... Not to mention that the composition of these different worlds is inherently complicated and changeable, and the world system has always had problems in the cultivation of immortality, because the composition is different, just like the universe and planets are all the same thing? Even different regions of a world have different compositions. It is impossible for all the worlds that the protagonist goes to have the same composition... The earth and other planets are not an ecosystem at all... (I am just a metaphor), so many readers are complaining. Anyway, my opinion is too absolute! Maybe the author just wrote this argument, but if there are good directions, he should consider it. After all, I don't think most readers can accept it. I can at least accept scientific cultivation 😂 But in the later period, I couldn't stand it anymore.

It doesn't count as rubbish, but as promised, either I haven't read the previous articles, or I've read too many novice articles, so I'll talk about it when I see something different. There are flaws in the plot arrangement, character dialogue, and even IQ. I would like to ask if you can read the book if you are so good at it, and can you use some brains? After reading too many cool articles, you no longer know how to write comments? After reading the comment section, there were mixed reviews. I was tricked into watching it, but I couldn't stand it with my brain. I understand why some people gave bad reviews, but I was tricked into watching it, and it didn't meet my expectations.

The author, please listen to my advice. Nowadays, human science is nothing in the universe. Stop engaging in your human science.

If you can accept that the protagonist, who had never had enough to eat before, spends thirty taels of gold to buy a toy in ancient times and defeats Dugu Jiujian Feng Qingyang by imitating Japanese swordsmanship, you can read this book.

Zhang Sanfeng is exaggerating a bit. Looking at the amount of knowledge the protagonist has, how can Zhang Sanfeng compare to him? You are right to say that he is powerful and good at maintaining health, but it is not an exaggeration. The so-called cultivation of immortals in martial arts is just a joke on the Internet. Zhang Sanfeng is talented and intelligent, but the protagonist is not? Think about it, the protagonist can learn and innovate just by looking up information. Isn't this amazing?

The beginning looked a bit interesting, but later on I tried to use modern science to apply martial arts to cultivate immortality, but I couldn't do it. If you want to trick me, you should be better at it and learn from it. I have become an immortal in the real world. I have one theory after another, and I have something to it.

I'm not talking about you, what on earth are you doing in the real world? How come you originally planned to pretend it, but ended up saying that the real world is not the only one who is extraordinary? This is okay, I can accept it, but you have to rush to do another thing before you have finished one thing. It is a bit too dry. Many plots are too fragmented and a bit incomprehensible. Moreover, the protagonist is becoming more and more inhumane. How should I put it? I feel that I can no longer take on the role of the protagonist. It has changed from before.

I started writing well, but then I started writing randomly? I shouldn't have written this in such detail, what a pity. A book that consecrated gods collapsed halfway.

I feel like it has changed since the beginning of Yitian. After reading two pages of Yitian, I no longer want to read it. I even wonder if a different writer has changed since the beginning of Yitian.

Starting from the beginning again, I can't stand it anymore

The most annoying thing about novels is that one person gets to know everyone around him, and all of them are better than the protagonist.

I can't stand it anymore, I keep talking about science, you've traveled through time and you still talk about science, how can you understand?

We were told to reopen a few months ago, but you still don't believe it, you're probably confused. This book is full of ideas, but there is no outline. If you open copies randomly, you will be confused and create a big job before you finish writing the last world. I hope that next time it will have a beginning and an end, and it will be divided into reasonable sections.

You have a good idea, don't write the power system too high, or you will collapse. Like the story of Dragon and Snake in Menglu Shenji, which is wonderfully written, Emperor of the Galaxy is just a piece of shit, and it becomes boring when the combat power is high.

Third-rate author, third-rate novelist, third-rate master, do you hear this for yourself? I don't know which uneducated author to start with. There are so many people who follow the trend of third-rate and second-rate experts. Anyone who wants to read can follow. I can't stand it.

What kind of thing is written? It's a mess. It's not even a fraction of the last book.

The front one looks pretty good, but I feel like I can't understand the back one, it's so confusing.

The writing is messy, and those who don't know it think you are promoting martial arts and want us to practice martial arts. Why do you want to be a Taoist master? Messy

What the hell is this author writing about? Is this author going to get into a car accident? Is this a eunuch?